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Reviewer: Ankit Maity ( talk · contribs) 12:09, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
Sorry for delayed reply. Thanks Ankit for coming up and reviewing the nomination. Will you mind if you can let me know what are the necessary fixes I should work on the article? I believe that your review wasn't a detailed one and can be worked on after fixing few problems. -- ♪Karthik♫ ♪Nadar♫ 16:36, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
In addition to the issues raised in Point 1 (and the peer reviewer), I have a few more suggestions:
User:Wasifwasif is adding unreliable sources to make changes to A. P. J. Abdul Kalam's religion. He is asked to refrain from doing and use talkpage to discuss the matter. Thanks-- Neelkamala ( talk) 11:09, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
Hi. Wasifwasif ..He is already listed as "Tamil Scientist" and "ISRO people", which are both subcategories of "Indian Scientists", and further as he is already listed as "Tamil Scientist", "Tamil politician" and "Tamil engineers" "Tamil poets ", so isn't "Tamil peole" obvious? Kindly check yourself also and remove the super categories of already listed sub-categories. -- Vigyani ( talk) 15:51, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
Is Dr. Abdul Kalam a follower of Sathya Sai Baba ? See reliable sources notice board Please comment there, not here, in order to have a centralized discussion. I am asking because I am checking the list of followers at Sathya Sai Baba. Thanks in advance. Andries ( talk) 19:50, 16 June 2013 (UTC)
I deleted a section titled " Personal Attacks" from the article about Kalam over-claiming credit for the missile program, since the section's content were not at all supported by the sources it cited. However, there well may be other reliable and relevant sources on the topic. If so, feel free to re-add this point of criticism to the article, although it may be best to run it by the talk page first . Abecedare ( talk) 17:41, 14 October 2014 (UTC)
Hey All It's very to sorry inform that Mr.Kalam died on Monday 27/07/15 after falling during a speech. Akshatbahety ( talk) 15:30, 27 July 2016 (UTC)
Died at age 0. Is that a typo?
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Since APJ abdul kalam is no more, his died section needs to be changed from (0) to (83) Anurag imp ( talk) 15:39, 27 July 2015 (UTC) Done by another - Arjayay ( talk) 16:02, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
He died on 27th July,2016.He was suffered by the heart attack during speech at Shillong.He was taken immediately to hospital.but, uncertainly he died at 7.45 pm.
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He was passed away on 24-0-2015 in Meghalaya on a speech. During a a Meeting Nalini 1985 ( talk) 15:55, 27 July 2015 (UTC) Done by another - Arjayay ( talk) 16:03, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
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He was born in a fishermen boat owner family. Despite poverty we rose to such high level.
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Please add this to the awards: Honorary doctorate by Carnegie Mellon University. Awarded on Oct 17, 2007 https://www.cmu.edu/news/archive/2007/October/oct26_kalam.shtml Ruchi901 ( talk) 16:40, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
Done Thanks for pointing this out, along with the source. Abecedare ( talk) 02:32, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
Could someone add Dr. Kalam's full name in the Tamil script. Thanks Bodha2 ( talk) 16:51, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
Please correct the name which is half tamil and half english now. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 59.92.22.143 ( talk) 22:44, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
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Please include "at the age of 83" in last para. 14.96.40.22 ( talk) 17:09, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
Done as requested. Abecedare ( talk) 02:35, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
He died on July 27, at Shillong at 7.55pm.He was caught by heart attack. Leaving veil of tears.
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Under - 'Career as scientist'
Kalam was invited by Raja Ramanna to witness the country's first nuclear test Smiling Buddha as the representative of TBRL, even though he had not participated in the its development.
Edit: Kalam was invited by Raja Ramanna to witness the country's first nuclear test Smiling Buddha as the representative of TBRL, even though he had not participated in its* development.
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the picture of Dr APJ Abdul Kalam is not a good one.
I suggest you to add a better picture of my people's president who is a pride of my nation.
http://pib.nic.in/photo//l-images/l2004081403.jpg The President Dr. A.P.J Abdul Kalam addressing the Nation on the eve of the Independence Day in New Delhi on August 14, 2004 (Saturday).
I pic in the above link seem to be a perfect choice.
