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Major Content Edits: One note about editing content: If you are affiliated with ABADÁ, I recommend passing any huge changes through an Instructor/a or higher before posting them. EDS4 ( talk) 05:04, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
We at ABADÁ-Capoeira are proud and meticulous about our code of conduct, ethics, philosophies, and principles. We ask that anyone who is editing for content please approach a member of ABADÁ-Capoeira on this discussion page (like myself), or else get approval from a member of ABADÁ-Capoeira of the rank of at least Instrutor/a or above. Also make sure to cite any sources that you are using, even if indirectly paraphrasing. And then if you could just let us know on this discussion page, then sign your posts.
Anyone who is editing for grammar, flow, wikify purposes, etc... please just let us know in this discussion page, and sign your posts. Ryt 007 ( talk) 23:09, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
As this discussion page has grown and become somewhat unruly, I have begun archiving all month old AND resolved information into the archive template. Anything that is still in the works or being discussed will not be moved. If something is discussed that has been mentioned before, please inform this user to see the archives and come back to the discussion with any further questions or comments. Ryt 007 ( talk) 18:18, 1 July 2009 (UTC)
Both images (Mestre Camisa, and the ABADÁ-Capoeira globe icon) were downloaded from a google image search on the internet by myself. I do not know if I actually have the right to do this. I'm pretty sure the fact that I could get them and download them like this, means they are free content, and therefore legal for me to use. The globe was downloaded from the ACRPI website, that I am in fact a facilitator of (being an officer of the club). I believe I have the ultimate rights to it, and it should be fine. I'm not sure if there's anything more I can find on the topic. Please advise if I should change the way I used these. I'm sure that I'm not using images right, and I don't know how to gain permission or whatever. Help! Ryt 007 ( talk) 04:09, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
Waiting for pictures to hopefully come back from the Batizado at Arte Capoeira. If we get them, we will probably use them in the article. Ryt 007 ( talk) 23:20, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
I am currently in the process of getting explicit permission/licensed permission from "Agua Viva" and Mestranda Cigarra to use the cord images from a newsletter done by ABADÁ-SF. I have the files in a format that wiki can use. Once I have their explicit written permission I will add the files under the cat. of capoeira to the wikicommons page and then put the up on the table. This should not take much time; Just waiting on permission. EDS4 ( talk) 23:50, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
Dead links: All dead links have been weeded out. We will have to keep tabs on this. As schools change their webpages the citation links will need to be updated. I can keep tabs on this for the time being. EDS4 ( talk) 23:46, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
I will be adding in some content, making the page much more full of information. Also will be adding pictures, once I figure out how to better use the ones that are currently up. All in all, it will make the article much more informative. Main things are adding pictures to the cord system, adding pictures to the Mestres and Mestrandos, and maybe expanding the family tree a bit. We'll see how far I will go with it. Ryt 007 ( talk) 02:32, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
When I requested the cord images, ABADÁ-SF looked at the cord section and edited it, adding Grao Mestre. They did not provide a citation for this. EDS4 ( talk) 20:57, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Major current need of the article: I am going to attempt a run through of the wikification process. Already started working on the lead. So what needs to get done are the following: add any appropriate internal links (getting rid of unncessary ones), fix external links and see also sections, re order section headings if appropriate, expand the lead paragraph. Once these are done, I may add a maintenance tag, remove wikify tag, and add my edits to the page summary. ~ Ryt 007 | Talk 17:44, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
I want to change around the sequence of the sections / ordering. History should be first in an article like this. We don't really have a separate history section. Grao mestre might also want to be mentioned before Mestre Camisa, not sure. This to do item might have to be cleared through the content method of checking with an instructor. Not sure yet... Ryt 007 ( talk) 14:58, 2 July 2009 (UTC)
Their is no text under the section heading "Style, Standards, and Philosophy". I have a feeling this is against layout guidelines. I will look into this and further wikify later. ~ DominusMichael | Talk 13:39, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
Cleaned up and added a bunch of links. View the revision history of the article for more details. Not anywhere close to finished yet. PS this is Ryt 007, I just changed my user name appearance. ~ DominusMichael | Talk 13:30, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
The lead section could be improved. See wikify suggestions. Ryt 007 ( talk) 19:38, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
I removed most of the see also links. Anything that is already stated in the article should not be mentioned in see also (as stated in layout guidelines for wikification), which got rid of a lot of links. Please discuss any disagreements.
