12:4512:45, 3 April 2024diffhist+2,052
Two-state solution
While the new paragraph is a little wordy (happy for someone to help make it more concise), the previous version of the historical background paragraph risked misleading the ordinary reader about the historical backdrop to this highly charged and important political debate. I think this is a more neutral presentation. Happy to discuss this, however! I think by the end of the (top) section, the reader now has a much better sense of the article's subject and backdrop.Tag: Visual edit
2 April 2024
15:4815:48, 2 April 2024diffhist+111
Two-state solution
The current phrasing is inaccurate and does not reflect the content of the sources cited. The offers at Camp David in July 2000, the so-called 'Clinton Parameters' in December 2000, and in 2008 under PM Ehud Olmert - all referenced in the sources.Tag: Visual edit
12:4512:45, 3 April 2024diffhist+2,052
Two-state solution
While the new paragraph is a little wordy (happy for someone to help make it more concise), the previous version of the historical background paragraph risked misleading the ordinary reader about the historical backdrop to this highly charged and important political debate. I think this is a more neutral presentation. Happy to discuss this, however! I think by the end of the (top) section, the reader now has a much better sense of the article's subject and backdrop.Tag: Visual edit
2 April 2024
15:4815:48, 2 April 2024diffhist+111
Two-state solution
The current phrasing is inaccurate and does not reflect the content of the sources cited. The offers at Camp David in July 2000, the so-called 'Clinton Parameters' in December 2000, and in 2008 under PM Ehud Olmert - all referenced in the sources.Tag: Visual edit