10:2010:20, 15 July 2021diffhist−12
Cadence
Articles should not start with a definition copied from elsewhere. We write in our own words, obviously.
13:2113:21, 14 July 2021diffhist−1,081
SN 2011dh
removed a lot of absolute rubbish - a mixture of unencyclopaedic, years out of date, irrelevant and very likely copied and pasted from somewhere
08:5608:56, 14 July 2021diffhist−450
Denise Nickerson
→Commercials: so badly written as to be unintelligible, and says nothing of interest. Recording adverts is not unusual and nobody has ever imagined that the people who record adverts are devoted users of the products
13 July 2021
17:3317:33, 13 July 2021diffhist+15
Fly (Breaking Bad)
→Plot: as seems to be the case for all Breaking Bad episode articles, there were grammar errors, needless concealments of surnames, and informal contractions.
07:3507:35, 13 July 2021diffhist+10
Me and a Gun
→Background: after you have mentioned someone once, repeating their surname is jarring, repeating their full name even more so. Why would anyone write in this way?
10:2010:20, 15 July 2021diffhist−12
Cadence
Articles should not start with a definition copied from elsewhere. We write in our own words, obviously.
13:2113:21, 14 July 2021diffhist−1,081
SN 2011dh
removed a lot of absolute rubbish - a mixture of unencyclopaedic, years out of date, irrelevant and very likely copied and pasted from somewhere
08:5608:56, 14 July 2021diffhist−450
Denise Nickerson
→Commercials: so badly written as to be unintelligible, and says nothing of interest. Recording adverts is not unusual and nobody has ever imagined that the people who record adverts are devoted users of the products
13 July 2021
17:3317:33, 13 July 2021diffhist+15
Fly (Breaking Bad)
→Plot: as seems to be the case for all Breaking Bad episode articles, there were grammar errors, needless concealments of surnames, and informal contractions.
07:3507:35, 13 July 2021diffhist+10
Me and a Gun
→Background: after you have mentioned someone once, repeating their surname is jarring, repeating their full name even more so. Why would anyone write in this way?