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I don't want to edit war, and I don't really give two squirts if this article stays or goes, but the long list of products is completely unnecessary and should be removed. Tan ǀ 39 18:15, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
Hi all! Firstly, I think this is a good choice of subject. There are some things to be careful about when writing about a company:
I will be watching this article, so I'll let you get started and post back if I see anything else I want to comment on. Feel free to ask any questions you may have, and have fun! sonia♫ 18:48, 17 October 2010 (UTC)
I agree with Sonia, that why the company is important should be expanded upon. I added a small segment about Alpura's recent work in the fresh dairy market. Unless things are radically different in Mexico City than they are here in Oaxaca, something should be said about how milk has been traditionally sold in Mexico as a boxed, unrefrigerated product. Most people reading this article will be from the US, Canada and United Kingdom, and in these countries milk is almost exclusively sold as a fresh, refrigerated product.
From a quick google search, there seems to be ample information available on the history of Alpura in WP:RS spanish-language articles. The history of the company should be expanded to help establish why Alpura is important.
Let me know if you all have any questions. I will watch this page. -- nsaum75 ¡שיחת! 19:39, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for the comment and the advice also by helping us in our partial project. Just right now we are working on the Out line and will soon begin to develop the first draft. MarioAlvarez05 ( talk) 22:14, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
“ | Hi, i am not subscriped in any program of mentors, but i would like you to be my tutor and help me. For our final projct we have to choose a topic and writte an article in Wikipedia. We were thinking about a comany in Mexico city, what do you thik?? tkanks
MontseSalin (
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I popped in and made some changes to the Values section. When you repeat the citation of a source, you use something like <ref name="Alpura"/> instead of repeating the long form. It is also problematic to use the company's own website, as it is not considered a reliable source. Please stick to sources written by others about the company. Thelmadatter ( talk) 02:09, 22 October 2010 (UTC)
The mission, vision and values can be from the company's page? That information should came from there, shouldn't it? We'll check the rest information. ALauBeltran ( talk) 23:08, 24 October 2010 (UTC)
hi how are you??? my team and i already wrote a first draft on he article of the alpura comany, i was hopping you could check it , and giv me some corrections. Could you please write me in the discussion page od the alpura article. thanksMontseSalin (talk) 00:20, 26 October 2010 (UTC) MontseSalin ( talk) 00:33, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
I hope these comments help. -- Alpha Quadrant talk 01:13, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for all your comments, we'll correct all the mistakes and try to improve our Wikipedia writing :) ALauBeltran ( talk) 01:23, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
The products section should probably be simplified. Instead of listing every flavor of every product they offer, it should be rewritten to state what their major products are. -- nsaum75 ¡שיחת! 05:28, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
You need to go over this article again carefully. There are too many sections and far too much of tone of this is not objective and sounds like a commercial. Do not try to convince anyone that the company is great. Just give the information. Thelmadatter ( talk) 14:19, 5 November 2010 (UTC)
Thank you for all your comments. We are working on the corrections :) ALauBeltran ( talk) 15:16, 8 November 2010 (UTC)
In the History section there is a parenthetical explanation of the ultra pasteurized 2000 milk. The words are: "(chemically storage from temperature)". I think the process that you ought to be referring to is Ultra-high-temperature processing which results in food products with several months of shelf life without refrigeration. The words "(chemically storage from temperature)" lead me to wonder if Alpura actually adds a chemical such as sodium hypochlorite to its product to preserve it. I would make the change myself to ([[ultra-high-temperature processing]]) but I am not certain of the facts and can provide no reference. -- Fartherred ( talk) 19:49, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
Concerning the Tetra top package there is a sentence: "It can be printed on all packaging." Is this intended to mean that the packaging can be printed with the product label before the product is packaged, or should it mean that printing can be done on the entire package surface? What is this article trying to state? -- Fartherred ( talk) 21:17, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
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I don't want to edit war, and I don't really give two squirts if this article stays or goes, but the long list of products is completely unnecessary and should be removed. Tan ǀ 39 18:15, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
Hi all! Firstly, I think this is a good choice of subject. There are some things to be careful about when writing about a company:
I will be watching this article, so I'll let you get started and post back if I see anything else I want to comment on. Feel free to ask any questions you may have, and have fun! sonia♫ 18:48, 17 October 2010 (UTC)
I agree with Sonia, that why the company is important should be expanded upon. I added a small segment about Alpura's recent work in the fresh dairy market. Unless things are radically different in Mexico City than they are here in Oaxaca, something should be said about how milk has been traditionally sold in Mexico as a boxed, unrefrigerated product. Most people reading this article will be from the US, Canada and United Kingdom, and in these countries milk is almost exclusively sold as a fresh, refrigerated product.
