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The overuse of commas needs to be addressed. For example, the following sentences: "The game features a main plot, and a subplot. Side missions were made available, instead of an open world concept." Neither of those commas should be there as they disrupt the flow of the sentence. There is no need to use a comma to separate two similar ideas such as plot and subplot. Also, the word "instead" serves to join the two ideas and is used in lieu of a comma, and should not be used along with one.
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Can this be mentioned in the sales section? Timur9008 ( talk) 06:10, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
The lead of the article states that the narrative was praised, but the only quote discussing the narrative criticizes it. Either new quotes or a change to the lead should be done for coherence. WesPhil ( talk) 12:24, 5 July 2022 (UTC)
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Can this be mentioned in the sales section? Timur9008 ( talk) 06:10, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
The lead of the article states that the narrative was praised, but the only quote discussing the narrative criticizes it. Either new quotes or a change to the lead should be done for coherence. WesPhil ( talk) 12:24, 5 July 2022 (UTC)