07:4007:40, 26 December 2011diffhist+227
Rind et al. controversy
I made proposed changes 1-4, but did not do 5 or 6, that is: "several"-->exact numbers; inserted similar data for national meta-analysis; minor wording adjustment; "denied"-->"indicated". See talk.
09:1809:18, 14 December 2011diffhist+4,827
Rind et al. controversy
Added Findings in Brief section. The only differences from the one posted to the talk page are (1) formatted citations & (2) attempted to improve wording of sentence that Radvo thought was unclear.
06:1006:10, 30 November 2011diffhist+3,312
Rind et al. controversy
I added a section titled "The Study's Findings in Brief" that in under 500 words attempts to summarize the major findings of the study. No other changes were made in this edit.
25 November 2011
22:4722:47, 25 November 2011diffhist+63
Rind et al. controversy
Dummy edit to create edit-summary: Some wording & a quote was imprecise, incorrect, or misleading. I replaced some of that wording with specific information from the original Rind article and filled in the complete quotation and corrected its cite.
12:2112:21, 10 January 2009diffhist+2,760
Adult
There were errors in the definition of biological adult; that section has been rewritten, expanded, and references have been added (other edits were minor to correct flow and typos).
07:4007:40, 26 December 2011diffhist+227
Rind et al. controversy
I made proposed changes 1-4, but did not do 5 or 6, that is: "several"-->exact numbers; inserted similar data for national meta-analysis; minor wording adjustment; "denied"-->"indicated". See talk.
09:1809:18, 14 December 2011diffhist+4,827
Rind et al. controversy
Added Findings in Brief section. The only differences from the one posted to the talk page are (1) formatted citations & (2) attempted to improve wording of sentence that Radvo thought was unclear.
06:1006:10, 30 November 2011diffhist+3,312
Rind et al. controversy
I added a section titled "The Study's Findings in Brief" that in under 500 words attempts to summarize the major findings of the study. No other changes were made in this edit.
25 November 2011
22:4722:47, 25 November 2011diffhist+63
Rind et al. controversy
Dummy edit to create edit-summary: Some wording & a quote was imprecise, incorrect, or misleading. I replaced some of that wording with specific information from the original Rind article and filled in the complete quotation and corrected its cite.
12:2112:21, 10 January 2009diffhist+2,760
Adult
There were errors in the definition of biological adult; that section has been rewritten, expanded, and references have been added (other edits were minor to correct flow and typos).