19:3819:38, 13 June 2024diffhist−6
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Li-Fi
Minor grammar & style fixup in section concerning a school trial - tenses were mixed and the phrase 'were able to' was repeated too often in the same sentence.current
08:2008:20, 9 June 2024diffhist+5
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Canada balsam
Style: Re-added the 'then' but into the sentence body as a minor fixup to further aid the chronology.currentTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
08:1708:17, 9 June 2024diffhist−5
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Canada balsam
Style: Substituting a full-stop for the comma and the word 'then' aids parsing of the paragraph as a whole.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
09:1109:11, 15 August 2022diffhist+108
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Rent's rule
Clarity: Added a simplified abstract of the Rule to the opening paragraph. The first paragraph should generally contain a simple précis of the detailed discussion that follows.
10:5010:50, 29 May 2022diffhist+9
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Mica
Added 'silicate' to introductory paragraph for clarity, as otherwise one has to scroll down a ways to see what the mineral is.
18:2818:28, 30 July 2021diffhist−110
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Replica 1
Removed incorrect sentence about unavailability of the two models. Additionally, stock levels are not the purview of an encyclopaedia article.
19:3819:38, 13 June 2024diffhist−6
m
Li-Fi
Minor grammar & style fixup in section concerning a school trial - tenses were mixed and the phrase 'were able to' was repeated too often in the same sentence.current
08:2008:20, 9 June 2024diffhist+5
m
Canada balsam
Style: Re-added the 'then' but into the sentence body as a minor fixup to further aid the chronology.currentTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
08:1708:17, 9 June 2024diffhist−5
m
Canada balsam
Style: Substituting a full-stop for the comma and the word 'then' aids parsing of the paragraph as a whole.Tags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
09:1109:11, 15 August 2022diffhist+108
m
Rent's rule
Clarity: Added a simplified abstract of the Rule to the opening paragraph. The first paragraph should generally contain a simple précis of the detailed discussion that follows.
10:5010:50, 29 May 2022diffhist+9
m
Mica
Added 'silicate' to introductory paragraph for clarity, as otherwise one has to scroll down a ways to see what the mineral is.
18:2818:28, 30 July 2021diffhist−110
m
Replica 1
Removed incorrect sentence about unavailability of the two models. Additionally, stock levels are not the purview of an encyclopaedia article.