Vimal sampath ( talk) 19:19, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
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On his death on 27th July, 2015 following lines by an Urdu Poet is a real tribute to him.
गिरियाँ चमन ये जिसके बिन, तुझको है मेरा ओ गुल सलाम
बिल्लौर मसीहा उरूज-ए-हिंद, हुबूत-ए-तारिक अब्दुल कलाम
Giriyaan chaman ye jiske bin,tujhko hai mera O gul salam
Billaur messiah urooj-e-hind, huboot-e-taarik Abdul kalam
© Anwar Jamal बरबर गाज़ीपुरी Toughjamy123 ( talk) 19:31, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
Could someone add a section on his personal life and religious views? 42.107.175.154 ( talk) 19:42, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
This content can be included in the section. Please improve if someone felt inclined.
— Preceding unsigned comment added by 42.107.175.154 ( talk • contribs) 19:45, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
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Please change the piece of text "Kalam's 79th birthday was recognised as World Student Day by the United Nations" to "The rumor of UNO declaring Dr. Kalam's Birthday as World Student Day is not true as UNO's official website does not recognize it there." because this is a well spread rumor on Social Media. [1] Kydroxen ( talk) 10:10, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
On this topic, note that source that was used to underline this piece of information in the article is not accessible any more. -- Drat70 ( talk) 03:34, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
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he was died at 6;35 P.M
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His religion is was and always will be science.
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http://abdulkalamvision.blogspot.in/. This is a community blog where everyone can share their dream in memory of A P J Abdul Kalam. Users are allowed to share their dreams and the community of the blog which is a group of professionals and students including streams of Engineering, Arts, Medical and Management.
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223.176.15.136 ( talk) 13:10, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Ankit Maity ( talk · contribs) 12:09, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
Sorry for delayed reply. Thanks Ankit for coming up and reviewing the nomination. Will you mind if you can let me know what are the necessary fixes I should work on the article? I believe that your review wasn't a detailed one and can be worked on after fixing few problems. -- ♪Karthik♫ ♪Nadar♫ 16:36, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
In addition to the issues raised in Point 1 (and the peer reviewer), I have a few more suggestions:
User:Wasifwasif is adding unreliable sources to make changes to A. P. J. Abdul Kalam's religion. He is asked to refrain from doing and use talkpage to discuss the matter. Thanks-- Neelkamala ( talk) 11:09, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
Hi. Wasifwasif ..He is already listed as "Tamil Scientist" and "ISRO people", which are both subcategories of "Indian Scientists", and further as he is already listed as "Tamil Scientist", "Tamil politician" and "Tamil engineers" "Tamil poets ", so isn't "Tamil peole" obvious? Kindly check yourself also and remove the super categories of already listed sub-categories. -- Vigyani ( talk) 15:51, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
Is Dr. Abdul Kalam a follower of Sathya Sai Baba ? See reliable sources notice board Please comment there, not here, in order to have a centralized discussion. I am asking because I am checking the list of followers at Sathya Sai Baba. Thanks in advance. Andries ( talk) 19:50, 16 June 2013 (UTC)
I deleted a section titled " Personal Attacks" from the article about Kalam over-claiming credit for the missile program, since the section's content were not at all supported by the sources it cited. However, there well may be other reliable and relevant sources on the topic. If so, feel free to re-add this point of criticism to the article, although it may be best to run it by the talk page first . Abecedare ( talk) 17:41, 14 October 2014 (UTC)
Hey All It's very to sorry inform that Mr.Kalam died on Monday 27/07/15 after falling during a speech. Akshatbahety ( talk) 15:30, 27 July 2016 (UTC)
Died at age 0. Is that a typo?
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15:34, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
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A. P. J. Abdul Kalam has been answered. Set the |answered= or |ans= parameter to no to reactivate your request. |
Since APJ abdul kalam is no more, his died section needs to be changed from (0) to (83) Anurag imp ( talk) 15:39, 27 July 2015 (UTC) Done by another - Arjayay ( talk) 16:02, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
He died on 27th July,2016.He was suffered by the heart attack during speech at Shillong.He was taken immediately to hospital.but, uncertainly he died at 7.45 pm.
