02:3702:37, 30 January 2024diffhist+264
1-Pentanol
Eliminated typo & minor rearrangement of words for better flow. Added sentence about uses & role as fusel alcohol.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
02:1402:14, 22 December 2023diffhist+26
Phosgene
Modified caption. Phosgene isn't visible in its tube as its contained within a sealed glass capillary (protected by cotton wool).Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
23:2623:26, 21 December 2023diffhist−2
Muscone
Changed CAS number to 541-91-3. CAS page (https://commonchemistry.cas.org/detail?cas_rn=541-91-3&search=Muscone) for (+/-)- Muscone reports two old CAS #s for muscone were deleted or replaced (CAS # 956-82-1 & 22460-48-6). Neither of these match the CAS # (10403-00-6) that was in the ChemBox of this article.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
05:3105:31, 12 October 2023diffhist+36
Pyrenoid
→Discovery: Unfortunate duplication of an acronym already used extensively in article ie DIC = dissolved inorganic carbon versus differential interference contrast microscopy implied in this image caption. Replaced this instance of DIC with full phrase to disambiguate.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
05:2205:22, 12 October 2023diffhist+67
Pyrenoid
→Discovery: Simple typo/ repeated word. The correct phrase is contained in the title of reference in footnote. Also wikilinked phrase.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
3 October 2023
00:5300:53, 3 October 2023diffhist+12
Nass River
Changed wikilink of Mouth (which links to article about the anatomical feature) to point to article River mouth.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
04:1304:13, 8 August 2023diffhist+362
Stimpy's Invention
→Plot: Partial rewrite of Plot section, mostly to break up overly long descriptive sentences. Where possible, retained the OP's wording or, failing that, their narrative intent.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
7 August 2023
22:1522:15, 7 August 2023diffhist−6
Glutathione
Changed wikilink of heavy metals to point to the toxic heavy metals article which is more relevant to the topic.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
4 August 2023
00:3000:30, 4 August 2023diffhist−8
Operation PowerOFF
→Aftermath: My previous edit mangled a sentence. Should've spotted it. Rechecked references, which state that charges were laid in states of Cali & Alaska, rather than people being arrested in those states.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
00:2100:21, 4 August 2023diffhist−32
Operation PowerOFF
→Aftermath: "District of Alaska" wikilinked to an historic name for Alaska, the California court district in the second wikilink doesn't seem directly relevant to the subject matter. Not sure individual states need wikilinks here, but left them anyway.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
09:0109:01, 28 July 2023diffhist+6
Block cipher
Minor rewrite of back half of lede para. Tried to retain original authors' general ideas. It may still need a bit of polish. Also moved last sentence to next para, as it didn't make sense (to me) hanging on the end of the first para.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
02:0802:08, 28 July 2023diffhist+96
Mesotherapy
→Criticism: Removed extraneous "the". Added template Citation Required where the direct quote of an academic is used.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
01:5701:57, 28 July 2023diffhist+121
Biomesotherapy
The original text was lifted verbatim (ie plagiarised) from the original reference source's abstract. I have roughly rewritten it using details in the source ref. More work is required to further distance it from the source.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
01:0901:09, 28 July 2023diffhist+15
m
Astrocytoma
Changed first mention of astrocytoma to singular from plural. Made second mention that introduces the two plural forms of astrocytoma. Shifted words in second sentence to create a more concise description.
30 June 2023
01:0201:02, 30 June 2023diffhist+79
Tcl
→History: Removed capitalism per MoS from wikilink. Juggled some wording for better readability, added reference to VLSI as a pointer to the era in which these events occurred. Tried to minimise changes to original authors' work.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
01:0001:00, 9 June 2023diffhist+147
MultiMediaCard
→eMMC: Rewrote bare citation as templated cite web. Article is behind a registration barrier. Added as much useful info as possible.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
02:3702:37, 30 January 2024diffhist+264
1-Pentanol
Eliminated typo & minor rearrangement of words for better flow. Added sentence about uses & role as fusel alcohol.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
02:1402:14, 22 December 2023diffhist+26
Phosgene
Modified caption. Phosgene isn't visible in its tube as its contained within a sealed glass capillary (protected by cotton wool).Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
23:2623:26, 21 December 2023diffhist−2
Muscone
Changed CAS number to 541-91-3. CAS page (https://commonchemistry.cas.org/detail?cas_rn=541-91-3&search=Muscone) for (+/-)- Muscone reports two old CAS #s for muscone were deleted or replaced (CAS # 956-82-1 & 22460-48-6). Neither of these match the CAS # (10403-00-6) that was in the ChemBox of this article.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
05:3105:31, 12 October 2023diffhist+36
Pyrenoid
→Discovery: Unfortunate duplication of an acronym already used extensively in article ie DIC = dissolved inorganic carbon versus differential interference contrast microscopy implied in this image caption. Replaced this instance of DIC with full phrase to disambiguate.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
05:2205:22, 12 October 2023diffhist+67
Pyrenoid
→Discovery: Simple typo/ repeated word. The correct phrase is contained in the title of reference in footnote. Also wikilinked phrase.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
3 October 2023
00:5300:53, 3 October 2023diffhist+12
Nass River
Changed wikilink of Mouth (which links to article about the anatomical feature) to point to article River mouth.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
04:1304:13, 8 August 2023diffhist+362
Stimpy's Invention
→Plot: Partial rewrite of Plot section, mostly to break up overly long descriptive sentences. Where possible, retained the OP's wording or, failing that, their narrative intent.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
7 August 2023
22:1522:15, 7 August 2023diffhist−6
Glutathione
Changed wikilink of heavy metals to point to the toxic heavy metals article which is more relevant to the topic.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
4 August 2023
00:3000:30, 4 August 2023diffhist−8
Operation PowerOFF
→Aftermath: My previous edit mangled a sentence. Should've spotted it. Rechecked references, which state that charges were laid in states of Cali & Alaska, rather than people being arrested in those states.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
00:2100:21, 4 August 2023diffhist−32
Operation PowerOFF
→Aftermath: "District of Alaska" wikilinked to an historic name for Alaska, the California court district in the second wikilink doesn't seem directly relevant to the subject matter. Not sure individual states need wikilinks here, but left them anyway.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
09:0109:01, 28 July 2023diffhist+6
Block cipher
Minor rewrite of back half of lede para. Tried to retain original authors' general ideas. It may still need a bit of polish. Also moved last sentence to next para, as it didn't make sense (to me) hanging on the end of the first para.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
02:0802:08, 28 July 2023diffhist+96
Mesotherapy
→Criticism: Removed extraneous "the". Added template Citation Required where the direct quote of an academic is used.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
01:5701:57, 28 July 2023diffhist+121
Biomesotherapy
The original text was lifted verbatim (ie plagiarised) from the original reference source's abstract. I have roughly rewritten it using details in the source ref. More work is required to further distance it from the source.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
01:0901:09, 28 July 2023diffhist+15
m
Astrocytoma
Changed first mention of astrocytoma to singular from plural. Made second mention that introduces the two plural forms of astrocytoma. Shifted words in second sentence to create a more concise description.
30 June 2023
01:0201:02, 30 June 2023diffhist+79
Tcl
→History: Removed capitalism per MoS from wikilink. Juggled some wording for better readability, added reference to VLSI as a pointer to the era in which these events occurred. Tried to minimise changes to original authors' work.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
01:0001:00, 9 June 2023diffhist+147
MultiMediaCard
→eMMC: Rewrote bare citation as templated cite web. Article is behind a registration barrier. Added as much useful info as possible.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit