"The 1952 World Snooker Championship was a snooker tournament held between Monday 25 February and Saturday 8 March 1952" - the days aren't really needed here
"Due to a dispute between the Professional Billiards Players' Association (PBPA) and the organisers for the event, the Billiards Association and Control Council (BACC), most players withdrew from the event." - repetition of "event"
The Wikilink of the BACC in the third paragraph is unneeded but the word table can be to
Billiard table
Summary
"Lindrum won eight of the next twelve to lead 14–10 after the second day's play." - a word is missing from this sentence
"Day five featured Lindrum extend his lead to 38–22 after day five," - The fifth day saw
"needing just two of the remaining 37 for victory." - a word is missing from this excerpt
"Lindrum won the first two frames to reach a winning 73–37 position on the 6 March."- on 6 March. per
MOS:DATES
"The remaining 35 "dead" frames were due to be played," - dead frames
"Lindrum became the first player from outside the British Isles to win the World Championship, and would remain the only one until compatriot Neil Robertson won the event in 2010.[22]" - the fact of Robertson's 2010 victory will need an additional reliable source to verify it along with the one already at the end of this sentence
"The 1952 World Snooker Championship was a snooker tournament held between Monday 25 February and Saturday 8 March 1952" - the days aren't really needed here
"Due to a dispute between the Professional Billiards Players' Association (PBPA) and the organisers for the event, the Billiards Association and Control Council (BACC), most players withdrew from the event." - repetition of "event"
The Wikilink of the BACC in the third paragraph is unneeded but the word table can be to
Billiard table
Summary
"Lindrum won eight of the next twelve to lead 14–10 after the second day's play." - a word is missing from this sentence
"Day five featured Lindrum extend his lead to 38–22 after day five," - The fifth day saw
"needing just two of the remaining 37 for victory." - a word is missing from this excerpt
"Lindrum won the first two frames to reach a winning 73–37 position on the 6 March."- on 6 March. per
MOS:DATES
"The remaining 35 "dead" frames were due to be played," - dead frames
"Lindrum became the first player from outside the British Isles to win the World Championship, and would remain the only one until compatriot Neil Robertson won the event in 2010.[22]" - the fact of Robertson's 2010 victory will need an additional reliable source to verify it along with the one already at the end of this sentence