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"Pulman led 31–29 going into the last day of the final, but Davis won 8 of the first 10 frames on 10 March" - Pulamn led 31–29 going into the last day of the final on 10 March, but Davis won 8 of the first 10 frames on that day
"when the event was cancelled during World War II, and again when the championship resumed in 1946, accumulating a total of 15 titles before retiring from the event." - repetition of "event"
"The BACC claimed that the championship was primarily about honour," - little too close to the source material
I've gone back to The BACC's own words from 1951 now, as I don't think that the later sources really cover that the BACC was arguing that the division of income was fair, as well as that the championship was mainly about honour. Let me know if this needs another rework.
BennyOnTheLoose (
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15:36, 8 July 2021 (UTC)reply
"whilst the PBPA members felt that the BACC was taking too large a share of the income from the events and established an alternative competition which became known as the World Professional Match-play Championship, now recognised as world championships events." - repetition of "events"
"The final was over 73 frames, played from 5 to 10 March at the Tower Circus, Blackpool." - a word is missing at the start of the second part of this portion of text
"Davis won the opening frame and took a 4–2 lead during the afternoon session, making a break of 96 in the fourth frame, but Pulman, who compiled a break of 85 in the ninth frame, led 7–5 after the opening day." - run-on sentence
"Davis won the first frame on the second evening, but Pulman then won five consecutive frames to lead 14–10 after the second day." - repetition of "won"
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Snooker, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
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"Pulman led 31–29 going into the last day of the final, but Davis won 8 of the first 10 frames on 10 March" - Pulamn led 31–29 going into the last day of the final on 10 March, but Davis won 8 of the first 10 frames on that day
"when the event was cancelled during World War II, and again when the championship resumed in 1946, accumulating a total of 15 titles before retiring from the event." - repetition of "event"
"The BACC claimed that the championship was primarily about honour," - little too close to the source material
I've gone back to The BACC's own words from 1951 now, as I don't think that the later sources really cover that the BACC was arguing that the division of income was fair, as well as that the championship was mainly about honour. Let me know if this needs another rework.
BennyOnTheLoose (
talk)
15:36, 8 July 2021 (UTC)reply
"whilst the PBPA members felt that the BACC was taking too large a share of the income from the events and established an alternative competition which became known as the World Professional Match-play Championship, now recognised as world championships events." - repetition of "events"
"The final was over 73 frames, played from 5 to 10 March at the Tower Circus, Blackpool." - a word is missing at the start of the second part of this portion of text
"Davis won the opening frame and took a 4–2 lead during the afternoon session, making a break of 96 in the fourth frame, but Pulman, who compiled a break of 85 in the ninth frame, led 7–5 after the opening day." - run-on sentence
"Davis won the first frame on the second evening, but Pulman then won five consecutive frames to lead 14–10 after the second day." - repetition of "won"