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The main contributor to this article asserts Mansouri attained a degree from Harvard and has added two links as refs to that effect. However, neither link mentions Mansouri at all. Adding details like attending one of the most prestigious universities without citation is an example of puffery and aggrandizing the subject of the article, which is a concern for Biographies of Living Persons (BLPs). JesseRafe ( talk) 20:15, 11 October 2017 (UTC)
https://www.hks.harvard.edu/more/alumni/get-connected/classnotes/summer-2017 Fashionnews2012 ( talk) 21:37, 11 October 2017 (UTC)
https://idesignawards.com/winners/zoom2.php?eid=9-7307-14 Fashionnews2012 ( talk) 21:37, 11 October 2017 (UTC)
The main contributor to the article has insisted on including, as a whole section, a non-notable film. The film description is poorly written and consists almost entirely of weasel words, "A Luxurious vision of Love wrapped in Mystery," and then doubles-down on some egregious descriptions of the accolades the film supposedly won -- from non-notable entities, wikilinking the word award for good measure. This is textbook undue weight, the subject is not known as a film director and the film is not notable. If a good source can be found, this could be a sentence in her career section. The Costume Designer's Guild magazine is an industry magazine and has few details about the film or the awards and is probably not a reliable source. The other ref is a Facebook post which just links to a YouTube video. The description from the YT video is the exact same verbiage used here on Wikipedia and was uploaded by YT user "Arefeh Fashion", so either it is a copyright violation or the YT user Arefeh Fashion and WP user Fashionnews2012 are the same person, marking this as a case of COI/NPOV. JesseRafe ( talk) 20:22, 11 October 2017 (UTC)
Fashionnews2012 ( talk) 21:38, 11 October 2017 (UTC)
Jesse Thank you for editing this article. Since you gave the article a massive clean up please remove the tags. Fashionnews2012 ( talk) 20:32, 12 October 2017 (UTC)
Remove tags Fashionnews2012 ( talk) 18:30, 16 October 2017 (UTC)
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The main contributor to this article asserts Mansouri attained a degree from Harvard and has added two links as refs to that effect. However, neither link mentions Mansouri at all. Adding details like attending one of the most prestigious universities without citation is an example of puffery and aggrandizing the subject of the article, which is a concern for Biographies of Living Persons (BLPs). JesseRafe ( talk) 20:15, 11 October 2017 (UTC)
https://www.hks.harvard.edu/more/alumni/get-connected/classnotes/summer-2017 Fashionnews2012 ( talk) 21:37, 11 October 2017 (UTC)
https://idesignawards.com/winners/zoom2.php?eid=9-7307-14 Fashionnews2012 ( talk) 21:37, 11 October 2017 (UTC)
The main contributor to the article has insisted on including, as a whole section, a non-notable film. The film description is poorly written and consists almost entirely of weasel words, "A Luxurious vision of Love wrapped in Mystery," and then doubles-down on some egregious descriptions of the accolades the film supposedly won -- from non-notable entities, wikilinking the word award for good measure. This is textbook undue weight, the subject is not known as a film director and the film is not notable. If a good source can be found, this could be a sentence in her career section. The Costume Designer's Guild magazine is an industry magazine and has few details about the film or the awards and is probably not a reliable source. The other ref is a Facebook post which just links to a YouTube video. The description from the YT video is the exact same verbiage used here on Wikipedia and was uploaded by YT user "Arefeh Fashion", so either it is a copyright violation or the YT user Arefeh Fashion and WP user Fashionnews2012 are the same person, marking this as a case of COI/NPOV. JesseRafe ( talk) 20:22, 11 October 2017 (UTC)
Fashionnews2012 ( talk) 21:38, 11 October 2017 (UTC)
Jesse Thank you for editing this article. Since you gave the article a massive clean up please remove the tags. Fashionnews2012 ( talk) 20:32, 12 October 2017 (UTC)
Remove tags Fashionnews2012 ( talk) 18:30, 16 October 2017 (UTC)