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Lead paragraph length

@ Ravenswing:, please detail your concerns why the lead is too long, and make specific suggestions as to what could be shortened. I feel the introduction is adequate according to MOS:LEADLENGTH. Thank you. Flibirigit ( talk) 15:44, 18 March 2021 (UTC) reply

The introduction has been slightly shortened. I still feel it is adequate according to MOS:LEADLENGTH, and is inclusive of all essential details. Flibirigit ( talk) 15:33, 4 May 2021 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Lead paragraph length

@ Ravenswing:, please detail your concerns why the lead is too long, and make specific suggestions as to what could be shortened. I feel the introduction is adequate according to MOS:LEADLENGTH. Thank you. Flibirigit ( talk) 15:44, 18 March 2021 (UTC) reply

The introduction has been slightly shortened. I still feel it is adequate according to MOS:LEADLENGTH, and is inclusive of all essential details. Flibirigit ( talk) 15:33, 4 May 2021 (UTC) reply

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