07:3207:32, 10 December 2019diffhist−1,717
Munich
There are a great many major flaws in this article. I fixed some of the most egregiously poor writing, and removed a lot of needless italic formatting for place names. A lot of work is still required if this is to reach any kind of quality.
06:0606:06, 10 December 2019diffhist−473
Patrick Marber
Undid revision 930065162 by
JoBrodie (
talk) it hasn't happened yet, so why mention it? And why on earth would you put it in the lead section? it is absurd to imply that this thing that hasn't even happened yet is the most important detail of allTag: Undo
07:3207:32, 10 December 2019diffhist−1,717
Munich
There are a great many major flaws in this article. I fixed some of the most egregiously poor writing, and removed a lot of needless italic formatting for place names. A lot of work is still required if this is to reach any kind of quality.
06:0606:06, 10 December 2019diffhist−473
Patrick Marber
Undid revision 930065162 by
JoBrodie (
talk) it hasn't happened yet, so why mention it? And why on earth would you put it in the lead section? it is absurd to imply that this thing that hasn't even happened yet is the most important detail of allTag: Undo