14:5814:58, 30 August 2013diffhist−1,190
Lone Ranger
→Origin: I'm deleting this for two reasons. First, it is not the origin of anything. And second, there is no indication of which version this stems from.
20:3720:37, 2 July 2013diffhist−109
Voltron Force
→Premise: The new text is no better than the text it replaced. In lieu of undoing that revision, I'm paring this down to sound less like an ad-exec-wanna-be's rendition and more of a basic description of the premise.
19:2519:25, 6 June 2013diffhist−172
Star Trek Into Darkness
→Distribution: It's questionable to say the dedication is "due to" Abrams' connection to the organization (especially without any source); some could easily argue the dedication was due to Khan's similarity to Osama bin Laden.
15:2115:21, 21 May 2013diffhist+42
Star Trek Into Darkness
→Plot: To say Scotty convinces Kirk not to kill Khan is inaccurate. He only begs Kirk not to use the weapons. This change is hardly causing bloat. And even if it were, it's more accurate.
14:5814:58, 30 August 2013diffhist−1,190
Lone Ranger
→Origin: I'm deleting this for two reasons. First, it is not the origin of anything. And second, there is no indication of which version this stems from.
20:3720:37, 2 July 2013diffhist−109
Voltron Force
→Premise: The new text is no better than the text it replaced. In lieu of undoing that revision, I'm paring this down to sound less like an ad-exec-wanna-be's rendition and more of a basic description of the premise.
19:2519:25, 6 June 2013diffhist−172
Star Trek Into Darkness
→Distribution: It's questionable to say the dedication is "due to" Abrams' connection to the organization (especially without any source); some could easily argue the dedication was due to Khan's similarity to Osama bin Laden.
15:2115:21, 21 May 2013diffhist+42
Star Trek Into Darkness
→Plot: To say Scotty convinces Kirk not to kill Khan is inaccurate. He only begs Kirk not to use the weapons. This change is hardly causing bloat. And even if it were, it's more accurate.