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Reviewer: Tortle ( talk · contribs) 05:31, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
The main issue to me with this article is the long lead section. It needs to be concise. I will only mark this as a good article if the lead section is shorter in lengh than the infobox to it's right and if someone turns the hitler quote into a block quote. If anyone has any issues with this article that you believe I overlooked, nows the time to let me know so I can add those in.
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Hi HappyWanderer15. I just referred to the infobox to help as a reference point to make it easy to understand how long it should be but ignore what I said because youre right, it changes for everybody. So the main issue with the lead is that an article of this length should have 2-4 lead paragraphs and this has 5. The lead gets too in depth and needs to be shortened. As for experience, I am new but I do have a lot of experience from a few years back when I had a different account. Tortle ( talk) 18:24, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Tortle ( talk · contribs) 05:31, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
The main issue to me with this article is the long lead section. It needs to be concise. I will only mark this as a good article if the lead section is shorter in lengh than the infobox to it's right and if someone turns the hitler quote into a block quote. If anyone has any issues with this article that you believe I overlooked, nows the time to let me know so I can add those in.
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06:29, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi HappyWanderer15. I just referred to the infobox to help as a reference point to make it easy to understand how long it should be but ignore what I said because youre right, it changes for everybody. So the main issue with the lead is that an article of this length should have 2-4 lead paragraphs and this has 5. The lead gets too in depth and needs to be shortened. As for experience, I am new but I do have a lot of experience from a few years back when I had a different account. Tortle ( talk) 18:24, 26 August 2015 (UTC)