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Jack Hammond | |
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| Born | John A. Hammond |
| Alma mater | University of Massachusetts Boston |
| Occupation(s) | Executive Director of Home Base, a Mass General and Red Sox Foundation program |
| Known for | Retired United States Army Brigadier General |
| Website | https://homebase.org/staff/jack-hammond/ |
John. A "Jack" Hammond is a retired United States Army Brigadier General [1] who has served as the Executive Director of Home Base since 2012. [2]
Home Base, a national nonprofit founded by Massachusetts General Hospital and the Boston Red Sox, is dedicated to healing the invisible wounds of war for Veterans, Service Members Military Families and Families of the Fallen at no cost to them. [3]
Early Life and Education
A native of Reading, Massachusetts, [2] Hammond grew up in a military family with four relatives serving in World War II and one each in Korea and Vietnam. He is a 1979 graduate of Reading Memorial High School. [4]
Hammond holds a Bachelor of Science in criminal justice from the University of Massachusetts Boston. While an undergraduate, he was commissioned as a second lieutenant through the Massachusetts Military Academy Officer Candidate School. Hammond also holds a Master’s in healthcare marketing from Boston University and was a National Security Fellow at Harvard University. [2]
Military Career
Hammond's military career began in 1984 [4] and includes leading United States and NATO forces in combat and counterterrorism operations in both Iraq and Afghanistan. [1] In his first years as a full-time officer, Hammond served in many roles in the Military Police Corps (United States). [4]
In 2002, following the September 11 attacks, Hammond deployed to Afghanistan. [4]
In 2003, Hammond simultaneously commanded two battalions in Iraq, Task Force Patriot in Balad and Task Force Enforcer in Fallujah, [2] on more than 100 intelligence counterterrorist operations. [1]
In 2006, Hammond was deployed to New Orleans in support of Hurricane Katrina disaster relief. He served as the Chief of Staff of the Massachusetts Joint Force Headquarters and oversaw the operational readiness and strategic planning efforts for the 8,500 Soldiers and Airmen of the Massachusetts National Guard. [2]
In 2011, Hammond became the first Massachusetts National Guard officer to achieve the rank of General in a combat theater since World War II. From 2011 to 2012, he commanded Task Force Yankee and the Kabul Base Cluster Command in Kabul. As Commanding General of the 26th Maneuver Enhanced Brigade, he was responsible for a multinational security force of 3,000 personnel, providing security and support for 11 United States installations and 10,000 coalition members. Task Force Yankee was also responsible for counterinsurgency, humanitarian assistance and area support for United States forces in Kabul. [2]
Boston Hope
In 2020, Hammond was tapped by then-Governor of Massachusetts Charlie Baker to lead build-out and operations for Boston Hope Medical Center, a 1,000-bed post-acute-care hospital built in one week in anticipation of a possible crush of patients that could overwhelm Boston-area hospitals due to the COVID-19 pandemic, partly for his experience in responding to disasters, both human-caused and natural. In the following months, Boston Hope would successfully provide care to more than 700 subacute patients who had COVID-19 or were recovering from it. [5]
Awards and Decorations
Hammond is the recipient of numerous military awards, including the Distinguished Service Medal, the Legion of Merit with Oak Leaf Cluster, Bronze Star Medal, Meritorious Service Medal with Oak Leaf Cluster, and Army Commendation Medal for Valor with Oak Leaf Cluster. [2]
References
- ^ a b c Hagan, Stephen (January 23, 2024). "U.S. Army leader to launch Manchester speaker series". Gloucester Daily Times.
- ^ a b c d e f g "Reading native Brig. Gen. Jack Hammond (Ret.) chosen to lead Red Sox Foundation, Home Base Program". Daily Times Chronicle. October 4, 2012.
- ^ "Suffolk Announces Expanded National Collaboration With Home Base Through Charitable Commitment Dedicated to World-Class Veteran Care". businesswire. November 10, 2023.
- ^ a b c d Maroney, David (June 17, 2019). "General Jack Hammond, (Ret.) gets vets to Home Base". Daily Times Chronicle.
- ^ Buckley, M.R.F. (July 14, 2020). "Building Hope". Harvard Medical School.