I also removed most of the external links for schools. Here is my basis: if we listed all abada schools here, the list would be way too long, and irrelevant. If we list one school, we must list all. Also, anything that has been listed in the references lists should not be in external links, removing pretty much all websites that are verifiable, which could be every school potentially. Below is the list of the links I removed, if anyone wants to keep them, please discuss.
The first link is the only one I found when I did a google search for "ABADÁ-Capoeira" and checked out only the first five pages. I added the website for ABADÁ-Capoeira Porto - Portugal because it was also their. The NC and Au websites are there just because I also removed them. I'm sure their are many more schools, hence why we shouldn't have these links lists. ~ Ryt 007 | Talk 19:06, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
Did anyone else see that someone took Mestrando Tucano Preto off of the chart? Check out the "history" tab. They claim that Tucano Preto is no longer a member of ABADA. Is this true? Anyone know what happened, and care to fill me in?? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.72.206.62 ( talk) 23:02, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
I want to add a wiktionary link. Format seen in edit. Ryt 007 ( talk) 17:11, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
I have been using the Aikido page to restructure our article. Aikido is a featured article, extremely impressive. If we can make this article and Capoeira look like that, we are amazing. Ryt 007 ( talk) 17:11, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
Their is an ABADA alaska group for alcoholism. Could be worthwhile to create an ABADA disambiguation page. Ryt 007 ( talk) 19:33, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
I am creating a Camisa Roxa page. It's my next project, but it's kind of difficult. I'm pretty sure we have spelled his name wrong. I'm not sure, I believe it is supposed to be Edvaldo Carneiro e Silva, not da Silva. ~ DominusMichael | Talk 19:02, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
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Major Content Edits: One note about editing content: If you are affiliated with ABADÁ, I recommend passing any huge changes through an Instructor/a or higher before posting them. EDS4 ( talk) 05:04, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
We at ABADÁ-Capoeira are proud and meticulous about our code of conduct, ethics, philosophies, and principles. We ask that anyone who is editing for content please approach a member of ABADÁ-Capoeira on this discussion page (like myself), or else get approval from a member of ABADÁ-Capoeira of the rank of at least Instrutor/a or above. Also make sure to cite any sources that you are using, even if indirectly paraphrasing. And then if you could just let us know on this discussion page, then sign your posts.
Anyone who is editing for grammar, flow, wikify purposes, etc... please just let us know in this discussion page, and sign your posts. Ryt 007 ( talk) 23:09, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
As this discussion page has grown and become somewhat unruly, I have begun archiving all month old AND resolved information into the archive template. Anything that is still in the works or being discussed will not be moved. If something is discussed that has been mentioned before, please inform this user to see the archives and come back to the discussion with any further questions or comments. Ryt 007 ( talk) 18:18, 1 July 2009 (UTC)
Both images (Mestre Camisa, and the ABADÁ-Capoeira globe icon) were downloaded from a google image search on the internet by myself. I do not know if I actually have the right to do this. I'm pretty sure the fact that I could get them and download them like this, means they are free content, and therefore legal for me to use. The globe was downloaded from the ACRPI website, that I am in fact a facilitator of (being an officer of the club). I believe I have the ultimate rights to it, and it should be fine. I'm not sure if there's anything more I can find on the topic. Please advise if I should change the way I used these. I'm sure that I'm not using images right, and I don't know how to gain permission or whatever. Help! Ryt 007 ( talk) 04:09, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
Waiting for pictures to hopefully come back from the Batizado at Arte Capoeira. If we get them, we will probably use them in the article. Ryt 007 ( talk) 23:20, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
I am currently in the process of getting explicit permission/licensed permission from "Agua Viva" and Mestranda Cigarra to use the cord images from a newsletter done by ABADÁ-SF. I have the files in a format that wiki can use. Once I have their explicit written permission I will add the files under the cat. of capoeira to the wikicommons page and then put the up on the table. This should not take much time; Just waiting on permission. EDS4 ( talk) 23:50, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
