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Reviewer: Dana boomer ( talk) 20:14, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
Disambig page: Far East Command
In the lead and I know why but you interchange South Korea and Republic of Korea. Choose one of them and put in brackets next to it formerly or now known as... You continue to interchange in the main prose. Make a choice and stick with it.
Also in the lead with the other battle second para. State that it was a nearby battle and therefore had consequences on the battle your talking about. But its rather confusing what you are talking about. A separte battle or a fight within the same battle. Clarity needed. KnowIG ( talk) 21:58, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
battalion of artillery from the NK 4th Division, gave it unusual weapon support. What was unusual
Careful when describing positioning. Easy to get confused when you chuck this regement of this group etc when you haven't talked about 1 side for a bit. also that map is not that detailed so really be careful. Maybe a bit too much descriptiveness which maybe unneeded. So you may want to use full names more often just to aid the reader.
Since the destroyed Pershing tanks blocked fields of fire, four others withdrew to better positions. 4 what? tanks.
but Walker did not feel the inexperienced. That the
KnowIG ( talk) 22:18, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
Will the above issues be addressed soon? Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:29, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
Because KnowIG has been indef blocked, I will be picking up this review, if it is acceptable to the nominator. Comments shortly... Dana boomer ( talk) 17:04, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
Overall a nice article. A few comments regarding prose and a couple of referencing tweaks that need to be made, so I am placing the article on hold. Please let me know if you have any questions. Dana boomer ( talk) 20:14, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
The location of this battle is Yangsan not Yongsan. Yongsan (용산) is a district of Seoul bordering the Han River. Yangsan (양산) is a city just north of Busan and east of Miryang. Not only is this location being referenced incorrectly in the title and body but all linked instances of the name are pointing to the actual Yongsan up in Seoul. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 138.163.106.72 ( talk) 15:52, 13 August 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Dana boomer ( talk) 20:14, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
Disambig page: Far East Command
In the lead and I know why but you interchange South Korea and Republic of Korea. Choose one of them and put in brackets next to it formerly or now known as... You continue to interchange in the main prose. Make a choice and stick with it.
Also in the lead with the other battle second para. State that it was a nearby battle and therefore had consequences on the battle your talking about. But its rather confusing what you are talking about. A separte battle or a fight within the same battle. Clarity needed. KnowIG ( talk) 21:58, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
battalion of artillery from the NK 4th Division, gave it unusual weapon support. What was unusual
Careful when describing positioning. Easy to get confused when you chuck this regement of this group etc when you haven't talked about 1 side for a bit. also that map is not that detailed so really be careful. Maybe a bit too much descriptiveness which maybe unneeded. So you may want to use full names more often just to aid the reader.
Since the destroyed Pershing tanks blocked fields of fire, four others withdrew to better positions. 4 what? tanks.
but Walker did not feel the inexperienced. That the
KnowIG ( talk) 22:18, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
Will the above issues be addressed soon? Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:29, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
Because KnowIG has been indef blocked, I will be picking up this review, if it is acceptable to the nominator. Comments shortly... Dana boomer ( talk) 17:04, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
Overall a nice article. A few comments regarding prose and a couple of referencing tweaks that need to be made, so I am placing the article on hold. Please let me know if you have any questions. Dana boomer ( talk) 20:14, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
The location of this battle is Yangsan not Yongsan. Yongsan (용산) is a district of Seoul bordering the Han River. Yangsan (양산) is a city just north of Busan and east of Miryang. Not only is this location being referenced incorrectly in the title and body but all linked instances of the name are pointing to the actual Yongsan up in Seoul. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 138.163.106.72 ( talk) 15:52, 13 August 2015 (UTC)