15:3815:38, 4 February 2014diffhist+25
Charter school
An individual charter school, on its own, is not an "alternative education system" though that is what this sentence means as it stands. Rather, charter schools as a concept are an example of alternative education. I have restructured the lede accordingly
20:0720:07, 31 January 2014diffhist−13
A Song of Ice and Fire
Why's this linked to the Feminism article? Feminism is not nearly the only reason for a diverse portrayal of women, and praise for the same, in fiction. There are any number of good reasons for it and it's presumptuous to assume it is a Feminist statement
30 January 2014
12:3912:39, 30 January 2014diffhist−228
Women and children first
Removed some blatant POV, OR commentary. This is around sourced material (the Uppsala University study) however the commentary I have removed is both original (not from that study) and clearly biased - 2 POV general statements not sourced to anywhere.
12:2912:29, 30 January 2014diffhist+181
Masculism
Added additional definition that was already in one of the existing citations (the Blackwell Western Philosophy dictionary).
09:0209:02, 28 January 2014diffhist−292
Cyberpunk derivatives
→Retrofuturistic derivatives: Deleted this section - a single example does not establish a whole derivative style. If a single author coins a new -punk term to describe only their work, should we put it here? We should expect to see more than 1 work.Tag: section blanking
08:5808:58, 28 January 2014diffhist−47
Cyberpunk derivatives
The first two Bioshocks are more Decopunk than Dieselpunk. Yes, they are set after the 1950s, but Rapture was built during the 50s according to 40s aesthetics. Rapture is largely an Art Deco city in its styling, as many reviewers have commented.
11:4011:40, 27 January 2014diffhist−963
Chauvinism
Introducing much needed NPOV to this POV section by actually attributing views, rather than indulging in POV by stating them as if they were absolute fact. The "Role of Women" section is really an original interpretation of sources, so I'm removing it.
09:5809:58, 27 January 2014diffhist−124
Neomercantilism
What? The pre-industrial governments of classical mercantilism had no option but to accept markets in their domestic economies, there were no Renaissance planning depts telling the village butcher and tavern what they could charge, nor anything like that.
09:2409:24, 27 January 2014diffhist+133
Mercantilism
These just seem like generic protectionist arguments, where is the evidence they are specifically "neomercantilist"?
09:1309:13, 27 January 2014diffhist−299
Mercantilism
Removing this until it's better explained because at the moment it verges on meaningless (poor grammar doesn't help). Which corporate entities are favored and which hindered and why? Why is this "Reverse-mercantilism"? What regulations and taxes are used?
15:3815:38, 4 February 2014diffhist+25
Charter school
An individual charter school, on its own, is not an "alternative education system" though that is what this sentence means as it stands. Rather, charter schools as a concept are an example of alternative education. I have restructured the lede accordingly
20:0720:07, 31 January 2014diffhist−13
A Song of Ice and Fire
Why's this linked to the Feminism article? Feminism is not nearly the only reason for a diverse portrayal of women, and praise for the same, in fiction. There are any number of good reasons for it and it's presumptuous to assume it is a Feminist statement
30 January 2014
12:3912:39, 30 January 2014diffhist−228
Women and children first
Removed some blatant POV, OR commentary. This is around sourced material (the Uppsala University study) however the commentary I have removed is both original (not from that study) and clearly biased - 2 POV general statements not sourced to anywhere.
12:2912:29, 30 January 2014diffhist+181
Masculism
Added additional definition that was already in one of the existing citations (the Blackwell Western Philosophy dictionary).
09:0209:02, 28 January 2014diffhist−292
Cyberpunk derivatives
→Retrofuturistic derivatives: Deleted this section - a single example does not establish a whole derivative style. If a single author coins a new -punk term to describe only their work, should we put it here? We should expect to see more than 1 work.Tag: section blanking
08:5808:58, 28 January 2014diffhist−47
Cyberpunk derivatives
The first two Bioshocks are more Decopunk than Dieselpunk. Yes, they are set after the 1950s, but Rapture was built during the 50s according to 40s aesthetics. Rapture is largely an Art Deco city in its styling, as many reviewers have commented.
11:4011:40, 27 January 2014diffhist−963
Chauvinism
Introducing much needed NPOV to this POV section by actually attributing views, rather than indulging in POV by stating them as if they were absolute fact. The "Role of Women" section is really an original interpretation of sources, so I'm removing it.
09:5809:58, 27 January 2014diffhist−124
Neomercantilism
What? The pre-industrial governments of classical mercantilism had no option but to accept markets in their domestic economies, there were no Renaissance planning depts telling the village butcher and tavern what they could charge, nor anything like that.
09:2409:24, 27 January 2014diffhist+133
Mercantilism
These just seem like generic protectionist arguments, where is the evidence they are specifically "neomercantilist"?
09:1309:13, 27 January 2014diffhist−299
Mercantilism
Removing this until it's better explained because at the moment it verges on meaningless (poor grammar doesn't help). Which corporate entities are favored and which hindered and why? Why is this "Reverse-mercantilism"? What regulations and taxes are used?