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Reviewer: Ravenswing ( talk • message • contribs • count • logs • email) 21:16, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
There's also the very ungrammatical usage of quotation marks as apparent emphasis: "the two were walking in a "blizzard" ..." "moved to a subsidized shelter in a "rough" neighbourhood ..." So far, not so good. ῲ Ravenswing ῴ 21:16, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
Stewart played minor hockey for the North York Canadians. He played so well that the cost of his hockey was subsidized personally by the head of the organization. With Stewart on the team the Canadians won three All-Ontario championships After finishing his minor hockey career Stewart was selected in the first round of the Ontario Hockey League (OHL) draft by the Kingston Frontenacs. In his fist season in the OHL Stewart scored 19 goals and 43 points. In the 2002–03 season Stewart increased his production, recording 38 goals and 70 points and added seven more points in five playoff games. In the off season Stewart became captain of the Frontenacs and was drafted in the first round of the NHL draft. Going into the 2003 NHL Entry Draft Stewart was rated as the 19 best prospect for North American skaters. With their second first round draft pick, the 25th overall, the Florida Panthers selected Stewart. The following season Stewart's productions dripped to 58 points but, he scored a career high 35 goals, as the Frontenacs missed the playoffs. Stewart attended the Panthers training camp prior to the start of the 2004–05 OHL season. He had an impressive camp but was sent back to juniors to help his growth as a player. In his last OHL season Stewart led Kingston in scoring with 67 points. The Frontenacs missed the playoffs for the second straight year, as such Stewart played made his professional debut, playing 10 games for the American Hockey League's (AHL) San Antonio Rampage. He scored a goal and two assists during his 10 game stint.
That would be too many errors to support an article for GA were they all the errors the article had, let alone those in a single paragraph. Ravenswing 11:47, 11 September 2011 (UTC)
I am going to with draw the nomination at this point. The article is waiting for a CE which may take a while and I'm on a bit of a Wiki break, so I can't guarantee that I'll see any changes made to the article or anything that will need to be done to promote the article after the CE is done. Plus with the new season approaching there may be more information available about career highlights and personal information in the 2011-12 Cains media guide that I might be able to find online and add in. After this article receives a CE I will consider taking it back to GA.
Thanks for your time in reviewing the article to this point.-- Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 20:09, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
I see you removed the information in the article about Anthony getting Chris back into hockey. While I understand your concerns that it's a lot to do with Chris it also shows Anthony's impact on Chris' life. It's Anthony who convinces Chris to give hockey another try and Anthony who get's him a try-out. While it is Chris who ultimately has to make the team and do something with the opportunity, it is Anthony who gives him that opportunity. I think that this can be included in the article because it does show Anthony's impact on Chris' life. While we'll never know if he would have been a professional football player we do know that his life was significantly changed by Anthony's intervening. I might be able to trim it down some to keep the focus on Anthony's part in the story but would want to include his draft info since Anthony has called it "was one of the proudest moments in his career"
I re-added the information about Chris currently playing in the NHL since it is common practice to mention a sibling playing professionally in the personal section of hockey players.-- Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 16:53, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
Please be aware of the "deadurl=no" parameter setting of {{ cite web}} and use it when the original is still live. I have placed it on ref[1] to show how. It is also needed on refs 5,8,10,12,13,14 and 16; probably also on some later ones, but I haven't checked beyond 16.
WebCite still isn't giving anything; you might like to consider looking for archives at web.archive.org/web/*/X where X is the original URL, as I've found these to be quite reliable. Please note that WebCite thinks that the archive link for ref[2] is an archive of search.yahoo.com. The originals of refs 2 and 10 are dead. Again, I haven't checked beyond 16. -- Stfg ( talk) 14:58, 11 October 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Ravenswing ( talk • message • contribs • count • logs • email) 21:16, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
There's also the very ungrammatical usage of quotation marks as apparent emphasis: "the two were walking in a "blizzard" ..." "moved to a subsidized shelter in a "rough" neighbourhood ..." So far, not so good. ῲ Ravenswing ῴ 21:16, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
Stewart played minor hockey for the North York Canadians. He played so well that the cost of his hockey was subsidized personally by the head of the organization. With Stewart on the team the Canadians won three All-Ontario championships After finishing his minor hockey career Stewart was selected in the first round of the Ontario Hockey League (OHL) draft by the Kingston Frontenacs. In his fist season in the OHL Stewart scored 19 goals and 43 points. In the 2002–03 season Stewart increased his production, recording 38 goals and 70 points and added seven more points in five playoff games. In the off season Stewart became captain of the Frontenacs and was drafted in the first round of the NHL draft. Going into the 2003 NHL Entry Draft Stewart was rated as the 19 best prospect for North American skaters. With their second first round draft pick, the 25th overall, the Florida Panthers selected Stewart. The following season Stewart's productions dripped to 58 points but, he scored a career high 35 goals, as the Frontenacs missed the playoffs. Stewart attended the Panthers training camp prior to the start of the 2004–05 OHL season. He had an impressive camp but was sent back to juniors to help his growth as a player. In his last OHL season Stewart led Kingston in scoring with 67 points. The Frontenacs missed the playoffs for the second straight year, as such Stewart played made his professional debut, playing 10 games for the American Hockey League's (AHL) San Antonio Rampage. He scored a goal and two assists during his 10 game stint.
That would be too many errors to support an article for GA were they all the errors the article had, let alone those in a single paragraph. Ravenswing 11:47, 11 September 2011 (UTC)
I am going to with draw the nomination at this point. The article is waiting for a CE which may take a while and I'm on a bit of a Wiki break, so I can't guarantee that I'll see any changes made to the article or anything that will need to be done to promote the article after the CE is done. Plus with the new season approaching there may be more information available about career highlights and personal information in the 2011-12 Cains media guide that I might be able to find online and add in. After this article receives a CE I will consider taking it back to GA.
Thanks for your time in reviewing the article to this point.-- Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 20:09, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
I see you removed the information in the article about Anthony getting Chris back into hockey. While I understand your concerns that it's a lot to do with Chris it also shows Anthony's impact on Chris' life. It's Anthony who convinces Chris to give hockey another try and Anthony who get's him a try-out. While it is Chris who ultimately has to make the team and do something with the opportunity, it is Anthony who gives him that opportunity. I think that this can be included in the article because it does show Anthony's impact on Chris' life. While we'll never know if he would have been a professional football player we do know that his life was significantly changed by Anthony's intervening. I might be able to trim it down some to keep the focus on Anthony's part in the story but would want to include his draft info since Anthony has called it "was one of the proudest moments in his career"
I re-added the information about Chris currently playing in the NHL since it is common practice to mention a sibling playing professionally in the personal section of hockey players.-- Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 16:53, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
Please be aware of the "deadurl=no" parameter setting of {{ cite web}} and use it when the original is still live. I have placed it on ref[1] to show how. It is also needed on refs 5,8,10,12,13,14 and 16; probably also on some later ones, but I haven't checked beyond 16.
WebCite still isn't giving anything; you might like to consider looking for archives at web.archive.org/web/*/X where X is the original URL, as I've found these to be quite reliable. Please note that WebCite thinks that the archive link for ref[2] is an archive of search.yahoo.com. The originals of refs 2 and 10 are dead. Again, I haven't checked beyond 16. -- Stfg ( talk) 14:58, 11 October 2011 (UTC)
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