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"in the 73-frame final." - hyphen should be an en dash per
MOS:DASH
"The world snooker championship was not contested again until 1964." - why was this the case?
Background
The citation needed tag needs sorting out at the end of the second paragraph needs addressing
Summary
"The 1957 World Professional Match-play Championship was held at Saint Helier, Jersey," - maybe include the dates of the tournament?
"During the dead frames, which had an audience of around 80 people, Rea compiled the highest break of the match, a 92." - in which dead frame was the 92 break made?
The term break should be wikilinked only on the first mention to the appropriate article
"making an 85 break during the session." - in which frame was this break made during that session?
"With the six evening frames shared between the paid," - spelling error
"Williams then won the following frame, and added another which he won on a re-spotted black." - repetition of "won"
"The final was over 73 frames." - maybe added the dates the final took place on
"The highest break of the first day was 67, made by Rea." - in which frame was this 67 break made?
The Jersey Evening Post, which has a fuller report than other sources, mentions an 88 break in frame 4 so I've added that in.
BennyOnTheLoose (
talk) 14:14, 28 July 2021 (UTC)reply
"In the evening, Williams won the first frame with a 65 break that received that the Jersey Evening Post reported" - think the text in bold is unneeded
For the same sentence, the Jersey Evening Post should be italised since it is a printed publication
"with the highest break in the afternoon session just 34, by Kennerley." - some words missing from this sentence
Schedule
The table can have a header included and the refs in the table moved to the header and in numerical order
References=
All the references obtained from Google Newspapers should be mentioned as such in the via= field
Shall put the review on hold to allow the editor to address or query each of the points raised above
MWright96(talk) 13:05, 28 July 2021 (UTC)reply
Many thanks,
MWright96. I've amended the article in response to all of the points above. Let me know if anything else is required. Regards,
BennyOnTheLoose (
talk) 14:24, 28 July 2021 (UTC)reply
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Snooker, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
snooker on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.SnookerWikipedia:WikiProject SnookerTemplate:WikiProject SnookerSnooker articles
"in the 73-frame final." - hyphen should be an en dash per
MOS:DASH
"The world snooker championship was not contested again until 1964." - why was this the case?
Background
The citation needed tag needs sorting out at the end of the second paragraph needs addressing
Summary
"The 1957 World Professional Match-play Championship was held at Saint Helier, Jersey," - maybe include the dates of the tournament?
"During the dead frames, which had an audience of around 80 people, Rea compiled the highest break of the match, a 92." - in which dead frame was the 92 break made?
The term break should be wikilinked only on the first mention to the appropriate article
"making an 85 break during the session." - in which frame was this break made during that session?
"With the six evening frames shared between the paid," - spelling error
"Williams then won the following frame, and added another which he won on a re-spotted black." - repetition of "won"
"The final was over 73 frames." - maybe added the dates the final took place on
"The highest break of the first day was 67, made by Rea." - in which frame was this 67 break made?
The Jersey Evening Post, which has a fuller report than other sources, mentions an 88 break in frame 4 so I've added that in.
BennyOnTheLoose (
talk) 14:14, 28 July 2021 (UTC)reply
"In the evening, Williams won the first frame with a 65 break that received that the Jersey Evening Post reported" - think the text in bold is unneeded
For the same sentence, the Jersey Evening Post should be italised since it is a printed publication
"with the highest break in the afternoon session just 34, by Kennerley." - some words missing from this sentence
Schedule
The table can have a header included and the refs in the table moved to the header and in numerical order
References=
All the references obtained from Google Newspapers should be mentioned as such in the via= field
Shall put the review on hold to allow the editor to address or query each of the points raised above
MWright96(talk) 13:05, 28 July 2021 (UTC)reply
Many thanks,
MWright96. I've amended the article in response to all of the points above. Let me know if anything else is required. Regards,
BennyOnTheLoose (
talk) 14:24, 28 July 2021 (UTC)reply