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Fixed up the History Section by correcting tonal issues that made it sound more like a story than an encyclopedia entry and by adding more neutral language in places where my language was coming across as pro-VAMPTag: Visual edit
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User:MCDB40Student81/sandbox
Fixed up the History Section by correcting tonal issues that made it sound more like a story than an encyclopedia entry and by adding more neutral language in places where my language was coming across as pro-VAMPTag: Visual edit
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←Created page with 'Peer Review: This is a good start, and it looks like you've done your research. It was smart of you to focus on the history of cancer prevention, because this i...'current
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←Created page with 'Peer Review: I really like your additions to this article! It fleshes out detail where necessary and make it, on whole, much more complete. The tone is clear an...'