Submission declined on 31 March 2024 by
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| Submission declined on 24 October 2023 by
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| Submission declined on 2 September 2023 by
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For a living person we have a high standard of referencing. Every substantive fact you assert, especially one that is susceptible to potential challenge, requires a citation with a reference that is about them, and is independent of them, in multiple secondary sources which are WP:RS, and is significant coverage. Please also see WP:PRIMARY which details the limited permitted usage of primary sources and WP:SELFPUB which has clear limitations on self published sources. Providing sufficient references, ideally one per fact cited, that meet these tough criteria is likely to make this draft a clear acceptance (0.9 probability). Lack of them or an inability to find them is likely to mean that the person is not suitable for inclusion, certainly today. Please inspect each reference to make sure it is about Hammond, not about something else entirely. Discard thise that aren't about Hammond. Replace any that come up with "page not found" or similar. The first one I examined was one of these Your lead section feels like a paean of praise. Itls an article you are writing, not his eulogyThis submission is not adequately supported by
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verified. If you need help with referencing, please see
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Citing sources. | |
| This article may have been created or edited in return for undisclosed payments, a violation of Wikipedia's
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neutral point of view. (September 2023) |
Jack Hammond | |
|---|---|
| Born | John A. Hammond |
| Alma mater | University of Massachusetts Boston |
| Occupation(s) | Executive Director of Home Base, a Mass General and Red Sox Foundation program |
| Known for | Retired United States Army Brigadier General |
| Website | https://homebase.org/staff/jack-hammond/ |
John. A "Jack" Hammond is a retired United States Army Brigadier General [1] who has served as the Executive Director of Home Base since 2012. [2]
Home Base, a national nonprofit founded by Massachusetts General Hospital and the Boston Red Sox, is dedicated to healing the invisible wounds of war for Veterans, Service Members Military Families and Families of the Fallen at no cost to them. [3]
Early Life and Education
A native of Reading, Massachusetts, [2] Hammond grew up in a military family with four relatives serving in World War II and one each in Korea and Vietnam. He is a 1979 graduate of Reading Memorial High School. [4]
Hammond holds a Bachelor of Science in criminal justice from the University of Massachusetts Boston. While an undergraduate, he was commissioned as a second lieutenant through the Massachusetts Military Academy Officer Candidate School. Hammond also holds a Master’s in healthcare marketing from Boston University and was a National Security Fellow at Harvard University. [2]
Military Career
Hammond's military career began in 1984 [4] and includes leading United States and NATO forces in combat and counterterrorism operations in both Iraq and Afghanistan. [1] In his first years as a full-time officer, Hammond served in many roles in the Military Police Corps (United States). [4]
In 2002, following the September 11 attacks, Hammond deployed to Afghanistan. [4]
In 2003, Hammond simultaneously commanded two battalions in Iraq, Task Force Patriot in Balad and Task Force Enforcer in Fallujah, [2] on more than 100 intelligence counterterrorist operations. [1]
In 2006, Hammond was deployed to New Orleans in support of Hurricane Katrina disaster relief. He served as the Chief of Staff of the Massachusetts Joint Force Headquarters and oversaw the operational readiness and strategic planning efforts for the 8,500 Soldiers and Airmen of the Massachusetts National Guard. [2]
In 2011, Hammond became the first Massachusetts National Guard officer to achieve the rank of General in a combat theater since World War II. From 2011 to 2012, he commanded Task Force Yankee and the Kabul Base Cluster Command in Kabul. As Commanding General of the 26th Maneuver Enhanced Brigade, he was responsible for a multinational security force of 3,000 personnel, providing security and support for 11 United States installations and 10,000 coalition members. Task Force Yankee was also responsible for counterinsurgency, humanitarian assistance and area support for United States forces in Kabul. [2]
Boston Hope
In 2020, Hammond was tapped by then-Governor of Massachusetts Charlie Baker to lead build-out and operations for Boston Hope Medical Center, a 1,000-bed post-acute-care hospital built in one week in anticipation of a possible crush of patients that could overwhelm Boston-area hospitals due to the COVID-19 pandemic, partly for his experience in responding to disasters, both human-caused and natural. In the following months, Boston Hope would successfully provide care to more than 700 subacute patients who had COVID-19 or were recovering from it. [5]
Awards and Decorations
Hammond is the recipient of numerous military awards, including the Distinguished Service Medal, the Legion of Merit with Oak Leaf Cluster, Bronze Star Medal, Meritorious Service Medal with Oak Leaf Cluster, and Army Commendation Medal for Valor with Oak Leaf Cluster. [2]
References
- ^ a b c Hagan, Stephen (January 23, 2024). "U.S. Army leader to launch Manchester speaker series". Gloucester Daily Times.
- ^ a b c d e f g "Reading native Brig. Gen. Jack Hammond (Ret.) chosen to lead Red Sox Foundation, Home Base Program". Daily Times Chronicle. October 4, 2012.
- ^ "Suffolk Announces Expanded National Collaboration With Home Base Through Charitable Commitment Dedicated to World-Class Veteran Care". businesswire. November 10, 2023.
- ^ a b c d Maroney, David (June 17, 2019). "General Jack Hammond, (Ret.) gets vets to Home Base". Daily Times Chronicle.
- ^ Buckley, M.R.F. (July 14, 2020). "Building Hope". Harvard Medical School.