00:2600:26, 16 September 2021diffhist−54
Larry Elder
The term 'landslide' is ambiguous and everyone has a different interpretation what this means. Right now it's in the low 60% and results are only preliminary.Tag: Reverted
15 September 2021
23:3723:37, 15 September 2021diffhist−15
m
Larry Elder
Removed the word "landslide" - so far it's in the low 60% and we don't know yet if it's 50-something or 60-something %. I wouldn't call that margin a landslide.Tag: Reverted
9 September 2021
16:4716:47, 9 September 2021diffhist−357
Larry Elder
The lead has to be neutral point of view. Previous lead was a copy and paste from the political section, placing undue emphasis on select details (who decides what to select from the body?) A good way to compose the lead is to take 2 or 3 words from EACH SECTION to create a concise summary of the WHOLE article.
03:3603:36, 9 September 2021diffhist−478
Larry Elder
The previous content added by Neutrality is not an improvement, and violates several guidelines in Wikipedia:MOSLEAD. The lead should not be a copy and paste of identical details from the body, rather it should be a neutral lead "in such a way that it can stand on its own as a CONCISE version of the article."Tag: Reverted
6 September 2021
22:3222:32, 6 September 2021diffhist−1,968
User talk:Fpbear
Nonsense, I am improving the content for the Lead section style guide, and this user is trying to spam the page with redundant copy & paste content. Don't spam my talk page either.Tag: Undo
21:5221:52, 6 September 2021diffhist−478
Larry Elder
Here's another improved re-write of the lead section. This is much improved vs. the copy and paste duplication of the exact same content in the Political section. WP:TAGTEAM by Snooganssnoogans and Neutrality to circumvent 3RR will be reported and escalated..Tag: Reverted
07:2507:25, 6 September 2021diffhist−535
Larry Elder
The previous lead was a copy and paste of the Political positions section (redundant). Created an improved lead that summarizes the entire biography, so it's not just an exact duplicate of one section.Tag: Reverted
00:0800:08, 6 September 2021diffhist−690
Larry Elder
Removed vandal text that is completely lacking any citations. The content is already covered under the Political positions heading, where it has citations.Tag: Reverted
15:0215:02, 2 May 2019diffhist+968
Pancreatic cancer
Improper removal of references (including a secondary review paper) by Zephyr. The content was previously discussed with consensus on medpage talk. Use the talk page if you wish to make further changes to this.Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
00:2600:26, 16 September 2021diffhist−54
Larry Elder
The term 'landslide' is ambiguous and everyone has a different interpretation what this means. Right now it's in the low 60% and results are only preliminary.Tag: Reverted
15 September 2021
23:3723:37, 15 September 2021diffhist−15
m
Larry Elder
Removed the word "landslide" - so far it's in the low 60% and we don't know yet if it's 50-something or 60-something %. I wouldn't call that margin a landslide.Tag: Reverted
9 September 2021
16:4716:47, 9 September 2021diffhist−357
Larry Elder
The lead has to be neutral point of view. Previous lead was a copy and paste from the political section, placing undue emphasis on select details (who decides what to select from the body?) A good way to compose the lead is to take 2 or 3 words from EACH SECTION to create a concise summary of the WHOLE article.
03:3603:36, 9 September 2021diffhist−478
Larry Elder
The previous content added by Neutrality is not an improvement, and violates several guidelines in Wikipedia:MOSLEAD. The lead should not be a copy and paste of identical details from the body, rather it should be a neutral lead "in such a way that it can stand on its own as a CONCISE version of the article."Tag: Reverted
6 September 2021
22:3222:32, 6 September 2021diffhist−1,968
User talk:Fpbear
Nonsense, I am improving the content for the Lead section style guide, and this user is trying to spam the page with redundant copy & paste content. Don't spam my talk page either.Tag: Undo
21:5221:52, 6 September 2021diffhist−478
Larry Elder
Here's another improved re-write of the lead section. This is much improved vs. the copy and paste duplication of the exact same content in the Political section. WP:TAGTEAM by Snooganssnoogans and Neutrality to circumvent 3RR will be reported and escalated..Tag: Reverted
07:2507:25, 6 September 2021diffhist−535
Larry Elder
The previous lead was a copy and paste of the Political positions section (redundant). Created an improved lead that summarizes the entire biography, so it's not just an exact duplicate of one section.Tag: Reverted
00:0800:08, 6 September 2021diffhist−690
Larry Elder
Removed vandal text that is completely lacking any citations. The content is already covered under the Political positions heading, where it has citations.Tag: Reverted
15:0215:02, 2 May 2019diffhist+968
Pancreatic cancer
Improper removal of references (including a secondary review paper) by Zephyr. The content was previously discussed with consensus on medpage talk. Use the talk page if you wish to make further changes to this.Tag: 2017 wikitext editor