Dead links: All dead links have been weeded out. We will have to keep tabs on this. As schools change their webpages the citation links will need to be updated. I can keep tabs on this for the time being. EDS4 ( talk) 23:46, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
I will be adding in some content, making the page much more full of information. Also will be adding pictures, once I figure out how to better use the ones that are currently up. All in all, it will make the article much more informative. Main things are adding pictures to the cord system, adding pictures to the Mestres and Mestrandos, and maybe expanding the family tree a bit. We'll see how far I will go with it. Ryt 007 ( talk) 02:32, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
When I requested the cord images, ABADÁ-SF looked at the cord section and edited it, adding Grao Mestre. They did not provide a citation for this. EDS4 ( talk) 20:57, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Major current need of the article: I am going to attempt a run through of the wikification process. Already started working on the lead. So what needs to get done are the following: add any appropriate internal links (getting rid of unncessary ones), fix external links and see also sections, re order section headings if appropriate, expand the lead paragraph. Once these are done, I may add a maintenance tag, remove wikify tag, and add my edits to the page summary. ~ Ryt 007 | Talk 17:44, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
I want to change around the sequence of the sections / ordering. History should be first in an article like this. We don't really have a separate history section. Grao mestre might also want to be mentioned before Mestre Camisa, not sure. This to do item might have to be cleared through the content method of checking with an instructor. Not sure yet... Ryt 007 ( talk) 14:58, 2 July 2009 (UTC)
Their is no text under the section heading "Style, Standards, and Philosophy". I have a feeling this is against layout guidelines. I will look into this and further wikify later. ~ DominusMichael | Talk 13:39, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
Cleaned up and added a bunch of links. View the revision history of the article for more details. Not anywhere close to finished yet. PS this is Ryt 007, I just changed my user name appearance. ~ DominusMichael | Talk 13:30, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
The lead section could be improved. See wikify suggestions. Ryt 007 ( talk) 19:38, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
I removed most of the see also links. Anything that is already stated in the article should not be mentioned in see also (as stated in layout guidelines for wikification), which got rid of a lot of links. Please discuss any disagreements.
I also removed most of the external links for schools. Here is my basis: if we listed all abada schools here, the list would be way too long, and irrelevant. If we list one school, we must list all. Also, anything that has been listed in the references lists should not be in external links, removing pretty much all websites that are verifiable, which could be every school potentially. Below is the list of the links I removed, if anyone wants to keep them, please discuss.
The first link is the only one I found when I did a google search for "ABADÁ-Capoeira" and checked out only the first five pages. I added the website for ABADÁ-Capoeira Porto - Portugal because it was also their. The NC and Au websites are there just because I also removed them. I'm sure their are many more schools, hence why we shouldn't have these links lists. ~ Ryt 007 | Talk 19:06, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
Did anyone else see that someone took Mestrando Tucano Preto off of the chart? Check out the "history" tab. They claim that Tucano Preto is no longer a member of ABADA. Is this true? Anyone know what happened, and care to fill me in?? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.72.206.62 ( talk) 23:02, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
I want to add a wiktionary link. Format seen in edit. Ryt 007 ( talk) 17:11, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
I have been using the Aikido page to restructure our article. Aikido is a featured article, extremely impressive. If we can make this article and Capoeira look like that, we are amazing. Ryt 007 ( talk) 17:11, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
Their is an ABADA alaska group for alcoholism. Could be worthwhile to create an ABADA disambiguation page. Ryt 007 ( talk) 19:33, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
I am creating a Camisa Roxa page. It's my next project, but it's kind of difficult. I'm pretty sure we have spelled his name wrong. I'm not sure, I believe it is supposed to be Edvaldo Carneiro e Silva, not da Silva. ~ DominusMichael | Talk 19:02, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
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