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This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as stub, and the rating on other projects was brought up to Stub class. BetacommandBot 09:02, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
Four ships from Creutz' and Uggla's squadron immediately fled when they saw that the flagship was lost.
Presume author means 'fleet' rather than 'squadron'.....or does he/she? Could mean 4 each from their two separate squadrons..... I don't know! In any case, 4 (or 8?) seems almost too precise......is it from the comission's report? Well, I went ahead and changed it to:
Several ships immediately fled when they saw that the flagship was lost.
˜˜˜˜ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tomseattle ( talk • contribs) 12:17, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
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I'll get to this review shortly.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 09:01, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
I'll resume this tomorrow. Cheers-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 16:33, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
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This concludes my remarks regarding this GAN. There are few unclear bits of prose, a date format issue and a referencing question regarding composition of the fleets. Cheers.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 12:43, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
Before taking the article to FAC, I'd definitely suggest submitting it to Military History A-class review at WP:MHR.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 12:45, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
Thanks for correcting these points, which ever way you prefer. -- Mirokado ( talk) 01:15, 13 October 2014 (UTC)
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This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as stub, and the rating on other projects was brought up to Stub class. BetacommandBot 09:02, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
Four ships from Creutz' and Uggla's squadron immediately fled when they saw that the flagship was lost.
Presume author means 'fleet' rather than 'squadron'.....or does he/she? Could mean 4 each from their two separate squadrons..... I don't know! In any case, 4 (or 8?) seems almost too precise......is it from the comission's report? Well, I went ahead and changed it to:
Several ships immediately fled when they saw that the flagship was lost.
˜˜˜˜ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tomseattle ( talk • contribs) 12:17, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Tomobe03 ( talk · contribs) 09:01, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
I'll get to this review shortly.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 09:01, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
I'll resume this tomorrow. Cheers-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 16:33, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
Prose and MOS:
Referencing:
This concludes my remarks regarding this GAN. There are few unclear bits of prose, a date format issue and a referencing question regarding composition of the fleets. Cheers.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 12:43, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
Before taking the article to FAC, I'd definitely suggest submitting it to Military History A-class review at WP:MHR.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 12:45, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
Thanks for correcting these points, which ever way you prefer. -- Mirokado ( talk) 01:15, 13 October 2014 (UTC)