02:3102:31, 20 April 2024diffhist+18
Nicoll Highway collapse
→top: Link to Beam article section on waler/strut. Better, would be to omit this jargon from the lede, and simply write the text as: "a poorly designed support system". The linked jargon can be included in the body of the text. Its inclusion in the lede primarily serves to stop readers from reading while they look up the jargon, which is not needed in the lede to understand the accident. Multiple guidelines strongly encourage avoidance of such jargon in the lede section of articles.
07:5807:58, 10 April 2024diffhist−3
Project Mercury
Reverted 1 edit by
Zenphia1 (
talk): Not an appropriate use of gender neutrality. The program always intended to work with males; substituting plurals for historic he/him is confusing and not accurate. In some cases, "crew" or "crewed" can be used, but that alternative is not workable in these sentences.Tags: TwinkleUndo
02:3102:31, 20 April 2024diffhist+18
Nicoll Highway collapse
→top: Link to Beam article section on waler/strut. Better, would be to omit this jargon from the lede, and simply write the text as: "a poorly designed support system". The linked jargon can be included in the body of the text. Its inclusion in the lede primarily serves to stop readers from reading while they look up the jargon, which is not needed in the lede to understand the accident. Multiple guidelines strongly encourage avoidance of such jargon in the lede section of articles.
07:5807:58, 10 April 2024diffhist−3
Project Mercury
Reverted 1 edit by
Zenphia1 (
talk): Not an appropriate use of gender neutrality. The program always intended to work with males; substituting plurals for historic he/him is confusing and not accurate. In some cases, "crew" or "crewed" can be used, but that alternative is not workable in these sentences.Tags: TwinkleUndo