23:2823:28, 7 August 2023diffhist+359
Society of California Pioneers
Beginning article cleanup for American Old West Project. Adjusted formatting and article capitalization. Adjusted wording on some statements of fact pending later citation. Added a great many links to wikipages for mentioned historical authors artists.Tag: Disambiguation links added
23:3423:34, 4 August 2023diffhist+2,300
Coca-Cola Zero Sugar
→Variants: Substantial Edit – Sortable key columns configured for Variants table. Added image for each variant where available from Wikimedia Commons. Clarified/cleaned up some information and formatting. Added Coke Ultimate.
10:2210:22, 9 January 2019diffhist+1,143
Enid Blyton
Added additional source on Blyton censorship in 20th Century and matching intro paragraph to "Critical backlash" section. Adjusted third and fourth backlash paragraphs for clarification/section-flow. (Note that Tucker's comment about the banning of Blyton's books is a secondhand statement; more direct quotation appropriate.)
04:5104:51, 20 March 2015diffhist+114
Enid Blyton
→Critical backlash: Cleaned up language in third backlash paragraph to emphasize that the comment about the banning of Blyton's books is coming from one secondhand statement by a single source, and to quote that source directly.
23:2823:28, 7 August 2023diffhist+359
Society of California Pioneers
Beginning article cleanup for American Old West Project. Adjusted formatting and article capitalization. Adjusted wording on some statements of fact pending later citation. Added a great many links to wikipages for mentioned historical authors artists.Tag: Disambiguation links added
23:3423:34, 4 August 2023diffhist+2,300
Coca-Cola Zero Sugar
→Variants: Substantial Edit – Sortable key columns configured for Variants table. Added image for each variant where available from Wikimedia Commons. Clarified/cleaned up some information and formatting. Added Coke Ultimate.
10:2210:22, 9 January 2019diffhist+1,143
Enid Blyton
Added additional source on Blyton censorship in 20th Century and matching intro paragraph to "Critical backlash" section. Adjusted third and fourth backlash paragraphs for clarification/section-flow. (Note that Tucker's comment about the banning of Blyton's books is a secondhand statement; more direct quotation appropriate.)
04:5104:51, 20 March 2015diffhist+114
Enid Blyton
→Critical backlash: Cleaned up language in third backlash paragraph to emphasize that the comment about the banning of Blyton's books is coming from one secondhand statement by a single source, and to quote that source directly.