05:0705:07, 5 August 2010diffhist−2,001
Lisa Graham Keegan
see
WP:LEDE; rm dubious sources and wording; taking quotes from a forum that invited her would obviously paint her in a glowing light; fixed incorrect semicolon usage
04:4204:42, 5 August 2010diffhist+9
Lisa Graham Keegan
words like "leader" "championed" should not be found on anyone's encyclopedia article, since when was the national review a neutral source suitable for a lede?
05:0705:07, 5 August 2010diffhist−2,001
Lisa Graham Keegan
see
WP:LEDE; rm dubious sources and wording; taking quotes from a forum that invited her would obviously paint her in a glowing light; fixed incorrect semicolon usage
04:4204:42, 5 August 2010diffhist+9
Lisa Graham Keegan
words like "leader" "championed" should not be found on anyone's encyclopedia article, since when was the national review a neutral source suitable for a lede?