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3 September 2019

28 March 2018

27 March 2018

  • 11:59 11:59, 27 March 2018 diff hist +23‎ m Dhaka Central Jail, Keraniganj ‎ I added the possessive pronoun "its" to the phrase (Since "its" opening). I added a quantifier "several" before the noun "problems". I added the article "the" before the word lack. I also rephrased a sentence and inserted a bracket in order to make the sentence more legible. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 11:50 11:50, 27 March 2018 diff hist +1‎ m Tirstrup ‎ I added the article "a" before the word "home". Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 11:32 11:32, 27 March 2018 diff hist +2‎ m Filial mourning ‎ i added "ed" to the word "subject" so it would be in the correct passive form. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 11:24 11:24, 27 March 2018 diff hist +8‎ m Vladimir Yastrebchak ‎ I just added the article "the" before the phrases "longtime minister" and "first deputy minister". the former was to emphasize specific info regarding the previous minister and the latter is to accompany the ordinal number "first". Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 11:19 11:19, 27 March 2018 diff hist +11‎ m Naftalan, Azerbaijan ‎ I added the word "located" inside the sentence (It is "located" on an...). I replaced all the numbers (numeral determiners) from the numeral form to word form since they are less than 10. I rephrase two sentences to make them more legible. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 10:50 10:50, 27 March 2018 diff hist +37‎ m Suhaimi Kamaruddin ‎ I added the article "a" behind "former chief of UMNO youth" and "former Deputy Minister of Education". I also added the article "the" before "leadership of UMNO youth". I corrected the typo for the word "fledgling". I added the pronoun "who" to refer to Lim Kit Siang. I rephrase the sentence to make it legible by changing the word "warning" to "forewarning everyone". I added the article "the" before the phrase "then prime minister". i also added the verb "to avoid" between the word "behind' and the phrase "the media's attention". Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 10:22 10:22, 27 March 2018 diff hist +80‎ m The Cézanne Affair ‎ I added " in the film, the actress" in the sentence (For her performance "in the film, the actress" Valeria Gorino...) in order for the sentence to make sense. I also changed the tense to past tense for the throwback. I also rearranged and simplified some sentences. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 09:52 09:52, 27 March 2018 diff hist +4‎ m Baiyun Park station ‎ I added the possessive pronoun "its" between the phrase (it started "its" operation). Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 09:28 09:28, 27 March 2018 diff hist +3‎ m Phway Phway ‎ I rephrased the phrase "both of the film" to "both films". I added the article "the" before "second Youngest Academy Award Winner". I changed the past perfect tense "had awarded" to "was awarded". I replaced the adverb "as" with the article "a" before the phrase "successful new face actor" and another "as" with the article "the" before the phrase "best leading actress". I replaced the verb "design" to the continuous form "designing" to match the continuous form of of the verb acting, singing and modelling mentioned beforehand. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 09:06 09:06, 27 March 2018 diff hist +58‎ Bandar Tasik Puteri ‎ I added the verb to be "is" in the phrase (The are "is" surrounded). Then I added another verb to be "is" in the phrase (it "is" divided.) Both represent passive form. I also added "s" to the word "section" to change the form to plural. i also replaced the comma with the conjunction "and" to the phrase (semi-detached houses "and" super link bungalows.) I rearranged the sentence by putting a [ Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 08:30 08:30, 27 March 2018 diff hist 0‎ m Plass ‎ I added the comma after the phrase "After the war". I added an article "a" before Consul-General. lastly I rearranged the phrase "for use at night" to "for night use" Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 08:18 08:18, 27 March 2018 diff hist +16‎ m Ted Andrews ‎ I added "at the" between the phrase (his childhood "at the" east of Dayton.) Then I replaced the preposition "of" with the passive verb "called". I also added the preposition "by" before the word "seeing". lastly I replaced a comma with a conjunction "and". Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 08:01 08:01, 27 March 2018 diff hist −8‎ m Laia Abril ‎ In line one, i replaced the active verb "who makes" to possessive pronoun "whose". Then I changed the singular form " a project" to plural "various projects". I also changed the present continuous form for the verb "writing" to past tense "wrote". Lastly, I simplified the sentence from (Said of "The epilogue" that "It) to (that "The Epilogue" "...). Tag: Visual edit: Switched

26 March 2018

  • 10:41 10:41, 26 March 2018 diff hist +2‎ m Ladd's cordials ‎ For line 6, I replaced the passive verbs "were to have" to simple past tense "had" to simplify the sentence. Then, I rearranged the phrases from " ,and shortly after began also manufacturing" to "Shortly after, he began to manufacture". As for line 16, I added a possessive pronoun "his" to the sentence "Joseph died in 1929 and son Roy took over the business" so it became (Joseph died in 1929 and "his" son Roy to take over the business.) I also added two passive verbs which are "called" for the phrase (a new entity "called" J.L. Aerated waters Ltd.) and "were" for the phrase ( Assets "were" disposed of ) Tag: Visual edit: Switched

