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B class but there are 2 issues that need to be addressed. Djmaschek ( talk) 05:15, 31 August 2019 (UTC) reply

  • The first sentence under History ends with "while Papua ." There is something missing. I cannot even guess what is intended because of Papua's rather vague status at the time.
  • The sentence that begins, "The battalion was formed in June 1945 in the territory of New Guinea..." follows another sentence that refers to the NG Volunteer Rifles. I think by "battalion" you mean the 3 NGIB. In any case, please make it clearer which battalion you are referring to. Thanks.
    • Thanks for picking these up. I think I have rectified these points now. Regards, AustralianRupert ( talk) 05:26, 31 August 2019 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Review comment

B class but there are 2 issues that need to be addressed. Djmaschek ( talk) 05:15, 31 August 2019 (UTC) reply

  • The first sentence under History ends with "while Papua ." There is something missing. I cannot even guess what is intended because of Papua's rather vague status at the time.
  • The sentence that begins, "The battalion was formed in June 1945 in the territory of New Guinea..." follows another sentence that refers to the NG Volunteer Rifles. I think by "battalion" you mean the 3 NGIB. In any case, please make it clearer which battalion you are referring to. Thanks.
    • Thanks for picking these up. I think I have rectified these points now. Regards, AustralianRupert ( talk) 05:26, 31 August 2019 (UTC) reply

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