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He was passed away on 24-0-2015 in Meghalaya on a speech. During a a Meeting Nalini 1985 ( talk) 15:55, 27 July 2015 (UTC) Done by another - Arjayay ( talk) 16:03, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
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He was born in a fishermen boat owner family. Despite poverty we rose to such high level.
182.65.11.70 ( talk) 15:57, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
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Please add this to the awards: Honorary doctorate by Carnegie Mellon University. Awarded on Oct 17, 2007 https://www.cmu.edu/news/archive/2007/October/oct26_kalam.shtml Ruchi901 ( talk) 16:40, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
Done Thanks for pointing this out, along with the source. Abecedare ( talk) 02:32, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
Could someone add Dr. Kalam's full name in the Tamil script. Thanks Bodha2 ( talk) 16:51, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
Please correct the name which is half tamil and half english now. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 59.92.22.143 ( talk) 22:44, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
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Please include "at the age of 83" in last para. 14.96.40.22 ( talk) 17:09, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
Done as requested. Abecedare ( talk) 02:35, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
He died on July 27, at Shillong at 7.55pm.He was caught by heart attack. Leaving veil of tears.
This
edit request to
A. P. J. Abdul Kalam has been answered. Set the |answered= or |ans= parameter to no to reactivate your request. |
Under - 'Career as scientist'
Kalam was invited by Raja Ramanna to witness the country's first nuclear test Smiling Buddha as the representative of TBRL, even though he had not participated in the its development.
Edit: Kalam was invited by Raja Ramanna to witness the country's first nuclear test Smiling Buddha as the representative of TBRL, even though he had not participated in its* development.
Mayank0panchal ( talk) 17:34, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
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edit request to
A. P. J. Abdul Kalam has been answered. Set the |answered= or |ans= parameter to no to reactivate your request. |
the picture of Dr APJ Abdul Kalam is not a good one.
I suggest you to add a better picture of my people's president who is a pride of my nation.
http://pib.nic.in/photo//l-images/l2004081403.jpg The President Dr. A.P.J Abdul Kalam addressing the Nation on the eve of the Independence Day in New Delhi on August 14, 2004 (Saturday).
I pic in the above link seem to be a perfect choice.
Vimal sampath ( talk) 19:19, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
This
edit request to
A. P. J. Abdul Kalam has been answered. Set the |answered= or |ans= parameter to no to reactivate your request. |
On his death on 27th July, 2015 following lines by an Urdu Poet is a real tribute to him.
गिरियाँ चमन ये जिसके बिन, तुझको है मेरा ओ गुल सलाम
बिल्लौर मसीहा उरूज-ए-हिंद, हुबूत-ए-तारिक अब्दुल कलाम
Giriyaan chaman ye jiske bin,tujhko hai mera O gul salam
Billaur messiah urooj-e-hind, huboot-e-taarik Abdul kalam
© Anwar Jamal बरबर गाज़ीपुरी Toughjamy123 ( talk) 19:31, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
Could someone add a section on his personal life and religious views? 42.107.175.154 ( talk) 19:42, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
This content can be included in the section. Please improve if someone felt inclined.
— Preceding unsigned comment added by 42.107.175.154 ( talk • contribs) 19:45, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
References
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edit request to
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Please change the piece of text "Kalam's 79th birthday was recognised as World Student Day by the United Nations" to "The rumor of UNO declaring Dr. Kalam's Birthday as World Student Day is not true as UNO's official website does not recognize it there." because this is a well spread rumor on Social Media. [1] Kydroxen ( talk) 10:10, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
On this topic, note that source that was used to underline this piece of information in the article is not accessible any more. -- Drat70 ( talk) 03:34, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
References
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he was died at 6;35 P.M
183.87.225.47 ( talk) 01:02, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
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His religion is was and always will be science.
203.125.73.250 ( talk) 02:07, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
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http://abdulkalamvision.blogspot.in/. This is a community blog where everyone can share their dream in memory of A P J Abdul Kalam. Users are allowed to share their dreams and the community of the blog which is a group of professionals and students including streams of Engineering, Arts, Medical and Management.
Kinlewiki ( talk) 03:18, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
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223.176.15.136 ( talk) 13:10, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
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