25 March 2018

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27 March 2018

  • 11:59 11:59, 27 March 2018 diff hist +23‎ m Dhaka Central Jail, Keraniganj ‎ I added the possessive pronoun "its" to the phrase (Since "its" opening). I added a quantifier "several" before the noun "problems". I added the article "the" before the word lack. I also rephrased a sentence and inserted a bracket in order to make the sentence more legible. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 11:50 11:50, 27 March 2018 diff hist +1‎ m Tirstrup ‎ I added the article "a" before the word "home". Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 11:32 11:32, 27 March 2018 diff hist +2‎ m Filial mourning ‎ i added "ed" to the word "subject" so it would be in the correct passive form. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 11:24 11:24, 27 March 2018 diff hist +8‎ m Vladimir Yastrebchak ‎ I just added the article "the" before the phrases "longtime minister" and "first deputy minister". the former was to emphasize specific info regarding the previous minister and the latter is to accompany the ordinal number "first". Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 11:19 11:19, 27 March 2018 diff hist +11‎ m Naftalan, Azerbaijan ‎ I added the word "located" inside the sentence (It is "located" on an...). I replaced all the numbers (numeral determiners) from the numeral form to word form since they are less than 10. I rephrase two sentences to make them more legible. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 10:50 10:50, 27 March 2018 diff hist +37‎ m Suhaimi Kamaruddin ‎ I added the article "a" behind "former chief of UMNO youth" and "former Deputy Minister of Education". I also added the article "the" before "leadership of UMNO youth". I corrected the typo for the word "fledgling". I added the pronoun "who" to refer to Lim Kit Siang. I rephrase the sentence to make it legible by changing the word "warning" to "forewarning everyone". I added the article "the" before the phrase "then prime minister". i also added the verb "to avoid" between the word "behind' and the phrase "the media's attention". Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 10:22 10:22, 27 March 2018 diff hist +80‎ m The Cézanne Affair ‎ I added " in the film, the actress" in the sentence (For her performance "in the film, the actress" Valeria Gorino...) in order for the sentence to make sense. I also changed the tense to past tense for the throwback. I also rearranged and simplified some sentences. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 09:52 09:52, 27 March 2018 diff hist +4‎ m Baiyun Park station ‎ I added the possessive pronoun "its" between the phrase (it started "its" operation). Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 09:28 09:28, 27 March 2018 diff hist +3‎ m Phway Phway ‎ I rephrased the phrase "both of the film" to "both films". I added the article "the" before "second Youngest Academy Award Winner". I changed the past perfect tense "had awarded" to "was awarded". I replaced the adverb "as" with the article "a" before the phrase "successful new face actor" and another "as" with the article "the" before the phrase "best leading actress". I replaced the verb "design" to the continuous form "designing" to match the continuous form of of the verb acting, singing and modelling mentioned beforehand. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 09:06 09:06, 27 March 2018 diff hist +58‎ Bandar Tasik Puteri ‎ I added the verb to be "is" in the phrase (The are "is" surrounded). Then I added another verb to be "is" in the phrase (it "is" divided.) Both represent passive form. I also added "s" to the word "section" to change the form to plural. i also replaced the comma with the conjunction "and" to the phrase (semi-detached houses "and" super link bungalows.) I rearranged the sentence by putting a [ Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 08:30 08:30, 27 March 2018 diff hist 0‎ m Plass ‎ I added the comma after the phrase "After the war". I added an article "a" before Consul-General. lastly I rearranged the phrase "for use at night" to "for night use" Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 08:18 08:18, 27 March 2018 diff hist +16‎ m Ted Andrews ‎ I added "at the" between the phrase (his childhood "at the" east of Dayton.) Then I replaced the preposition "of" with the passive verb "called". I also added the preposition "by" before the word "seeing". lastly I replaced a comma with a conjunction "and". Tag: Visual edit: Switched
  • 08:01 08:01, 27 March 2018 diff hist −8‎ m Laia Abril ‎ In line one, i replaced the active verb "who makes" to possessive pronoun "whose". Then I changed the singular form " a project" to plural "various projects". I also changed the present continuous form for the verb "writing" to past tense "wrote". Lastly, I simplified the sentence from (Said of "The epilogue" that "It) to (that "The Epilogue" "...). Tag: Visual edit: Switched

26 March 2018

  • 10:41 10:41, 26 March 2018 diff hist +2‎ m Ladd's cordials ‎ For line 6, I replaced the passive verbs "were to have" to simple past tense "had" to simplify the sentence. Then, I rearranged the phrases from " ,and shortly after began also manufacturing" to "Shortly after, he began to manufacture". As for line 16, I added a possessive pronoun "his" to the sentence "Joseph died in 1929 and son Roy took over the business" so it became (Joseph died in 1929 and "his" son Roy to take over the business.) I also added two passive verbs which are "called" for the phrase (a new entity "called" J.L. Aerated waters Ltd.) and "were" for the phrase ( Assets "were" disposed of ) Tag: Visual edit: Switched

25 March 2018

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