05:3605:36, 19 April 2024diffhist−12
Hillsborough disaster
→Crush: tighten this up, per cited HIP report and quoted text – he was specifically talking about ferrying casualties to the gymnasium, and they didn't leave the rescue to the fans, just 'allowed' them to help (but of course they had no choice in the matter)
05:2705:27, 19 April 2024diffhist+6
m
Hillsborough disaster
→Crush: I do think continuous tense works best here – this indicates an activity that was happening over a period of time, and fits with the "Meanwhile" at start of previous sentence
05:3605:36, 19 April 2024diffhist−12
Hillsborough disaster
→Crush: tighten this up, per cited HIP report and quoted text – he was specifically talking about ferrying casualties to the gymnasium, and they didn't leave the rescue to the fans, just 'allowed' them to help (but of course they had no choice in the matter)
05:2705:27, 19 April 2024diffhist+6
m
Hillsborough disaster
→Crush: I do think continuous tense works best here – this indicates an activity that was happening over a period of time, and fits with the "Meanwhile" at start of previous sentence