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@ Mmbeenen
".. She was (one of) the first Dutch woman speed skater who became notable .."
I suggest reconsider above sentence some thing like:
".. While Trijntje Pieters Westra and Trijntje Reidinga were first generation Dutch women speed skaters from first half of nineteenth century; Beenen was among notable Dutch woman speed skater in second half of nineteenth century. .."
".. Jouke Schaap rode with IJmkje Veldman from Uitwellingerga and finished second in Heerenveen. They would become one of the best couples and competed about ten years until 1881, and won many prizes; not only in Friesland but also in North Holland, South Holland and Groningen. Especially in their first winter of 1870-71 they were very successful, and won among others the second prize in Bolsward, 1st prize in Heerenveen (3 January 1871, f 150) and the first prize in Amsterdam (31 January 1871, f 150). ..
Bookku (
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11:35, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
Good point, pair skating is probably confused with figure skating. It seems speed skating in pairs or pair speed skating could be the correct way to write it: https://www.nbcolympics.com/news/speed-skating-101-competition-format. Mmbeenen ( talk) 16:09, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
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@ Mmbeenen
".. She was (one of) the first Dutch woman speed skater who became notable .."
I suggest reconsider above sentence some thing like:
".. While Trijntje Pieters Westra and Trijntje Reidinga were first generation Dutch women speed skaters from first half of nineteenth century; Beenen was among notable Dutch woman speed skater in second half of nineteenth century. .."
".. Jouke Schaap rode with IJmkje Veldman from Uitwellingerga and finished second in Heerenveen. They would become one of the best couples and competed about ten years until 1881, and won many prizes; not only in Friesland but also in North Holland, South Holland and Groningen. Especially in their first winter of 1870-71 they were very successful, and won among others the second prize in Bolsward, 1st prize in Heerenveen (3 January 1871, f 150) and the first prize in Amsterdam (31 January 1871, f 150). ..
Bookku (
talk)
11:35, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
Good point, pair skating is probably confused with figure skating. It seems speed skating in pairs or pair speed skating could be the correct way to write it: https://www.nbcolympics.com/news/speed-skating-101-competition-format. Mmbeenen ( talk) 16:09, 29 July 2024 (UTC)