00:4300:43, 12 May 2019diffhist−181
Wiener's attack
Removed sentence that served no purpose, interrupted the flow of the article (dead stop), was written against the typical writing style of Wikipedia. Also removed/changed a few words to improve flow. Wikipedia doesn't need to be as boring as a college textbook
26 February 2019
03:1103:11, 26 February 2019diffhist−22
Bertagni
Rendering the article more neutral, less like an advertisement or something written by a marketing department. How do we know Corby Kummer was actually respected for example?
00:4300:43, 12 May 2019diffhist−181
Wiener's attack
Removed sentence that served no purpose, interrupted the flow of the article (dead stop), was written against the typical writing style of Wikipedia. Also removed/changed a few words to improve flow. Wikipedia doesn't need to be as boring as a college textbook
26 February 2019
03:1103:11, 26 February 2019diffhist−22
Bertagni
Rendering the article more neutral, less like an advertisement or something written by a marketing department. How do we know Corby Kummer was actually respected for example?