From a quick google search, there seems to be ample information available on the history of Alpura in WP:RS spanish-language articles. The history of the company should be expanded to help establish why Alpura is important.
Let me know if you all have any questions. I will watch this page. -- nsaum75 ¡שיחת! 19:39, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for the comment and the advice also by helping us in our partial project. Just right now we are working on the Out line and will soon begin to develop the first draft. MarioAlvarez05 ( talk) 22:14, 18 October 2010 (UTC)
“ | Hi, i am not subscriped in any program of mentors, but i would like you to be my tutor and help me. For our final projct we have to choose a topic and writte an article in Wikipedia. We were thinking about a comany in Mexico city, what do you thik?? tkanks
MontseSalin (
talk) 22:24, 14 October 2010 (UTC)
|
” |
I popped in and made some changes to the Values section. When you repeat the citation of a source, you use something like <ref name="Alpura"/> instead of repeating the long form. It is also problematic to use the company's own website, as it is not considered a reliable source. Please stick to sources written by others about the company. Thelmadatter ( talk) 02:09, 22 October 2010 (UTC)
The mission, vision and values can be from the company's page? That information should came from there, shouldn't it? We'll check the rest information. ALauBeltran ( talk) 23:08, 24 October 2010 (UTC)
hi how are you??? my team and i already wrote a first draft on he article of the alpura comany, i was hopping you could check it , and giv me some corrections. Could you please write me in the discussion page od the alpura article. thanksMontseSalin (talk) 00:20, 26 October 2010 (UTC) MontseSalin ( talk) 00:33, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
I hope these comments help. -- Alpha Quadrant talk 01:13, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for all your comments, we'll correct all the mistakes and try to improve our Wikipedia writing :) ALauBeltran ( talk) 01:23, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
The products section should probably be simplified. Instead of listing every flavor of every product they offer, it should be rewritten to state what their major products are. -- nsaum75 ¡שיחת! 05:28, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
You need to go over this article again carefully. There are too many sections and far too much of tone of this is not objective and sounds like a commercial. Do not try to convince anyone that the company is great. Just give the information. Thelmadatter ( talk) 14:19, 5 November 2010 (UTC)
Thank you for all your comments. We are working on the corrections :) ALauBeltran ( talk) 15:16, 8 November 2010 (UTC)
In the History section there is a parenthetical explanation of the ultra pasteurized 2000 milk. The words are: "(chemically storage from temperature)". I think the process that you ought to be referring to is Ultra-high-temperature processing which results in food products with several months of shelf life without refrigeration. The words "(chemically storage from temperature)" lead me to wonder if Alpura actually adds a chemical such as sodium hypochlorite to its product to preserve it. I would make the change myself to ([[ultra-high-temperature processing]]) but I am not certain of the facts and can provide no reference. -- Fartherred ( talk) 19:49, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
Concerning the Tetra top package there is a sentence: "It can be printed on all packaging." Is this intended to mean that the packaging can be printed with the product label before the product is packaged, or should it mean that printing can be done on the entire package surface? What is this article trying to state? -- Fartherred ( talk) 21:17, 12 November 2010 (UTC)