16:5916:59, 24 May 2023diffhist−543
Doug Burgum
The changes removed editorializing, fixed several grammatical mistakes, and unambiguously improved style. I'm putting them back. Feel free to add back whatever detail you think is missing without undoing good copy-editing. Undid revision 1156772537 by
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16:5916:59, 24 May 2023diffhist−543
Doug Burgum
The changes removed editorializing, fixed several grammatical mistakes, and unambiguously improved style. I'm putting them back. Feel free to add back whatever detail you think is missing without undoing good copy-editing. Undid revision 1156772537 by
Los Pobre (
talk)Tag: Undo