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I sorced this! Wipsenade ( talk) 15:57, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
I reviewed this article and found it comprehensive, all I did was move around some subsections to make the article look cleaner and flow smoother. Iginsberg ( talk) 20:41, 30 October 2017 (UTC)
Hey its Emily! I did a general grammar/spell check edit of your article, and improved some syntax where I thought the flow was a little broken. I also changed "recorded food plants" to "food resources" to comply with Wikipedia standards, and included a sentence about these being the recorded ones. Just a heads up, you still have a citation missing early on in your article- I'm not sure where it came from, so I can't add it, but I also don't want to delete it yet!
Emilykh26 ( talk) 23:25, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Moid.ali: I added all new content to the page aside from the existing section on "Recorded food plants". My upload was originally recoded as coming from an IP address since I was not logged in. I copy and pasted my entry again once logged in to ensure that it is recoded as my contribution.
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I sorced this! Wipsenade ( talk) 15:57, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
I reviewed this article and found it comprehensive, all I did was move around some subsections to make the article look cleaner and flow smoother. Iginsberg ( talk) 20:41, 30 October 2017 (UTC)
Hey its Emily! I did a general grammar/spell check edit of your article, and improved some syntax where I thought the flow was a little broken. I also changed "recorded food plants" to "food resources" to comply with Wikipedia standards, and included a sentence about these being the recorded ones. Just a heads up, you still have a citation missing early on in your article- I'm not sure where it came from, so I can't add it, but I also don't want to delete it yet!
Emilykh26 ( talk) 23:25, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Moid.ali: I added all new content to the page aside from the existing section on "Recorded food plants". My upload was originally recoded as coming from an IP address since I was not logged in. I copy and pasted my entry again once logged in to ensure that it is recoded as my contribution.