17:1317:13, 17 May 2011diffhist+273
Callie Crossley
working on correcting tone, adding critical historical information about the civil rights movement from 1954-1965, and particularly adding information on episode six of eyes on the prize which focused on the gains after the bloody march on selma
16:5416:54, 17 May 2011diffhist+187
m
Callie Crossley
trying to clean up "poorly sourced" information, and improve tone to eliminate the boxes that appear on the page!
23:3823:38, 16 May 2011diffhist+176
m
Callie Crossley
Added clarifying statements. Tried to work on the "tone" of the article, which Wikipedia editors have tagged as somewhat problematic, which I continue to edit....to improve.
17:1317:13, 17 May 2011diffhist+273
Callie Crossley
working on correcting tone, adding critical historical information about the civil rights movement from 1954-1965, and particularly adding information on episode six of eyes on the prize which focused on the gains after the bloody march on selma
16:5416:54, 17 May 2011diffhist+187
m
Callie Crossley
trying to clean up "poorly sourced" information, and improve tone to eliminate the boxes that appear on the page!
23:3823:38, 16 May 2011diffhist+176
m
Callie Crossley
Added clarifying statements. Tried to work on the "tone" of the article, which Wikipedia editors have tagged as somewhat problematic, which I continue to edit....to improve.