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@ User:AustralianRupert sugested tweaking a couple of sentences but this para might need clarifying. {{quoteThe 13th Field Regiment remained in New Guinea until October 1943, when it was withdrawn back to Australia. Throughout 1944, the battery undertook training on the Atherton Tablelands. The 13th Field Regiment was re-assigned to the 11th Division. It remained in Australia until the end of the war, when the Regiment's personnel were demobilised and the Regiment disbanded.}}
Use of battery appears misplaced? When it was assigned to 11 Div was unclear in the earlier version and this version should be checked. It could be as simple as moving the 11 Div sentence to before the Atherton sentence if needed. Hope this helps. Regards Cinderella157 ( talk) 00:25, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
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@ User:AustralianRupert sugested tweaking a couple of sentences but this para might need clarifying. {{quoteThe 13th Field Regiment remained in New Guinea until October 1943, when it was withdrawn back to Australia. Throughout 1944, the battery undertook training on the Atherton Tablelands. The 13th Field Regiment was re-assigned to the 11th Division. It remained in Australia until the end of the war, when the Regiment's personnel were demobilised and the Regiment disbanded.}}
Use of battery appears misplaced? When it was assigned to 11 Div was unclear in the earlier version and this version should be checked. It could be as simple as moving the 11 Div sentence to before the Atherton sentence if needed. Hope this helps. Regards Cinderella157 ( talk) 00:25, 21 December 2014 (UTC)