17:4717:47, 26 June 2008diffhist−8
Frank Chu
→Artistic lineage: I feel that the term "performance art" is a bit of a value judgment here, and that it requires replacement with a more neutral term until it can be sourced properly.
03:1803:18, 26 June 2008diffhist+12
Whale oil
Whale oil is a vital subject in the history of human fishing and technology. This article could use expansion by someone knowledgeable on the subject.
14:3714:37, 18 June 2008diffhist−25
Rye bread
The original sentence sounded really dumb...the current one still doesn't belong in the intro, really, but should certainly go somewhere.
17:4717:47, 26 June 2008diffhist−8
Frank Chu
→Artistic lineage: I feel that the term "performance art" is a bit of a value judgment here, and that it requires replacement with a more neutral term until it can be sourced properly.
03:1803:18, 26 June 2008diffhist+12
Whale oil
Whale oil is a vital subject in the history of human fishing and technology. This article could use expansion by someone knowledgeable on the subject.
14:3714:37, 18 June 2008diffhist−25
Rye bread
The original sentence sounded really dumb...the current one still doesn't belong in the intro, really, but should certainly go somewhere.