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Bad and biased writing

The article gradually becomes more promotional. Phrasing like "was awarded the distinction of being the best rum in the world" is not only vague but an advertisement.

Wikipedia readers like me are glad when companies provide source material like this to augment Wikipedia's breadth. Still, the writing needs editing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 174.3.27.108 ( talk) 05:59, 5 June 2011 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Bad and biased writing

The article gradually becomes more promotional. Phrasing like "was awarded the distinction of being the best rum in the world" is not only vague but an advertisement.

Wikipedia readers like me are glad when companies provide source material like this to augment Wikipedia's breadth. Still, the writing needs editing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 174.3.27.108 ( talk) 05:59, 5 June 2011 (UTC) reply


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