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@ Urbourbo: I'm curious about the inclusion of a long sentence on the benefits of flywheel training in this article on a corporation producing flywheels. The appropriate article for these claims seems to be Flywheel training (thank you for your work on this interesting training concept). For comparison, I wouldn't expect the article on Eleiko to enumerate the benefits of barbell exercise. Draken Bowser ( talk) 20:22, 26 July 2022 (UTC)
For anyone verifying the sources of this draft, the key Dagens Industri print article can easily be found by searching for the subject name in their archive although it doesn't seem to be possible to link directly. / Urbourbo ( talk) 22:22, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
Besides some existing references being questioned (and removed) above, the main concern of the template added to the article was that it "needs multiple published sources that are: in-depth, reliable, secondary, [and] strictly independent of the subject". With regards to this concern, I asked above if the Swedish language references had been considered, which was not answered. Hence, let me clarify that I do believe that primarily the source by Rönnlund meets all of these four criteria. It is indeed an in-depth article (spread over two pages in the print edition), in a reliable source (the largest Swedish business daily newspaper), it's secondary, and strictly independent. For any Swedish-fluent editor there should be no doubts about this source. Several other Swedish sources meet all criteria except possibly in-depth although their main focus is on its products and founder (like Wagner, Lydén). Might be valuable with the assessment by any Swedish admin on this? Thanks in advance, / Urbourbo ( talk) 22:29, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
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@ Urbourbo: I'm curious about the inclusion of a long sentence on the benefits of flywheel training in this article on a corporation producing flywheels. The appropriate article for these claims seems to be Flywheel training (thank you for your work on this interesting training concept). For comparison, I wouldn't expect the article on Eleiko to enumerate the benefits of barbell exercise. Draken Bowser ( talk) 20:22, 26 July 2022 (UTC)
For anyone verifying the sources of this draft, the key Dagens Industri print article can easily be found by searching for the subject name in their archive although it doesn't seem to be possible to link directly. / Urbourbo ( talk) 22:22, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
Besides some existing references being questioned (and removed) above, the main concern of the template added to the article was that it "needs multiple published sources that are: in-depth, reliable, secondary, [and] strictly independent of the subject". With regards to this concern, I asked above if the Swedish language references had been considered, which was not answered. Hence, let me clarify that I do believe that primarily the source by Rönnlund meets all of these four criteria. It is indeed an in-depth article (spread over two pages in the print edition), in a reliable source (the largest Swedish business daily newspaper), it's secondary, and strictly independent. For any Swedish-fluent editor there should be no doubts about this source. Several other Swedish sources meet all criteria except possibly in-depth although their main focus is on its products and founder (like Wagner, Lydén). Might be valuable with the assessment by any Swedish admin on this? Thanks in advance, / Urbourbo ( talk) 22:29, 1 December 2022 (UTC)