12:4712:47, 19 February 2022diffhist+2
Corset controversy
→Mothers and daughters: Mismatched parentheses. Either "the women (and in particular the girls) were expected" or "the women and (in particular) the girls were expected" make sense with the parenthetical clause removed. But "the women and (...) were expected" is not syntactically robust.
09:2009:20, 19 February 2022diffhist+218
Corset controversy
→Marriage: I checked the sourced reference and the "when/with" human error had been introduced by the wiki contributor. Corrected the direct quote. Could not access the source for "I though I" so templated it for the future. Clarified that "laced down" is verbal, not adjectival.
09:1709:17, 19 February 2022diffhist+11
Bralessness
→Academic dress codes: The 2006 occasion is described as happening in Singapore. The 2017 occasion is left in a mystery location until the ACLU is mentioned. Fixed that. If Quebec gets wikilinked, Montana should too.
12:4712:47, 19 February 2022diffhist+2
Corset controversy
→Mothers and daughters: Mismatched parentheses. Either "the women (and in particular the girls) were expected" or "the women and (in particular) the girls were expected" make sense with the parenthetical clause removed. But "the women and (...) were expected" is not syntactically robust.
09:2009:20, 19 February 2022diffhist+218
Corset controversy
→Marriage: I checked the sourced reference and the "when/with" human error had been introduced by the wiki contributor. Corrected the direct quote. Could not access the source for "I though I" so templated it for the future. Clarified that "laced down" is verbal, not adjectival.
09:1709:17, 19 February 2022diffhist+11
Bralessness
→Academic dress codes: The 2006 occasion is described as happening in Singapore. The 2017 occasion is left in a mystery location until the ACLU is mentioned. Fixed that. If Quebec gets wikilinked, Montana should too.