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"pandemic-induced malaise" is not sourced in the body, only pandemic-induced loneliness
"also picked it as a" → "picked the song as a"
"Commercially, "Blue & Grey" became a," → "Commercially, the song became a,"
"and at number 9 on the" → "and number 9 on the"
"It entered the charts" → "It further entered the charts"
The number of countries listed in the above sentence is too much and reads like a supermarket list; instead, mention the number of them outside of the US it charted in and write "including Hungary and South Korea" afterwards or something similar that pinpoints two countries it charted highly in
Done all
Background and release
Img looks good, apart from the wikilink on BTS
Remove target on Be
Why are the producers ordered differently hear than in the lead?
"at the latter's studio where" → "at the latter's studio, where"
"together. "Blue & Grey" was" → "together; "Blue & Grey" was" since the two sentences need merging because they are too short currently
Change the last sentence to ""Blue & Grey" was released on November 20, 2020 as the third track on Be." or something similar, as it is delving into too much detail that the song was released for digital download and streaming as part of the album
Done
Music and lyrics
Add the Stereogum ref to the audio sample text since that backs up the soft part plus wikilink
pop ballad per MOS:LINK2SECT
"The lyrics address themes of" → "The lyrics address themes that include"
""Blue & Grey" is a" → "Musically, "Blue & Grey" is a"
On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but it is fresh to take one of your articles on again and this is a good effort! --
K. Peake17:23, 15 January 2021 (UTC)reply
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Pop music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of articles related to
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Songs, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Korea, a collaborative effort to build and improve articles related to Korea. All interested editors are invited to
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"pandemic-induced malaise" is not sourced in the body, only pandemic-induced loneliness
"also picked it as a" → "picked the song as a"
"Commercially, "Blue & Grey" became a," → "Commercially, the song became a,"
"and at number 9 on the" → "and number 9 on the"
"It entered the charts" → "It further entered the charts"
The number of countries listed in the above sentence is too much and reads like a supermarket list; instead, mention the number of them outside of the US it charted in and write "including Hungary and South Korea" afterwards or something similar that pinpoints two countries it charted highly in
Done all
Background and release
Img looks good, apart from the wikilink on BTS
Remove target on Be
Why are the producers ordered differently hear than in the lead?
"at the latter's studio where" → "at the latter's studio, where"
"together. "Blue & Grey" was" → "together; "Blue & Grey" was" since the two sentences need merging because they are too short currently
Change the last sentence to ""Blue & Grey" was released on November 20, 2020 as the third track on Be." or something similar, as it is delving into too much detail that the song was released for digital download and streaming as part of the album
Done
Music and lyrics
Add the Stereogum ref to the audio sample text since that backs up the soft part plus wikilink
pop ballad per MOS:LINK2SECT
"The lyrics address themes of" → "The lyrics address themes that include"
""Blue & Grey" is a" → "Musically, "Blue & Grey" is a"
On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but it is fresh to take one of your articles on again and this is a good effort! --
K. Peake17:23, 15 January 2021 (UTC)reply
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.