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A lot of this looks like a close paraphrase or copy of the english google translation of a blog. This needs to be significantly reworded and a reliable source needs to be cited instead of a self-published, unreliable blog. See WP:RS. -- Dual Freq ( talk) 21:14, 12 September 2023 (UTC)
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A lot of this looks like a close paraphrase or copy of the english google translation of a blog. This needs to be significantly reworded and a reliable source needs to be cited instead of a self-published, unreliable blog. See WP:RS. -- Dual Freq ( talk) 21:14, 12 September 2023 (UTC)
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for writing the article on Wikipedia! I genuinely appreciate your efforts in creating the article on Wikipedia and expanding the sum of human knowledge in Wikipedia. Wishing you and your family a great day!
✠ SunDawn ✠ (contact) 21:33, 10 October 2023 (UTC)