04:0304:03, 11 April 2024diffhist+206
Freddie Bartholomew
Citation describing Bartholomew as one of the most famous child actors of all time needs a citation. Shirley Temple, Elizabeth Taylor, Judy Garland. Mickey Rooney, and to an extent Jackie Coogan were far more famous child actors. Batholomew's name has not withstood the test of time.current
20:4620:46, 7 February 2024diffhist+177
Angelico Chavez
The subsequent information about two NM cousins used the word "however" to indicate an exception Fr. Chavez becoming the first native NM Franciscan priest. That suggested false info since women cannot become Catholic priests. The wording was changed to indicate that the women were the first native NM Franciscans, not priests. This info still needs a citation to show its veracity.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
21:4921:49, 6 December 2023diffhist+57
Basilica of Our Lady of Guadalupe
→History: The bomb event did not occur during the Cristero War and the source cited odes not indicate that it happened during the Cristero War The bomb was placed right after the end of the Mexican Revolution and 5 years before the Cristero War.
02:4402:44, 25 November 2023diffhist−2
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Eliza McCardle Johnson
Using the subject's surname in this sentence is confusing because the husband's name was also Johnson; better to use the subject's first name.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
16:4916:49, 28 October 2023diffhist−3
Carlo Acutis
One does not "undergo a cerebral hemmorhage as if it is a medical procedure. A cerebral hemmorhage is a blood vessel that is weakened and bursts open allowing blood to spill out of the vascular system into and on top of the brain. In laymen's terms, it is a stroke. One experiences a stroke; one does NOT "undergo" a stroke. The word undergo was changed to experienced.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
07:1307:13, 27 October 2023diffhist+2
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Carlo Acutis
Just about any age would be an "old" person in comparison to his youth; so, the word "older" is preferred to the word "old."Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
16:2116:21, 27 September 2023diffhist+26
Gemma Galgani
Corrected noun-pronoun relationships, placed chronologies in th beginning of descriptions, re-worded sentence to standard English so it does not sound like it was copied fron the translation of an article written in another languageTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
04:0304:03, 11 April 2024diffhist+206
Freddie Bartholomew
Citation describing Bartholomew as one of the most famous child actors of all time needs a citation. Shirley Temple, Elizabeth Taylor, Judy Garland. Mickey Rooney, and to an extent Jackie Coogan were far more famous child actors. Batholomew's name has not withstood the test of time.current
20:4620:46, 7 February 2024diffhist+177
Angelico Chavez
The subsequent information about two NM cousins used the word "however" to indicate an exception Fr. Chavez becoming the first native NM Franciscan priest. That suggested false info since women cannot become Catholic priests. The wording was changed to indicate that the women were the first native NM Franciscans, not priests. This info still needs a citation to show its veracity.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
21:4921:49, 6 December 2023diffhist+57
Basilica of Our Lady of Guadalupe
→History: The bomb event did not occur during the Cristero War and the source cited odes not indicate that it happened during the Cristero War The bomb was placed right after the end of the Mexican Revolution and 5 years before the Cristero War.
02:4402:44, 25 November 2023diffhist−2
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Eliza McCardle Johnson
Using the subject's surname in this sentence is confusing because the husband's name was also Johnson; better to use the subject's first name.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
16:4916:49, 28 October 2023diffhist−3
Carlo Acutis
One does not "undergo a cerebral hemmorhage as if it is a medical procedure. A cerebral hemmorhage is a blood vessel that is weakened and bursts open allowing blood to spill out of the vascular system into and on top of the brain. In laymen's terms, it is a stroke. One experiences a stroke; one does NOT "undergo" a stroke. The word undergo was changed to experienced.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
07:1307:13, 27 October 2023diffhist+2
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Carlo Acutis
Just about any age would be an "old" person in comparison to his youth; so, the word "older" is preferred to the word "old."Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
16:2116:21, 27 September 2023diffhist+26
Gemma Galgani
Corrected noun-pronoun relationships, placed chronologies in th beginning of descriptions, re-worded sentence to standard English so it does not sound like it was copied fron the translation of an article written in another languageTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit