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I fixed
Template:fide so that it works again, but I wouldn't be surprised if
FIDE makes more changes to their website so that we need to update the template once more, possibly even to use fide.com as before. The template is very simple, so just about anyone can make this kind of fix if needed. This is an excellent example of why it is better to use
Template:fide and
Template:chessgames player rather than hard-coding those external links into the page. I think we should consider creating a template for
http://www.olimpbase.org as well.
Quale (
talk)
05:43, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
I wasn't aware of the existence of either of those templates. They should definitely be mentioned in the Templates section of this project page as they're very useful.
Pawnkingthree (
talk)
09:13, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
What is a piece?
We need to say something about the two different meanings of "piece", depending on the context. This is especially important in articles that non-chessplayers are likely to read. For instance, see the talk page of
Immortal game, "What is a piece?" section. It is in
List of chess terms#Piece, and we can link to that. But is there a better way to do it? Perhaps a short article that explains the two different contexts that can be linked to, or maybe expand the Chess Terms one a little?
Bubba73(talk),
18:14, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
It a good question and highly confusing even when English is not your second language!
It says in the
Immortal game LEAD "He gives up both rooks and then his queen, checkmating his opponent with his three remaining pieces". Later it says White has been able to use his remaining pieces - two knights and a bishop - to force mate.
piece = all but pawns. So Q, R, B, N, K.
pieces = all pieces K, Q, R, B, N, P or and confusingly a collection of piece being pieces.
The lead is okay, because it's talking about checkmating - this is the context and that is done with exactly three pieces. However more confusion comes because in the final position White giving mate has a total of four pieces (two knights, a bishop and a King) and ten pieces (two knights, a bishop, a King and 6 pawns).
SunCreator (
talk)
18:46, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
I'm not aware of two different meanings. To me it's always been clear- a "piece" refers to either knight, bishop, rook, queen or king, but not pawns. If pieces and pawns are referred to then the term is "
chessmen", or just "men". Maybe it's old fashioned now but it's what I was taught!
Pawnkingthree (
talk)
22:49, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
Can't say I've used the word 'Chessmen' but have read it. Isn't the word difficult if one of the 'Chessmen' is a women, the Queen?
SunCreator (
talk)
00:30, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
"Piece" as both meanings, see
Chess terminology#Piece. And from Burgess: "Can be used to signify either any chess piece, or a major or minor piece, as opposed to a pawn. Generally the context makes the meaning clear."
Bubba73(talk),
00:31, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
Of course "piece" can be used loosely to refer to pawns but as it has a more specific meaning I think that should be avoided, to avoid confusion. The main chess article, for example, says each side begins the game with sixteen pieces; that should say eight pieces and eight pawns, or sixteen chessmen (alhough I take SunCreator's point about the queen).
Pawnkingthree (
talk)
08:29, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
That particular thing was debated once, and it was decided that each side has sixteen physical pieces. That's what the references say too.
Bubba73(talk),
14:31, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
Am I the only one who thinks that "generally the context makes the meaning clear" a la Burgess isn't good enough? It clearly does cause confusion, as the
Immortal game Talk page shows. Why don't we just stick to the proper, specific meaning?
Pawnkingthree (
talk)
14:54, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
It is proper to use it both ways, as in the two references. Also see how
FIDE laws of chess uses the word - it is inthere over 60 times, and every one is in the general sense. Do you want the touch-move rule to read "if a player touches a piece or a pawn or his king..."? I don't think so.
Bubba73(talk),
15:19, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
See above where I mentioned "chessman" or "man" as an alternative. But I won't pursue the point any further as I don't seem to be getting any support:)
Pawnkingthree (
talk)
15:27, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
I would just like to say that I am extremely grateful for these pages. I can't afford any chess books (I don't get allowance or get paid for any chores by my parents) so the only resource I have is the internet through the library. I don't know how many people have thanked you all for taking the trouble to post this information up, but I'd like to just be another person to tell you that I've been reading all of this! I just hope that some wiki mod doesn't show up and delete the pages saying it's too much information, because I've seen articles cut down a lot because of it. Anyway, you guys can just delete this after a bit, but I just wanted to give a thank you because this is the best!
It seems to me that there is a lot more about chess in Wikipedia than in Wikibooks. The Wikibooks stuff seems limited and isn't updated much.
Bubba73(talk),
14:54, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
I understand why editors are that way. I'm that way myself. Wikibooks doesn't seem to have many readers compared to Wikipedia. Wikipedia shows up at the top of Google searches but not Wikibooks. Since I'm giving my time to try to help people, I want to do it where it will do some good.
Bubba73(talk),
16:36, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
Link to FIDE rules
Since FIDE changed their website, the link to the Laws of Chess has changed. This is referenced in a number of places. The new link is
FIDE Laws of chess. I've changed it at the end of
rules of chess, but the old page is referenced in several articles, I think.
Strangely, it is very hard to get to this page on the new website. If you go to Handbook and click on "Laws of Chess", all you get is the appendix for adjourned games, blind players, etc.
Bubba73(talk),
14:51, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
I'm going to remove this from the list of articles to create. While I suggested it should be a separate from
Magical objects in Harry Potter and an interesting one from a chess perspective because of
this from
Jeremy Silman. The problem is that I can't establish
notability for "Wizard's Chess" on it's own. The Jeremy Silman link is not an independent source and while the
Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone film/book is quite significant it's only one scene. If anyone knows of this articles notability that I've missed please let me know.
SunCreator (
talk)
13:01, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
Where should "chess notation" go?
Where should "chess notation" go, if it is only used in one section - at the top of the article or at the top of that section?
Bubba73(talk),
02:55, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
When an article referrs to squares by their algebraic designation, but no moves, should "chess notation" be used?
I agree with Bubba and SyG. The first one (where) for no real particular reason except that I find templates in the middle of articles to be uglier than templates at the top of articles. The second one (when) is because the template is unobtrusive and useful for any article where chess notation is used, and naming of squares are a part of notation.
Sjakkalle(Check!)06:21, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
If it's an article about
Chess then at the top, if it's
Biography about a person then in the section that applies. Your most like referring to how it's done in
Bobby Fischer, in that article it seems out of proportion to have it at the top.
SunCreator (
talk)
13:04, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
Yes, the change in
Bobby Fischer is what brought it up. For the other question,
Pawn (chess) used to have "chess notation", but it was removed on April 11. There are no moves in the article, but squares are named by their algebraic coordinates.
Bubba73(talk),
14:49, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
I'm here :-)
In the next time I'll be here for articles about chess composers (see my userpage). Hopefully you won't get too annoyed with me. :-) Oh, please tell me again where to add new articles! --
Constructor00:40, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
Welcome to the WikiProject Chess, we always love to have new contributors on board! Don't hesitate to ask the community for help, advice or comments. Have fun!
SyG (
talk)
07:24, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
Ok, will look through the archives. Hopefully I'll find it. Yes, I always have fun! Hey, don't get too acquainted to me, I'll leave when the articles are done. :-) --
Constructor17:54, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
Since you probably don't know - I'm one of the most active writers on de about this. So I know what Wikipedia is. --
Constructor19:08, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
You might be able to improve Deutsche Schachzeitung then, if you like. I just created it. I used some material from
de:Deutsche Schachzeitung, but I don't read (or speak) German, so I couldn't make out all of the German language article (which has no sources listed anyway). You could also talk to the goof who removed the interwiki link I added there, since unless things are very different on the German language wikipedia, interwiki links don't constitute "no improvement" or "vandalism".
Quale (
talk)
19:18, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
He says, it was probably due to a database issue and a wrong click on "back" in the browser and "revert" (without looking at the interwiki first).
See his reply in german here. At the moment there are lots of database issues on de (one reason I don't want to continue as much there at the moment). --
Constructor22:58, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
User:Sv9 seems to be adding external links to YouTube videos. The person in the video (Serguei Vorojtsov) has initials SV, so this is likely the same person. I watched one video, and it seemed OK to me, but what do others think about them staying in?
Bubba73(talk),
05:16, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
I have looked at one of the videos posted by
User:Sv9, the one on
Paul Morphy. The quality was rather poor: no explanation of the first 6 moves (by then, Morphy already had an overwhelming advantage!), no strategic consideration, no alternatives considered, etc. The presentator is certainly a great chessplayer, but not a good teacher I am afraid. This video did not bring a lot more information than a PGN.
Regarding our general attitude towards videos, I would propose the following principles:
judge each video separately, on the basis of what value it brings to the article
for a given article, retain at most one video in the external links (only the best one, arguably)
judge each video on the insight it would bring to the mainstream reader, i.e. generally a very weak player.
The first 4 edits he did were to upload images about Serguei Vorojtsov solving classical mechanics problems.
His 5th edit was to add Serguei Vorojtsov in the article
List of YouTube celebrities (now really...); strangely enough that was deleted rapidly :-)
His following edits were to add videos made by Serguei Vorojtsov on chess articles.
It seems he also tried to create an article about Serguei Vorojtsov, but that was speedy deleted.
Of course we should foremost
WP:AGF and not jump to quick conclusions about his real identity and his intentions for Wikipedia...
SyG (
talk)
07:47, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
My vote is just to blanket delete. I watched Levitsky-Marshall. It was entertaining, but not instructive at all and contained a 'full on' advert for a chess sales site at the end. These are just elaborate advertisements in my opinion and Peter Ballard is right to remind us of the past discussions. 'Bidmonfa' are currently taking over the biographies too - their worth seems to rely solely on a photo - and as we have a growing number here on wiki, I can't see why we should support them either. I think we need to be vigilant and remove everything except Chessgames.com, which brings a range of 'wiki editor-friendly' tools (database, reasonably reliable biography data, forum discussion of topical and historical issues ... etc.) and most importantly, no blatant advertising.
Brittle heaven (
talk)
08:10, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
Can't find the links to the videos in question. My take would be to judge each video separately and include only those that bring value to the article.
SunCreator (
talk)
10:24, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
Found three of them now on the history. They are not very good in presentation, nor useful to the topic matter. Did like Lasker's
King hunt game, perhaps we can make use of that game(the game not the video) in the future.
SunCreator (
talk)
10:38, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
I watched the Evans-Reshevsky one, and it stops just before the famous desparado swindle, and give an advertisement. I think it should go, and SyG has deleted it.
Bubba73(talk),
14:44, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
I added a few chess videos to the Hebrew WIKI. I did not see any advertisement so I think the best would be to judge every game by itself. By the way - most readers do not play chess at any rated level so the sentence "I think only IM or GM analysis is notable for the external links section" is a bit too much. Most players (99.99% of the WIKI readers) can benefit from an analysis of a 2000 rated player (much weaker than a master but still a capable player) as what he can show them is much to much for them. The delicate points that an IM or a GM can show them they would not understand anyway, and they do not have the patience to spend a few hours so that they may see his point. And remember that a video is very short, usually, and you can not get into deep explanations. For this kind of analysis we have chessbase (or other products - please do not think that this is an advertisement) and books. --
Niemzowitsch (
talk)
12:44, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
Re-assessment of many articles for quality.
Have been re-assessed over 200+ chess articles in the last few days. All B-Class and above or Top/High importance, over 200 articles in total.
Results are presented in a neat sortable table. I would post it here but it's rather big(!). It has really useful figures like traffic statistics, class and importance. Because the table is sortable it's really ideal to compare, say quality against important and importance against daily traffic.
Thanks for this. The idea of awarding points to every article
Wikipedia:WikiProject Chess/Assessment has its merits. But the current system can definitely be improved on. Some suggestions for improvement:
Although the system claims to be indicative for quality, it very much focusses on quantity. An article should be of a length suitable for the subject, so short well written articles get punished in this system.
Things like spelling, grammar, tone, style and stylistic issues are ignored. These are all extremely important for an FA push. As an example, proper referencing is totally ignore. (eg
First move advantage in chess has currently the most points, but fails to cite websites correctly (they miss the access/retrieved date).
Negative points get awarded for the article not chess project focused. As far as I know, quality has nothing to do with the subject matter. Personally, I would not award negative points, but only positive. EG +3 for completeness, +2 for style, etc..
That is indeed a lot of good work. One thing I noticed is that with a few exceptions, 7 points or higher is a B (or higher).
However, Voorlandt has a valid point about quality versus quantity. There is a lot to say about World Chess Championship, but how much is there to be said about Castling? This also applies to references. For inztance, the MoS says that it is OK for a short article to have just a list of references instead of inline references. A short article may have no inline references but have the Oxford Companion listed as a reference, and that could be sufficient. Also, about the table of contents - that depends on the number of sections the article has and a setting in your preferences tells how many sections are required to show to TOC. But good work overall.
Bubba73(talk),
21:25, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
(edit conflict)Yes, thank for your ideas. It does indeed give weight to quantity. I don't think there is any claim to be indicative for quality, if so it's likely a typo! There is a trade off between assessing an article in a reasonable time span and looking for a more refined detail. Perhaps the next review of a article will be the more refined type but for a lesser number of articles. Checking to the level of cite websites correctly would be rather time consuming I would imagine and somewhat hindering because only web references can easily be checked unless you have the various books in question. One thing that comes to focus is articles that nearing completion but still have little content. I'm not sure such articles could ever achieve GA status, so perhaps they are better off to be merged with other articles? Or maybe not, but those type of articles are the ones that seem to be struggling, although even then an article like
en passant should be able to get to 9 or 10 points which puts it clearly in the area where all such articles are equivalent to B-Class.
SunCreator (
talk)
21:38, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
Yea,
en passant is an interesting example. It is the only one with 6 points that is B, and most of the ones with 7 points or more are B or higher. I've worked on the article and I am the one that raized it to B a days ago. It gets 400+ hits per day, so a lot of people are reading it. But I think it is fairly complete, and I can't think of anything else to day about it.
Bubba73(talk),
22:29, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
More on
en passant, the content rating of 2 points says it has 3-4 paragraphs, but I count 7, not counting the "illustration" section that has three diagrams with captions but no paragraph, per se. The rating of 1 point for references says 3-4, but there is one external link to a game, five books listed as general references, plus an external link to the FIDE laws (which should really be a reference.)
Bubba73(talk),
22:52, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
Five paragraphs. 3-5 for 2 points.(sorry 5 was absence from summary before). Three paragraphs before the TOC and two in 'Historical context'. One line sentence not counted. Diagram captions aren't counted unless they are a mouthful, which these are not. There are six references as you correctly highlight and that count as 2 ref points not one, my mistake seems references been added since it was
assessed. External links don't count. My recommendation for this article is to somehow make an animation, it's really hard to grasp without seeing it in action at least once. I remember as a beginner how tricky this idea is.
SunCreator (
talk)
23:09, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
There are the three snapshot diagrams. I don't know how to make an animation. Also, I count seven paragraphs: Lead: 3, example in opening: 1 (admittedly one sentence, but includes moves and diagram caption), example in game: 1 (three sentences plus diagram captions and moves), history: 2.
Bubba73(talk),
23:32, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
GIMP would do it, it's free, it can do it, but it's rather tedious unless you are a bit advanced at using software. If you go that route, I might be able to at least piont the right way, I have GIMP but know it can be quite unproductive time wise.
I discounted middle bits as short sentences. While technically short sentences can be paragraphs if it's got some a few full stops. I've not counted that, counting two full lines of text and more, stretching into the third line at least. The third paragraph as in the lead is about the minimum.
SunCreator (
talk)
23:49, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
OK. My point is not to argue about this article or how paragraphs/references are counted. But this article does show how an article can say about all there is to be said about a subject, yet get a relatively low rating. As I said, I don't know much more it can say. It says more than rulebooks and chess encyclopedias. It has the lead, a simple illustration, an example from the opening, an example from an interesting game where first it was not used and then it was used to checkmate, and some history. In some other articles (
touch-move rule,
threefold repetition,
castling) I've added some "human interest" stuff, and
fifty move rule has a bit where Kasparov and Karpov could have claimed the draw but didn't. But I don't know much else this article needs, other than the annimation you suggest.
Bubba73(talk),
00:00, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
Your right in concept here there are some articles like
En passant and
ICCF numeric notation that can't go beyond B-Class. If I understand correctly
En passant is to small to meet GA-articles criteria. This leaves the question what to do with it. Should we be happy when it's a complete B-Class article or aim to go higher by say adding it to another article as a section, perhaps a section in Rules of chess, although can imagine this would cause unbalancing of Rules of chess article. It's a question I don't know the answer to, but would like to hear comments.
SunCreator (
talk)
00:19, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
I think it should be left as its own article. It is already discussed in the Rules article, this is more in-depth. Making this a section in Rules would make that article out of balance.
Bubba73(talk),
00:27, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
Been reading through some FA discussion and seems no technical small size limitation to an article, however apparently small articles don't get submitted to the FA process. Not familiar enough with FA/GA workings to know why that is.
SunCreator (
talk)
00:40, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
I don't think articles such as
en passant should ever be FA. I don't think our goal should be make every chess article a FA. I think FA should be reserved for a select number of our articles with the widest appeal. Of course, non-FA articles should be as good as they need to be.
Bubba73(talk),
01:58, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
I agree that FA is not a required endpoint for all articles. I haven't followed GA criteria closely, but the GA process is fairly widely considered broken (by many at
WP:Mathematics for instance, and they have many more "good" articles than we do). In general the whole article review process concentrates heavily on what an article looks like on the surface level (lots of purty pictures, a certain ratio of inline cites/sentence, a certain number of sentences, paragraphs, and sections, etc.) It's basically an accounting exercise that rarely pays much attention at all to what the article actually says.
I think this discussion itself pretty much answers the question of why short articles don't get submitted to FA. I think worshiping the cult of the large article is harmful to writing a good encyclopedia. I actually have no problem with the end point for many small articles being B-class, and don't consider that to be a problem or an insult. On the other hand, I think a small, policy and guideline compliant, substantially complete, referenced article deserves a B-class rating unless it really is so small that it is a stub that ought to be merged.
ICCF numeric notation vastly exceeds a should-be-merged stub, and in my opinion is not far from B-class now.
Quale (
talk)
03:08, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
Are you doing that all by hand (no software to help)? Either way, that seems like a ton of work. We appreciate it.
Bubba73(talk),
03:09, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
It's largely manual but I'm using
Microsoft Excel to store, add up, sort and format. I'm not sure if that counts as 'software'. It's been a ton of work to setup, but adding new ones is quite straightforward, but I don't intend expanding more then the covered 400 articles as all top importance, high importance and B-Class articles are included..
SunCreator (
talk)
11:48, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
William Samuel Viner seems to be a
copyright violation.
The original source is very good and I think it could be rewritten to avoid the copyvio and be a good article. If anyone who is interested in Australian chess or just in chess bios in general would care to rewrite it, that would be great. I should do it, but I don't have the energy for that project right now and the copyvio can't be allowed to remain for long.
Quale (
talk)
03:51, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
A good criterion would be inclusion in the classified encyclopedia of chess variants (by
David Pritchard). I also think that inclusion in this book is a minimum requirement for the inclusion of a chess variant in wikipedia (minimum, definitely not sufficient, as some only get one or two lines in the book). On the
Shogi variants, Pritchard spends about 10 pages on them. If you have examples, I can look them up to see if they are there.
Voorlandt (
talk)
20:43, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
Hmmm that is a lot of variants. I am really not sure what is best. Clearly Shogi (very similar to
Crazyhouse) is a chess variant. Gets over 10 pages in Pritchard's encyclopedia (for comparison,
Bughouse chess gets two pages). Perhaps the easiest (and least controversial?) decision would be to include no shogi variants (but of course still
Shogi). Judging case by case is in any case hard.
Voorlandt (
talk)
10:31, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
Do we need this article?
Do we need
ECO A03? I haven't checked to see if there are others like it, but a year or so ago I think that we generally agreed that we don't need an article on each ECO code.
Bubba73(talk),
03:14, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
Seems pretty worthless to me. If we want to list all the ECO codes, the
Encyclopedia of Chess Openings article or someplace like that is the place to do so. I think very few readers, be they strong chessplayers or weak, are ever going to find or use the
ECO A03 article. I say we get rid of the thing.
Krakatoa (
talk)
06:17, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
I agree, let's try to avoid having hundreds of stubs while one single article can do better.
SyG (
talk)
06:38, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
This article, primarily written by me, is, I think, very well-researched and referenced, covers the topic thoroughly, and as best I can tell, satisfies all the criteria for A-class.
Quale wrote on the article's talk page, "I think it's very good, and your sections and section titles are much better than the ones I was thinking about. I'm bumping the rating to B. I would say it's an A-class article, but many WP:CHESS members think that the project A-rating requires a (semi-)formal review."
Krakatoa (
talk)
15:59, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
It is certainly a very fine article, well researched and documented. I have only two minor style issues, and they are not that big and could go either way.
Capitalization of "black" and "white". Usually these are when they are substitutes for a player's name, otherwise not, e.g. "then Black played..." when referring to a person, but "... the black queen... ". So maybe these should not be caps in the article. But I'm not sure.
Percent. The "%" character is used several times, and the style is that "%" is used in scientific work and in tables, info boxes etc, and that "percent" is used otherwise in text. This is no big deal.
I've tried to address the % issue now, substituting "percent" where reasonably possible. But I think doing so in a sentence like this would result in a nightmare: "Streeter found that overall White scored +38% =31% -31% (total 53.5%); in 1851-78, White scored +46% =14% -40% (total 53%); in 1881-1914, White scored +37% =32% -31% (total 53%); in 1914-32, White scored +37% =37% -26% (total 55.5%)." Compare "Streeter found that overall White scored +38 percent =31 percent -31 percent (total 53.5 percent); in 1851-78, White scored +46 percent =14 percent -40 percent (total 53 percent); in 1881-1914, White scored +37 percent =32 percent -31 percent (total 53 percent); in 1914-32, White scored +37 percent =37 percent -26 percent (total 55.5 percent)." Unbelievably long, cumbersome, and ugly; the reader will be asleep by the time he/she staggers to the end of that sentence. I think that in effect, a sentence like this one is a "table," so use of the % symbol rather than the word is appropriate.
As for capitalization of "white" and "black," I think the article does so appropriately. I don't believe that a phrase like "the black queen" ever occurs in it. Invariably, the article uses the two words to refer to the player(s) conducting the white or black pieces. I think that in that context "White" and "Black" are correct and almost universally used. See, e.g., The Oxford Companion to Chess (1st ed. 1984), p. 297 (article on "SCHLIEMANN DEFENCE") ("By playing 3...f5 Black weakens the diagonal a2-g8, but Jaenisch felt that his move might be practicable because White has not placed his light bishop on this diagonal."); Suba, Dynamic Chess Strategy, p. 134 ("Even the symmetrical variations of some openings present White with a critical moment at an early stage and he cannot progress without making concessions to Black."); Watson, Secrets of Modern Chess Strategy: Advances Since Nimzowitsch, p. 231 (among many other examples on this page and those following, "White maintained a 56%/44% winning percentage for most of the century . . . . But it is also true that some of the world's top players have scored brilliantly with Black.").
Krakatoa (
talk)
17:44, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
Here is what you asked: "This is a style issue - when should "white" and "black" be capitalized when talking about chess? My understanding is that they should only be capitalized when substituting for a proper name, such as "... White played the queen...", and not otherwise, such as "the black pieces". Is that correct?" I don't believe the article ever uses a phrase like "black pieces"/"Black pieces" so your example doesn't seem apropros. The article uses "White" and "Black" to refer to the collective results of persons playing the white pieces and persons playing the black pieces, respectively. As I said above, that as far as I can tell is the approach universally taken by chess writers (I cited the Oxford Companion to Chess, Suba, and Watson, and can add more if you like). What sentences in the article do you consider defective in this respect? To give a hypothetical, do you think that in a sentence like, "Statistics show that White scores 55 percent and Black 45 percent." "White" and "Black" should be lower-case, e.g. "Statistics show that white scores 55 percent and black 45 percent?" As I say, I think few if any chess writers outside of Wikipedia would write the latter.
Krakatoa (
talk)
18:24, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
I know that there are respected books that use Black and White that way, but there are plenty that don't. My understanding is that it should be like a proper name - caps when substituting for a proper name. In the case of this article, it is talking about an abstract player of the white or black pieces, not a particular player. I'm no expert, and could go either way, but I think not caps unless they are substitutes for proper names of a particular person is in keeping with our style.
Bubba73(talk),
18:57, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
OK, if "White" and "Black" are used as if a proper name would be used, even though there is no specific person, I think that is OK. So it would be "... the black queen... " versus "... Black's queen...", since in the second case, it is taking the place of a proper name. So I'm OK with that.
Bubba73(talk),
23:26, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
Approve From what
Bubba73 has written hereunder, I will consider he approves the article as A-class, unless he states otherwise here.
SyG (
talk)
17:21, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
Approve Given that the comments in my review hereabover have found solutions, I approve that this article should be given A-class, on the basis of this version.
Of course there is still room for improvement so I am not sure the article would do it to FA-class. For example the interesting comments made by Voorlandt on the
Talk page of the article about the relativity of the advantage depending on the level of players. But as long as there is no source it is difficult to work further on that.
SyG (
talk)
09:26, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
Comment Hereunder are my comments and proposals for improvements, based on the review of this version of the article.
in the Lead
The link between the first sentence and the second one may not be clear for an outsider, because in the first sentence we talk about "advantage" and in the second one we talk about "more chances to win", without doing an explicit link between these two notions. After all, an "advantage" could also be "less chances to lose" ? Done
The expression "scoring between 53 and 56 percent overall" in the second sentence is unclear for an outsider, even if it is explained in later sections. It may be understood that White wins 53% of the games, which is not what is meant. Done
The word "theorists" may not be clear for an outsider. What is a theorist, especially regarding chess ? Done
As mentioned below, in response to SunCreator, I intend to write an article on
chess theory (i.e. opening, middlegame, endgame theory) and link to that.
The expression "best play by both sides" may be worth a link to something (an article on Game theory ?) because for a non-game expert it may not be clear. Done
There is an obvious typo in the sentence "a game of chess should conclude in a draw with best draw". I will correct that. Done
The first sentence implies that White actually has an advantage, which is not proven by anyone. At first I thought that this was a problem and maybe the sentence should be phrased like "the probable advantage", but now I think it is not so bad because the third sentence clearly states that there is consensus on that. Done
I've added a table. I'm not sure if how it looks is appropriate. With/without border, what should be listed, to go at the beginning/middle or end of paragraph. All questions I don't have a clear answer to.
SunCreator (
talk)
11:33, 18 April 2008 (UTC).
The use of signs +, = and - is not explained, nor is the way to reach a total percentage. Done
The phrasing "More recently (in 2005)" is a bit redundant and heavy, the first two words would be sufficient. Done
I do not understand the structure of the second paragraph. It looks like just a list of evidences, which is good but could read better with one or two sentences to add fluidity or insight. Done
I added an explanatory sentence at the beginning of the paragraph.
in the section "Drawn with best play"
I find the formulation "The classical view is that White's objective is to extend" a bit heavy because of the repetition of "is". Why not something like "In the classical view, White's objective is to extend" ? But as I am not a native English-speaker, please tell me if I am wrong. Done
In the second sentence of the second paragraph, I do not understand why the first letter of the quote is in upper case. Is it compliant with
WP:MOS ? Done
I think so. Look at these examples given (not addressing this exact point, admittedly) under
Wikipedia:MOS#Quotation_marks:
Correct: Arthur said, "The situation is deplorable."
According to
WP:ELLIPSES, I think the three dots in the quote of Watson should be in brackets, like [...] Done
I don't see why. The guideline you cite says "An ellipsis does not normally need square brackets around it, since its function is usually obvious—especially if the guidelines above are followed. But square brackets may optionally be used for precision, to make it clear that the ellipsis is not itself quoted; this is usually only necessary if the quoted passage also uses three period in it to indicate a pause or suspension." The quoted passage doesn't use three periods in it, so square brackets are not necessary.
Krakatoa (
talk)
03:07, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
Right. The brackets are generally only used around an ellipsis if you use an ellipsis in a quote that already has one.
Bubba73(talk),
03:14, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
According to
WP:HEAD, the names of sections shall not include "special characters", although I am not sure the character " should be considered as special. Done
I find it problematic to name the section with the title of a book, while this section talks about other things than the book. Done
I have removed the quotation marks, so the title now is not just an allusion to the book. I think the title is a good one to tersely capure the concept -- especially since I reference Berliner saying that he is a disciple of Adams.
Krakatoa (
talk)
02:41, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
The player Horowitz shall be refered to by his full name (i.e. including surname), in order to be consistent with all the others and to avoid any REDIRECT link. Done
Hans Berliner should be presented as "a former World [...]" and not "the former World [...]". Done
Jeremy Silman should be presented as "International Master" and not "IM", in order to be consistent with all the others. Done
I think I've addressed this. The first International Master I cited, I used "
International Master," for the next one I used
IM and then just an unwikified "IM" thereafter.
Randy Bauer and Taylor Kingston are quoted but their credibility is not explained. Why are they authoritative ? It seems Randy Bauer is not even an IM ? Done
I removed the text references to Bauer and Kingston (though they're still mentioned as references). They're respected reviewers, I think, but I don't know what (if anything) their titles are. I don't think either is an IM. As I say, I would dearly love to get hold of the Watson review, in which case I would probably just quote him and forget about Bauer and Kingston altogether.
Krakatoa (
talk)
02:41, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
There is an undue space before the 26th reference. I will correct that. Done
in the section "Modern perspectives"
There are undue spaces in "1. e4" and "1. d4" in the quotation of Kaufman. Done
Originally, I quoted him as he wrote it (same thing with others who wrote "1 e4" and such). For the sake of consistency, I've changed this sort of thing to "1.e4" and "1.d4" with a parenthetical note added to the reference "(notation form changed)."
Krakatoa (
talk)
02:41, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
others
Are there no players/experts who have argued that Black may have an advantage ? Done
Rowson has a chapter on Black's advantages. I am inclined to add subsections to the article on "The nature of White's advantage(s)" and "The nature of Black's advantage(s)."
Shall we speak about players who have better statistics with black than with White (maybe Morozevich ?, although I have not checked his statistics) ?
Perhaps, if you know of such players. I've never heard of any GMs who consistently score better with Black than with White. I would think that there would probably have to be some significant number of such players, not just one, to make it worth writing about.
Krakatoa (
talk)
02:41, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
I happened upon a thread at chessgames.com talking about Morozevich's excellent results with Black. On
this page malthrope writes, "Just looking quickly over his stats here on CG.com we get... Database of 969 games with Moro winning 410 times... Wins with White 220 (53.66%) Wins with Black 190 (46.34%)" I haven't checked the math, but if malthrope is right even Morozevich does better with White than Black (I'm assuming that the 969 games are split roughly evenly between the two colors).
Krakatoa (
talk)
05:07, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
Shall we speak about those openings like the exchange variation of the French defence where it is sometimes felt that Black has a kind of advantage even if the position is symetric, precisely because White has to move first ? Done
I've added sections on "Reversed openings" and "Symmetrical openings" and the problems those pose for White, and specifically discuss the Exchange French.
Krakatoa (
talk)
02:41, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
There is no section "See also". It is not compulsory to have some, but I find they add some value. Done
All in all I am really impressed by this article. It is factual, precise and well-referenced on a subject that is really not easy. At the end of this review I would like to propose it to GA-class at least. For A-class, let's wait until the end of this review :)
SyG (
talk)
20:01, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
(Moved from the articles talk page.): Don't think headings should be in quotes. "Drawn with best play", "White to play and win" and Statistics is a short ambiguous(on it's own) word for a title. Done
Done a
peer review and this is bits I think apply.
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. The lead is to be as concise as possible while still covering the whole article. It seems to do that. Done
If there is not a
free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?] Done
This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.[?] Done
As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?] Done
Reflist 2 has come under
criticism as it doesn't show well on various browsers and for some it makes the wording so small it can't be read. Done
I've added links, and created a few articles and sub-articles to make links to, so I think that is pretty much done. Please link anything else that you think should be linked. I do intend to create a
chess theory article, and link to that when I talk about "theorists," but that will take some work. (I want to talk about opening theory, middlegame theory, and endgame theory.) As for the lead, the guideline says it can be "up to four paragraphs" and should summarize the article well. The current lead is one paragraph (while doesn't violate the guideline, since no minimum length is specified), and I think it summarizes the article well. So I think I've addressed all the items in your peer review.
Krakatoa (
talk)
02:06, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
The thing you linked to is entitled "Multiple columns deemed bad." I don't see how that applies to this article -- its reference list only has one column. Note 1 is followed by note 2, then note 3, note 4, and so on until the last note, which is at the bottom. That's one column, right?
Krakatoa (
talk)
23:43, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
I've made the change now. I would not apply this to other article but only here because I think the idea is to push this article to Featured article level.
SunCreator (
talk)
00:07, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
Thanks. Neanderthal that I am, I use Internet Explorer, so I couldn't see the problem. I'm gratified to think that you think the article could be a Featured Article. As you know, we have precious few chess article (0.2%) above even B-class.
Krakatoa (
talk)
01:56, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
Statistics section
I think consideration should be given to splitting up this section and include in other parts of the article. It's sure it's fine in context but a section with statistics might not be to welcomed by some reviewers.
SunCreator (
talk)
19:21, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
To my mind, the statistics section is in a way the most significant part of the article. It's all well and good to debate, in a vacuum, propositions like, "does White win by force from the starting position"?, "does White have an advantage, and if so, how much?", "does Black have the advantage, because White has to commit himself first?", and so on. The statistics section provides data against which such questions must be considered -- i.e. it's hard to claim that White wins by force if Black scores around 45% (including in games by the strongest players). I also think it would be weird to split this information up, apportioning a sentence to this section, a sentence to that section, and so on. All of the information in the "First move statistics" section is closed related and belongs together.
Krakatoa (
talk)
22:20, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
They are important. Two more suggestions, how about renaming the section so the word 'Statistics' is not included. how about moving the section down to the end of the articles order, so that it like a concluding section.
SunCreator (
talk)
23:03, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
What is one supposed to name it without using the word "statistics"? "Winning percentages"? How is that better? What's the bugaboo about statistics?
Krakatoa (
talk)
23:37, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
I'm not wild about moving the statistics section down to the end. It provides important information necessary to evaluate the relative plausibility of the "Drawn with best play" and "White to play and win" arguments. It's really hiding the ball to put it at the end ("hiding the lede," as some would put it). Does putting it at the beginning violate any Wikipedia principle?
Krakatoa (
talk)
23:49, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
Okay, is see you;ve renamed it, that seems good. I can't recall where I read about it. It wasn't a guideline, but rather some talk page but I'm unable to locate it to recheck it's context. The nearest I found is
Wikipedia:NOT#STATS but that doesn't apply because this article has the statistics nicely explained.
SunCreator (
talk)
00:12, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
How about caption below the image of Wilhelm Steinitz. At first glance the image looks unrelated to the topic. I don't want to add OR, but if there is something along the lines of "Wilhelm Steinitz considered chess a draw with best play", that would enhance the image. Done
Review
tool, still thinks lead is inadequate. Looking at a (good length) suggestion of
Wikipedia:Leadhere, it seems sensible to expand the lead to be two paragraphs. Reading the
FA criteria I get the idea that concise is better, if so then it's great as it is.
SunCreator (
talk)
08:58, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
Use of capitalisation "White" "white" "Black" "black", especially in winning percentages section is not consistent. Are we happy that it's correct? Done I think(!?).
+38% =31% −31% (total 53.5%) looks unattractive. How about some other way, perhaps "Win 38% Draw 31 % Lose 31%" or putting it in full "White wins 38% draws 31%, and loses 31% giving an overall result of 53.5%". Or even removing some of it given that it's now duplicated to the table. Done
"concluded that White scored 54.1767% plus 0.001164 times White's Elo rating advantage, treating White's rating advantage as +390 if it is better than +390, or -460 if it is worse than -460." ref 10. This doesn't make sense to me at all. It is very interesting that the external reference recommends 35-[elo]-point rating deficit for White to compensate for White's advantage(!). Would seem useful to this article.
Is "Hodgson-Arkell" self evident? Rather then say "Hodgson versus Arkell" and why not go to full names
Julian Hodgson-
Keith Arkell?
Why are some moves bold while others "1.Nf3 Nf6 2.g3 g6 3.Bg2 Bg7 4.0-0 0-0 5.d3 d6" are not?
Ref 70 (Reinhard-Fischer game) is not as you might at first expect(with Fischer's claim), perhaps the comma should go outside the reference, or the sentence reworded to be clear what reference refers to what?
Is sentence wording "defended tenaciously" with ref 79 (Portisch-Tal game)
OR? Done (changed wording)
Wikipedia linking doesn't seem to like ISBN-10 and ISBN-13, perhaps it should just be ISBN. Applies to some references as well as some future reading books. DoneSunCreator (
talk)
14:26, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
Something needs to be done about "+38% =31% −31%" there, and in hundreds of other articles.
Bubba73(talk),
15:38, 19 April 2008 (UTC) Done (as to this article, not the hundreds of others; now we use W38 D31 D31 format, which I (Krakatoa) think is clearer to non-chess players).
Support This article is very well written and nicely referenced. I therefore support upgrading this article to class A. Two minor comments.
I am not sure I like the statistics table, since it doesn't add very much. Instead perhaps a few other more interesting statistics can be added. I started a threat on the talk page of the article with suggestions. If the table stays, it would be nice to centre it on the page, or even better to have the text left and the table right in that section (like the chessdiagrams below, nicely embedded in the text).
Currently the article is in the
Category:Chess. As the category page says: "It should list very few, if any, article pages directly and should mainly contain subcategories". Perhaps it would be nice to create a master category chess theory, where this article would feel very much at home. Subcategories could include
Category:Chess tactics,
Category:Chess strategy,
Category:Chess traps and
Category:Chess openings. This would be very much in line with what we have done to all the chess bio categories, we grouped them in one master category
Category:Chess biographies.
For FA, the web links in the reference should be changed, that is, they should mention when the webpage was retrieved (or accessed), for the format see
Wikipedia:Embedded_citations Done
As best I can tell, all the concerns expressed about the article (by Bubba73, SyG, and SunCreator) have now been addressed, and I think to the satisfaction of the proponents of those concerns?
A couple of other random things: (1) I like SunCreator's table (under "Winning Percentages"), but it looks a little funky to me. Is there a way to make the horizontal line for database 1475-2008 go all the way across, and to make all the vertical lines go all the way down? (2) I think the first two words in the article title should be hyphenated: First-move advantage in chess. Anyone else have an opinion on that?
I am not sure I understand your comment on the statistics table, as in my browser there is a horizontal line all the way across, but I am using Firefox. Is it because you may be using Internet Explorer ?
I agree the current title may be slightly confusing, as someone may think it is about the first "move advantage" that a player gets in chess. I would like to have the opinion of other editors before we change it, though.
As you can see above I have changed my assessment from Comment to Approve for A-class. As Bubba73's comments seemed to imply he agreed as well, we just need the following steps:
get the approval of a third reviewer. Both
SunCreator (on this page) and
Voorlandt (on the Talk page of the article) have done a review and provided some comments, but none has clearly stated they approved the A-class.
wait until 3rd May 2008, as the article has been nominated on 12th April and the review needs to last at least three weeks. (frustrating, clearly, but gives enough time to everyone to join in).
wait one week after the last comment has been made, in order to ensure noone has a last-minute objection to be made.
Above, I also said I support the A class. However they are plenty of comments here that can improve the article (see for instance Bubba's comments, and my comment on the refs). A lot of them minor, so they should be easy to fix. Can something be done about the layout of this review? It is very hard to follow as comments are scattered all over the place in no hierarchical structure. Perhaps all comments that are no longer relevant can be removed, and all other comments grouped?
Voorlandt (
talk)
16:27, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
To me this article seems GA class right now, should it be proposed as GA or should it continue to be improved and go for FA class?
SunCreator (
talk)
20:08, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
As far as I understand it is a bit different, as A-class is defined by each WikiProject, while both FA-class and GA-class have "transversal" processes about reviews (meaning any subject can be proposed). In some WikiProjects the A-class is considered just a corridor before FA-class, in others it can be a definite state. For example
Bughouse Chess will have a very hard time to become FA-class because some of the remaining issues (e.g. history) just need sources that do not appear to exist!
SyG (
talk)
15:04, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
Close out the nomination?
I count four Supports (
Bubba73,
SyG,
SunCreator, and
Voorlandt), one more than necessary, and no opposition. It's officially May 3 Wikipedia time, and I believe more than one week since the last comment. Does someone want to close out the nomination?
Krakatoa (
talk)
02:42, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
Yes, I see noone opposing to this article being uprated, so I shall close the review and declare this article has successfully passed the A-class review. Well done, and thanks to all for your work!
SyG (
talk)
07:26, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
Problem with the chess portal?
There seems to be a problem with the chess portal, specifically the recently added article
First-move advantage in chess. Now that it's an A-class article, it's been added four places on the
Selected article list. If one looks at, say, space 10,
First-move advantage in chess appears to be the article assigned to that space. But if one clicks on the space 10 link on the left, it shows the article for
Emanuel Lasker. The same thing happens, with a different article instead of the Lasker one, if one clicks on any of the other three places to which the article is assigned. Can someone fix this, please? Thanks!
Krakatoa (
talk)
15:50, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
The recent article the
American Chess Congress has complete crosstables for all nine editions except the 1921 eight American Chess Congress in Atlantic City. I added a few results from what I could find online, but it would be nice if we could complete it. It is probably covered in either of:
Gaige, Jeremy (1974), Chess Tournament Crosstables: Vol IV: 1921-1930, Philadelphia
Di Felice, Gino (2006), Chess Results, 1921-1930: A Comprehensive Record with 940 Tournament Crosstables and 210 Match Scores, McFarland,
ISBN978-0786426423
Queen sacrifice is listed on the main page as needing work, and it does. Or do we really need an article on queen sacs seperate from
sacrifice (chess)? None of the three chess encyclopedias that I have have an article "queen sacrifice".
Bubba73(talk),
15:05, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
For the time being I do not see why "queen sacrifice" could not be merged into "sacrifice". I prefer to have one consistent article that several stubs.
SyG (
talk)
15:38, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
It could also be merged into
Queen (chess). Longer term I'm thinking that the piece articles, would be including material about piece use.
For example in the Queen topic you would cover
Opening: Development of Queen into enemy position early (eg
Scholars mate,
Center Game) and development not into enemy position (eg Nimzo-Indian with Qc2).
Middlegame: Queen attack against enemy king with other pieces eg. pawn(with fixed pawn wedge), Knight(Knight on 5th/6th rank attacking 7th rank pawns), with Bishop=(on weak squares in front of king) also
Greek gift sacrifice, with rooks(back rank and 7th rank attacks),
Queen Sacrifice
And I don't think "how to" is a problem if you approach it correctly. Don't say what to do - tell how it is done. Don't say "move your queen here", tell what masters have done and have written about.
Bubba73(talk),
04:34, 7 May 2008 (UTC)
I think
queen sacrifice has more to do with sacrifices than it has to do with queens, so if it is to be merged, the sacrifice article is the proper target. However, I don't know if this is really necessary, The Art of Sacrifice in Chess has a whole chapter devoted to the queen sacrifice so in terms of notability, I think it is reasonable to call it notable enough for a separate article. Combine this with the certain romanticism there is around sacrificing the queen, and I can understand a certain interest from the reader in having a separate article on queen sacrifices. Also, any merging will need a patient editor who is good at tailoring. The present
sacrifice (chess) article looks like a patchwork. It is not a bad or useless article, but I feel the information is a bit all over the place (I'll admit as a contributor to that article that I may have contributed to the problem there), and merging
queen sacrifice in with that via the "copy and paste text dump" method will make the problem worse.
Sjakkalle(Check!)11:48, 7 May 2008 (UTC)
I agree that queen sacrifice is sufficiently notable. I can think of some games to illustrate "real" queen sacs. If anyone wants to follow this up, post a mesage on my Talk page.
Real vs pseudo-sacs. Not a rigid distinction, it's bounded by calculation range.
Positional vs tactical sacs.
Big sacs (e.g. Q) vs small ones (P, exchange).
Common sacs, e.g.: of B on h7 or f7 (by White) and on h2 or f2 (by Black); exchange sacs, especially on c6 / c3; various sacs by White on e6 in Sicilian.
Gambit openings, including "gambits" played later, e.g. Chatard-Alekhine in orthodox French, some variations of (semi-)Slav.
How to deal with sacs: take and try to defend; partial or total return of sac'd material at an opportune moment; ignore; counter-attack.
Would probably take at least 2 passes to get it right, as details will have to be spawned into daughter articles.
Philcha (
talk)
10:24, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
Could someone please search for references for
Antonio Fistonić so that the article can be kept? If the person never existed, then the article should be tagged for deletion. --
Eastmain (
talk)
21:39, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
Looks like a good candidate for deletion, could even be a hoax, as 'Fist' appears in both the subject and author's names. He's certainly obscure if Mibelz hasn't heard of him.
Brittle heaven (
talk)
22:44, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
Sources I've found while researching edits to
Wilhelm Steinitz and
Adolf Anderssen indicate that the idea of a recognised world champion goes back to the mid-1840s and only gradually became clearer. Among other things that pulls the rung from under the distinction between official and unofficial world champions. I therefore think
World Chess Championship needs a rewrite.
Talk:World Chess Championship summarises the main points. Please comment there.
Philcha (
talk)
10:04, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
This is an archive of past discussions. Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on the
current talk page.
I fixed
Template:fide so that it works again, but I wouldn't be surprised if
FIDE makes more changes to their website so that we need to update the template once more, possibly even to use fide.com as before. The template is very simple, so just about anyone can make this kind of fix if needed. This is an excellent example of why it is better to use
Template:fide and
Template:chessgames player rather than hard-coding those external links into the page. I think we should consider creating a template for
http://www.olimpbase.org as well.
Quale (
talk)
05:43, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
I wasn't aware of the existence of either of those templates. They should definitely be mentioned in the Templates section of this project page as they're very useful.
Pawnkingthree (
talk)
09:13, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
What is a piece?
We need to say something about the two different meanings of "piece", depending on the context. This is especially important in articles that non-chessplayers are likely to read. For instance, see the talk page of
Immortal game, "What is a piece?" section. It is in
List of chess terms#Piece, and we can link to that. But is there a better way to do it? Perhaps a short article that explains the two different contexts that can be linked to, or maybe expand the Chess Terms one a little?
Bubba73(talk),
18:14, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
It a good question and highly confusing even when English is not your second language!
It says in the
Immortal game LEAD "He gives up both rooks and then his queen, checkmating his opponent with his three remaining pieces". Later it says White has been able to use his remaining pieces - two knights and a bishop - to force mate.
piece = all but pawns. So Q, R, B, N, K.
pieces = all pieces K, Q, R, B, N, P or and confusingly a collection of piece being pieces.
The lead is okay, because it's talking about checkmating - this is the context and that is done with exactly three pieces. However more confusion comes because in the final position White giving mate has a total of four pieces (two knights, a bishop and a King) and ten pieces (two knights, a bishop, a King and 6 pawns).
SunCreator (
talk)
18:46, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
I'm not aware of two different meanings. To me it's always been clear- a "piece" refers to either knight, bishop, rook, queen or king, but not pawns. If pieces and pawns are referred to then the term is "
chessmen", or just "men". Maybe it's old fashioned now but it's what I was taught!
Pawnkingthree (
talk)
22:49, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
Can't say I've used the word 'Chessmen' but have read it. Isn't the word difficult if one of the 'Chessmen' is a women, the Queen?
SunCreator (
talk)
00:30, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
"Piece" as both meanings, see
Chess terminology#Piece. And from Burgess: "Can be used to signify either any chess piece, or a major or minor piece, as opposed to a pawn. Generally the context makes the meaning clear."
Bubba73(talk),
00:31, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
Of course "piece" can be used loosely to refer to pawns but as it has a more specific meaning I think that should be avoided, to avoid confusion. The main chess article, for example, says each side begins the game with sixteen pieces; that should say eight pieces and eight pawns, or sixteen chessmen (alhough I take SunCreator's point about the queen).
Pawnkingthree (
talk)
08:29, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
That particular thing was debated once, and it was decided that each side has sixteen physical pieces. That's what the references say too.
Bubba73(talk),
14:31, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
Am I the only one who thinks that "generally the context makes the meaning clear" a la Burgess isn't good enough? It clearly does cause confusion, as the
Immortal game Talk page shows. Why don't we just stick to the proper, specific meaning?
Pawnkingthree (
talk)
14:54, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
It is proper to use it both ways, as in the two references. Also see how
FIDE laws of chess uses the word - it is inthere over 60 times, and every one is in the general sense. Do you want the touch-move rule to read "if a player touches a piece or a pawn or his king..."? I don't think so.
Bubba73(talk),
15:19, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
See above where I mentioned "chessman" or "man" as an alternative. But I won't pursue the point any further as I don't seem to be getting any support:)
Pawnkingthree (
talk)
15:27, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
I would just like to say that I am extremely grateful for these pages. I can't afford any chess books (I don't get allowance or get paid for any chores by my parents) so the only resource I have is the internet through the library. I don't know how many people have thanked you all for taking the trouble to post this information up, but I'd like to just be another person to tell you that I've been reading all of this! I just hope that some wiki mod doesn't show up and delete the pages saying it's too much information, because I've seen articles cut down a lot because of it. Anyway, you guys can just delete this after a bit, but I just wanted to give a thank you because this is the best!
It seems to me that there is a lot more about chess in Wikipedia than in Wikibooks. The Wikibooks stuff seems limited and isn't updated much.
Bubba73(talk),
14:54, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
I understand why editors are that way. I'm that way myself. Wikibooks doesn't seem to have many readers compared to Wikipedia. Wikipedia shows up at the top of Google searches but not Wikibooks. Since I'm giving my time to try to help people, I want to do it where it will do some good.
Bubba73(talk),
16:36, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
Link to FIDE rules
Since FIDE changed their website, the link to the Laws of Chess has changed. This is referenced in a number of places. The new link is
FIDE Laws of chess. I've changed it at the end of
rules of chess, but the old page is referenced in several articles, I think.
Strangely, it is very hard to get to this page on the new website. If you go to Handbook and click on "Laws of Chess", all you get is the appendix for adjourned games, blind players, etc.
Bubba73(talk),
14:51, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
I'm going to remove this from the list of articles to create. While I suggested it should be a separate from
Magical objects in Harry Potter and an interesting one from a chess perspective because of
this from
Jeremy Silman. The problem is that I can't establish
notability for "Wizard's Chess" on it's own. The Jeremy Silman link is not an independent source and while the
Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone film/book is quite significant it's only one scene. If anyone knows of this articles notability that I've missed please let me know.
SunCreator (
talk)
13:01, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
Where should "chess notation" go?
Where should "chess notation" go, if it is only used in one section - at the top of the article or at the top of that section?
Bubba73(talk),
02:55, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
When an article referrs to squares by their algebraic designation, but no moves, should "chess notation" be used?
I agree with Bubba and SyG. The first one (where) for no real particular reason except that I find templates in the middle of articles to be uglier than templates at the top of articles. The second one (when) is because the template is unobtrusive and useful for any article where chess notation is used, and naming of squares are a part of notation.
Sjakkalle(Check!)06:21, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
If it's an article about
Chess then at the top, if it's
Biography about a person then in the section that applies. Your most like referring to how it's done in
Bobby Fischer, in that article it seems out of proportion to have it at the top.
SunCreator (
talk)
13:04, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
Yes, the change in
Bobby Fischer is what brought it up. For the other question,
Pawn (chess) used to have "chess notation", but it was removed on April 11. There are no moves in the article, but squares are named by their algebraic coordinates.
Bubba73(talk),
14:49, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
I'm here :-)
In the next time I'll be here for articles about chess composers (see my userpage). Hopefully you won't get too annoyed with me. :-) Oh, please tell me again where to add new articles! --
Constructor00:40, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
Welcome to the WikiProject Chess, we always love to have new contributors on board! Don't hesitate to ask the community for help, advice or comments. Have fun!
SyG (
talk)
07:24, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
Ok, will look through the archives. Hopefully I'll find it. Yes, I always have fun! Hey, don't get too acquainted to me, I'll leave when the articles are done. :-) --
Constructor17:54, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
Since you probably don't know - I'm one of the most active writers on de about this. So I know what Wikipedia is. --
Constructor19:08, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
You might be able to improve Deutsche Schachzeitung then, if you like. I just created it. I used some material from
de:Deutsche Schachzeitung, but I don't read (or speak) German, so I couldn't make out all of the German language article (which has no sources listed anyway). You could also talk to the goof who removed the interwiki link I added there, since unless things are very different on the German language wikipedia, interwiki links don't constitute "no improvement" or "vandalism".
Quale (
talk)
19:18, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
He says, it was probably due to a database issue and a wrong click on "back" in the browser and "revert" (without looking at the interwiki first).
See his reply in german here. At the moment there are lots of database issues on de (one reason I don't want to continue as much there at the moment). --
Constructor22:58, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
User:Sv9 seems to be adding external links to YouTube videos. The person in the video (Serguei Vorojtsov) has initials SV, so this is likely the same person. I watched one video, and it seemed OK to me, but what do others think about them staying in?
Bubba73(talk),
05:16, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
I have looked at one of the videos posted by
User:Sv9, the one on
Paul Morphy. The quality was rather poor: no explanation of the first 6 moves (by then, Morphy already had an overwhelming advantage!), no strategic consideration, no alternatives considered, etc. The presentator is certainly a great chessplayer, but not a good teacher I am afraid. This video did not bring a lot more information than a PGN.
Regarding our general attitude towards videos, I would propose the following principles:
judge each video separately, on the basis of what value it brings to the article
for a given article, retain at most one video in the external links (only the best one, arguably)
judge each video on the insight it would bring to the mainstream reader, i.e. generally a very weak player.
The first 4 edits he did were to upload images about Serguei Vorojtsov solving classical mechanics problems.
His 5th edit was to add Serguei Vorojtsov in the article
List of YouTube celebrities (now really...); strangely enough that was deleted rapidly :-)
His following edits were to add videos made by Serguei Vorojtsov on chess articles.
It seems he also tried to create an article about Serguei Vorojtsov, but that was speedy deleted.
Of course we should foremost
WP:AGF and not jump to quick conclusions about his real identity and his intentions for Wikipedia...
SyG (
talk)
07:47, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
My vote is just to blanket delete. I watched Levitsky-Marshall. It was entertaining, but not instructive at all and contained a 'full on' advert for a chess sales site at the end. These are just elaborate advertisements in my opinion and Peter Ballard is right to remind us of the past discussions. 'Bidmonfa' are currently taking over the biographies too - their worth seems to rely solely on a photo - and as we have a growing number here on wiki, I can't see why we should support them either. I think we need to be vigilant and remove everything except Chessgames.com, which brings a range of 'wiki editor-friendly' tools (database, reasonably reliable biography data, forum discussion of topical and historical issues ... etc.) and most importantly, no blatant advertising.
Brittle heaven (
talk)
08:10, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
Can't find the links to the videos in question. My take would be to judge each video separately and include only those that bring value to the article.
SunCreator (
talk)
10:24, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
Found three of them now on the history. They are not very good in presentation, nor useful to the topic matter. Did like Lasker's
King hunt game, perhaps we can make use of that game(the game not the video) in the future.
SunCreator (
talk)
10:38, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
I watched the Evans-Reshevsky one, and it stops just before the famous desparado swindle, and give an advertisement. I think it should go, and SyG has deleted it.
Bubba73(talk),
14:44, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
I added a few chess videos to the Hebrew WIKI. I did not see any advertisement so I think the best would be to judge every game by itself. By the way - most readers do not play chess at any rated level so the sentence "I think only IM or GM analysis is notable for the external links section" is a bit too much. Most players (99.99% of the WIKI readers) can benefit from an analysis of a 2000 rated player (much weaker than a master but still a capable player) as what he can show them is much to much for them. The delicate points that an IM or a GM can show them they would not understand anyway, and they do not have the patience to spend a few hours so that they may see his point. And remember that a video is very short, usually, and you can not get into deep explanations. For this kind of analysis we have chessbase (or other products - please do not think that this is an advertisement) and books. --
Niemzowitsch (
talk)
12:44, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
Re-assessment of many articles for quality.
Have been re-assessed over 200+ chess articles in the last few days. All B-Class and above or Top/High importance, over 200 articles in total.
Results are presented in a neat sortable table. I would post it here but it's rather big(!). It has really useful figures like traffic statistics, class and importance. Because the table is sortable it's really ideal to compare, say quality against important and importance against daily traffic.
Thanks for this. The idea of awarding points to every article
Wikipedia:WikiProject Chess/Assessment has its merits. But the current system can definitely be improved on. Some suggestions for improvement:
Although the system claims to be indicative for quality, it very much focusses on quantity. An article should be of a length suitable for the subject, so short well written articles get punished in this system.
Things like spelling, grammar, tone, style and stylistic issues are ignored. These are all extremely important for an FA push. As an example, proper referencing is totally ignore. (eg
First move advantage in chess has currently the most points, but fails to cite websites correctly (they miss the access/retrieved date).
Negative points get awarded for the article not chess project focused. As far as I know, quality has nothing to do with the subject matter. Personally, I would not award negative points, but only positive. EG +3 for completeness, +2 for style, etc..
That is indeed a lot of good work. One thing I noticed is that with a few exceptions, 7 points or higher is a B (or higher).
However, Voorlandt has a valid point about quality versus quantity. There is a lot to say about World Chess Championship, but how much is there to be said about Castling? This also applies to references. For inztance, the MoS says that it is OK for a short article to have just a list of references instead of inline references. A short article may have no inline references but have the Oxford Companion listed as a reference, and that could be sufficient. Also, about the table of contents - that depends on the number of sections the article has and a setting in your preferences tells how many sections are required to show to TOC. But good work overall.
Bubba73(talk),
21:25, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
(edit conflict)Yes, thank for your ideas. It does indeed give weight to quantity. I don't think there is any claim to be indicative for quality, if so it's likely a typo! There is a trade off between assessing an article in a reasonable time span and looking for a more refined detail. Perhaps the next review of a article will be the more refined type but for a lesser number of articles. Checking to the level of cite websites correctly would be rather time consuming I would imagine and somewhat hindering because only web references can easily be checked unless you have the various books in question. One thing that comes to focus is articles that nearing completion but still have little content. I'm not sure such articles could ever achieve GA status, so perhaps they are better off to be merged with other articles? Or maybe not, but those type of articles are the ones that seem to be struggling, although even then an article like
en passant should be able to get to 9 or 10 points which puts it clearly in the area where all such articles are equivalent to B-Class.
SunCreator (
talk)
21:38, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
Yea,
en passant is an interesting example. It is the only one with 6 points that is B, and most of the ones with 7 points or more are B or higher. I've worked on the article and I am the one that raized it to B a days ago. It gets 400+ hits per day, so a lot of people are reading it. But I think it is fairly complete, and I can't think of anything else to day about it.
Bubba73(talk),
22:29, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
More on
en passant, the content rating of 2 points says it has 3-4 paragraphs, but I count 7, not counting the "illustration" section that has three diagrams with captions but no paragraph, per se. The rating of 1 point for references says 3-4, but there is one external link to a game, five books listed as general references, plus an external link to the FIDE laws (which should really be a reference.)
Bubba73(talk),
22:52, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
Five paragraphs. 3-5 for 2 points.(sorry 5 was absence from summary before). Three paragraphs before the TOC and two in 'Historical context'. One line sentence not counted. Diagram captions aren't counted unless they are a mouthful, which these are not. There are six references as you correctly highlight and that count as 2 ref points not one, my mistake seems references been added since it was
assessed. External links don't count. My recommendation for this article is to somehow make an animation, it's really hard to grasp without seeing it in action at least once. I remember as a beginner how tricky this idea is.
SunCreator (
talk)
23:09, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
There are the three snapshot diagrams. I don't know how to make an animation. Also, I count seven paragraphs: Lead: 3, example in opening: 1 (admittedly one sentence, but includes moves and diagram caption), example in game: 1 (three sentences plus diagram captions and moves), history: 2.
Bubba73(talk),
23:32, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
GIMP would do it, it's free, it can do it, but it's rather tedious unless you are a bit advanced at using software. If you go that route, I might be able to at least piont the right way, I have GIMP but know it can be quite unproductive time wise.
I discounted middle bits as short sentences. While technically short sentences can be paragraphs if it's got some a few full stops. I've not counted that, counting two full lines of text and more, stretching into the third line at least. The third paragraph as in the lead is about the minimum.
SunCreator (
talk)
23:49, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
OK. My point is not to argue about this article or how paragraphs/references are counted. But this article does show how an article can say about all there is to be said about a subject, yet get a relatively low rating. As I said, I don't know much more it can say. It says more than rulebooks and chess encyclopedias. It has the lead, a simple illustration, an example from the opening, an example from an interesting game where first it was not used and then it was used to checkmate, and some history. In some other articles (
touch-move rule,
threefold repetition,
castling) I've added some "human interest" stuff, and
fifty move rule has a bit where Kasparov and Karpov could have claimed the draw but didn't. But I don't know much else this article needs, other than the annimation you suggest.
Bubba73(talk),
00:00, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
Your right in concept here there are some articles like
En passant and
ICCF numeric notation that can't go beyond B-Class. If I understand correctly
En passant is to small to meet GA-articles criteria. This leaves the question what to do with it. Should we be happy when it's a complete B-Class article or aim to go higher by say adding it to another article as a section, perhaps a section in Rules of chess, although can imagine this would cause unbalancing of Rules of chess article. It's a question I don't know the answer to, but would like to hear comments.
SunCreator (
talk)
00:19, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
I think it should be left as its own article. It is already discussed in the Rules article, this is more in-depth. Making this a section in Rules would make that article out of balance.
Bubba73(talk),
00:27, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
Been reading through some FA discussion and seems no technical small size limitation to an article, however apparently small articles don't get submitted to the FA process. Not familiar enough with FA/GA workings to know why that is.
SunCreator (
talk)
00:40, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
I don't think articles such as
en passant should ever be FA. I don't think our goal should be make every chess article a FA. I think FA should be reserved for a select number of our articles with the widest appeal. Of course, non-FA articles should be as good as they need to be.
Bubba73(talk),
01:58, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
I agree that FA is not a required endpoint for all articles. I haven't followed GA criteria closely, but the GA process is fairly widely considered broken (by many at
WP:Mathematics for instance, and they have many more "good" articles than we do). In general the whole article review process concentrates heavily on what an article looks like on the surface level (lots of purty pictures, a certain ratio of inline cites/sentence, a certain number of sentences, paragraphs, and sections, etc.) It's basically an accounting exercise that rarely pays much attention at all to what the article actually says.
I think this discussion itself pretty much answers the question of why short articles don't get submitted to FA. I think worshiping the cult of the large article is harmful to writing a good encyclopedia. I actually have no problem with the end point for many small articles being B-class, and don't consider that to be a problem or an insult. On the other hand, I think a small, policy and guideline compliant, substantially complete, referenced article deserves a B-class rating unless it really is so small that it is a stub that ought to be merged.
ICCF numeric notation vastly exceeds a should-be-merged stub, and in my opinion is not far from B-class now.
Quale (
talk)
03:08, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
Are you doing that all by hand (no software to help)? Either way, that seems like a ton of work. We appreciate it.
Bubba73(talk),
03:09, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
It's largely manual but I'm using
Microsoft Excel to store, add up, sort and format. I'm not sure if that counts as 'software'. It's been a ton of work to setup, but adding new ones is quite straightforward, but I don't intend expanding more then the covered 400 articles as all top importance, high importance and B-Class articles are included..
SunCreator (
talk)
11:48, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
William Samuel Viner seems to be a
copyright violation.
The original source is very good and I think it could be rewritten to avoid the copyvio and be a good article. If anyone who is interested in Australian chess or just in chess bios in general would care to rewrite it, that would be great. I should do it, but I don't have the energy for that project right now and the copyvio can't be allowed to remain for long.
Quale (
talk)
03:51, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
A good criterion would be inclusion in the classified encyclopedia of chess variants (by
David Pritchard). I also think that inclusion in this book is a minimum requirement for the inclusion of a chess variant in wikipedia (minimum, definitely not sufficient, as some only get one or two lines in the book). On the
Shogi variants, Pritchard spends about 10 pages on them. If you have examples, I can look them up to see if they are there.
Voorlandt (
talk)
20:43, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
Hmmm that is a lot of variants. I am really not sure what is best. Clearly Shogi (very similar to
Crazyhouse) is a chess variant. Gets over 10 pages in Pritchard's encyclopedia (for comparison,
Bughouse chess gets two pages). Perhaps the easiest (and least controversial?) decision would be to include no shogi variants (but of course still
Shogi). Judging case by case is in any case hard.
Voorlandt (
talk)
10:31, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
Do we need this article?
Do we need
ECO A03? I haven't checked to see if there are others like it, but a year or so ago I think that we generally agreed that we don't need an article on each ECO code.
Bubba73(talk),
03:14, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
Seems pretty worthless to me. If we want to list all the ECO codes, the
Encyclopedia of Chess Openings article or someplace like that is the place to do so. I think very few readers, be they strong chessplayers or weak, are ever going to find or use the
ECO A03 article. I say we get rid of the thing.
Krakatoa (
talk)
06:17, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
I agree, let's try to avoid having hundreds of stubs while one single article can do better.
SyG (
talk)
06:38, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
This article, primarily written by me, is, I think, very well-researched and referenced, covers the topic thoroughly, and as best I can tell, satisfies all the criteria for A-class.
Quale wrote on the article's talk page, "I think it's very good, and your sections and section titles are much better than the ones I was thinking about. I'm bumping the rating to B. I would say it's an A-class article, but many WP:CHESS members think that the project A-rating requires a (semi-)formal review."
Krakatoa (
talk)
15:59, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
It is certainly a very fine article, well researched and documented. I have only two minor style issues, and they are not that big and could go either way.
Capitalization of "black" and "white". Usually these are when they are substitutes for a player's name, otherwise not, e.g. "then Black played..." when referring to a person, but "... the black queen... ". So maybe these should not be caps in the article. But I'm not sure.
Percent. The "%" character is used several times, and the style is that "%" is used in scientific work and in tables, info boxes etc, and that "percent" is used otherwise in text. This is no big deal.
I've tried to address the % issue now, substituting "percent" where reasonably possible. But I think doing so in a sentence like this would result in a nightmare: "Streeter found that overall White scored +38% =31% -31% (total 53.5%); in 1851-78, White scored +46% =14% -40% (total 53%); in 1881-1914, White scored +37% =32% -31% (total 53%); in 1914-32, White scored +37% =37% -26% (total 55.5%)." Compare "Streeter found that overall White scored +38 percent =31 percent -31 percent (total 53.5 percent); in 1851-78, White scored +46 percent =14 percent -40 percent (total 53 percent); in 1881-1914, White scored +37 percent =32 percent -31 percent (total 53 percent); in 1914-32, White scored +37 percent =37 percent -26 percent (total 55.5 percent)." Unbelievably long, cumbersome, and ugly; the reader will be asleep by the time he/she staggers to the end of that sentence. I think that in effect, a sentence like this one is a "table," so use of the % symbol rather than the word is appropriate.
As for capitalization of "white" and "black," I think the article does so appropriately. I don't believe that a phrase like "the black queen" ever occurs in it. Invariably, the article uses the two words to refer to the player(s) conducting the white or black pieces. I think that in that context "White" and "Black" are correct and almost universally used. See, e.g., The Oxford Companion to Chess (1st ed. 1984), p. 297 (article on "SCHLIEMANN DEFENCE") ("By playing 3...f5 Black weakens the diagonal a2-g8, but Jaenisch felt that his move might be practicable because White has not placed his light bishop on this diagonal."); Suba, Dynamic Chess Strategy, p. 134 ("Even the symmetrical variations of some openings present White with a critical moment at an early stage and he cannot progress without making concessions to Black."); Watson, Secrets of Modern Chess Strategy: Advances Since Nimzowitsch, p. 231 (among many other examples on this page and those following, "White maintained a 56%/44% winning percentage for most of the century . . . . But it is also true that some of the world's top players have scored brilliantly with Black.").
Krakatoa (
talk)
17:44, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
Here is what you asked: "This is a style issue - when should "white" and "black" be capitalized when talking about chess? My understanding is that they should only be capitalized when substituting for a proper name, such as "... White played the queen...", and not otherwise, such as "the black pieces". Is that correct?" I don't believe the article ever uses a phrase like "black pieces"/"Black pieces" so your example doesn't seem apropros. The article uses "White" and "Black" to refer to the collective results of persons playing the white pieces and persons playing the black pieces, respectively. As I said above, that as far as I can tell is the approach universally taken by chess writers (I cited the Oxford Companion to Chess, Suba, and Watson, and can add more if you like). What sentences in the article do you consider defective in this respect? To give a hypothetical, do you think that in a sentence like, "Statistics show that White scores 55 percent and Black 45 percent." "White" and "Black" should be lower-case, e.g. "Statistics show that white scores 55 percent and black 45 percent?" As I say, I think few if any chess writers outside of Wikipedia would write the latter.
Krakatoa (
talk)
18:24, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
I know that there are respected books that use Black and White that way, but there are plenty that don't. My understanding is that it should be like a proper name - caps when substituting for a proper name. In the case of this article, it is talking about an abstract player of the white or black pieces, not a particular player. I'm no expert, and could go either way, but I think not caps unless they are substitutes for proper names of a particular person is in keeping with our style.
Bubba73(talk),
18:57, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
OK, if "White" and "Black" are used as if a proper name would be used, even though there is no specific person, I think that is OK. So it would be "... the black queen... " versus "... Black's queen...", since in the second case, it is taking the place of a proper name. So I'm OK with that.
Bubba73(talk),
23:26, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
Approve From what
Bubba73 has written hereunder, I will consider he approves the article as A-class, unless he states otherwise here.
SyG (
talk)
17:21, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
Approve Given that the comments in my review hereabover have found solutions, I approve that this article should be given A-class, on the basis of this version.
Of course there is still room for improvement so I am not sure the article would do it to FA-class. For example the interesting comments made by Voorlandt on the
Talk page of the article about the relativity of the advantage depending on the level of players. But as long as there is no source it is difficult to work further on that.
SyG (
talk)
09:26, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
Comment Hereunder are my comments and proposals for improvements, based on the review of this version of the article.
in the Lead
The link between the first sentence and the second one may not be clear for an outsider, because in the first sentence we talk about "advantage" and in the second one we talk about "more chances to win", without doing an explicit link between these two notions. After all, an "advantage" could also be "less chances to lose" ? Done
The expression "scoring between 53 and 56 percent overall" in the second sentence is unclear for an outsider, even if it is explained in later sections. It may be understood that White wins 53% of the games, which is not what is meant. Done
The word "theorists" may not be clear for an outsider. What is a theorist, especially regarding chess ? Done
As mentioned below, in response to SunCreator, I intend to write an article on
chess theory (i.e. opening, middlegame, endgame theory) and link to that.
The expression "best play by both sides" may be worth a link to something (an article on Game theory ?) because for a non-game expert it may not be clear. Done
There is an obvious typo in the sentence "a game of chess should conclude in a draw with best draw". I will correct that. Done
The first sentence implies that White actually has an advantage, which is not proven by anyone. At first I thought that this was a problem and maybe the sentence should be phrased like "the probable advantage", but now I think it is not so bad because the third sentence clearly states that there is consensus on that. Done
I've added a table. I'm not sure if how it looks is appropriate. With/without border, what should be listed, to go at the beginning/middle or end of paragraph. All questions I don't have a clear answer to.
SunCreator (
talk)
11:33, 18 April 2008 (UTC).
The use of signs +, = and - is not explained, nor is the way to reach a total percentage. Done
The phrasing "More recently (in 2005)" is a bit redundant and heavy, the first two words would be sufficient. Done
I do not understand the structure of the second paragraph. It looks like just a list of evidences, which is good but could read better with one or two sentences to add fluidity or insight. Done
I added an explanatory sentence at the beginning of the paragraph.
in the section "Drawn with best play"
I find the formulation "The classical view is that White's objective is to extend" a bit heavy because of the repetition of "is". Why not something like "In the classical view, White's objective is to extend" ? But as I am not a native English-speaker, please tell me if I am wrong. Done
In the second sentence of the second paragraph, I do not understand why the first letter of the quote is in upper case. Is it compliant with
WP:MOS ? Done
I think so. Look at these examples given (not addressing this exact point, admittedly) under
Wikipedia:MOS#Quotation_marks:
Correct: Arthur said, "The situation is deplorable."
According to
WP:ELLIPSES, I think the three dots in the quote of Watson should be in brackets, like [...] Done
I don't see why. The guideline you cite says "An ellipsis does not normally need square brackets around it, since its function is usually obvious—especially if the guidelines above are followed. But square brackets may optionally be used for precision, to make it clear that the ellipsis is not itself quoted; this is usually only necessary if the quoted passage also uses three period in it to indicate a pause or suspension." The quoted passage doesn't use three periods in it, so square brackets are not necessary.
Krakatoa (
talk)
03:07, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
Right. The brackets are generally only used around an ellipsis if you use an ellipsis in a quote that already has one.
Bubba73(talk),
03:14, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
According to
WP:HEAD, the names of sections shall not include "special characters", although I am not sure the character " should be considered as special. Done
I find it problematic to name the section with the title of a book, while this section talks about other things than the book. Done
I have removed the quotation marks, so the title now is not just an allusion to the book. I think the title is a good one to tersely capure the concept -- especially since I reference Berliner saying that he is a disciple of Adams.
Krakatoa (
talk)
02:41, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
The player Horowitz shall be refered to by his full name (i.e. including surname), in order to be consistent with all the others and to avoid any REDIRECT link. Done
Hans Berliner should be presented as "a former World [...]" and not "the former World [...]". Done
Jeremy Silman should be presented as "International Master" and not "IM", in order to be consistent with all the others. Done
I think I've addressed this. The first International Master I cited, I used "
International Master," for the next one I used
IM and then just an unwikified "IM" thereafter.
Randy Bauer and Taylor Kingston are quoted but their credibility is not explained. Why are they authoritative ? It seems Randy Bauer is not even an IM ? Done
I removed the text references to Bauer and Kingston (though they're still mentioned as references). They're respected reviewers, I think, but I don't know what (if anything) their titles are. I don't think either is an IM. As I say, I would dearly love to get hold of the Watson review, in which case I would probably just quote him and forget about Bauer and Kingston altogether.
Krakatoa (
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02:41, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
There is an undue space before the 26th reference. I will correct that. Done
in the section "Modern perspectives"
There are undue spaces in "1. e4" and "1. d4" in the quotation of Kaufman. Done
Originally, I quoted him as he wrote it (same thing with others who wrote "1 e4" and such). For the sake of consistency, I've changed this sort of thing to "1.e4" and "1.d4" with a parenthetical note added to the reference "(notation form changed)."
Krakatoa (
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02:41, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
others
Are there no players/experts who have argued that Black may have an advantage ? Done
Rowson has a chapter on Black's advantages. I am inclined to add subsections to the article on "The nature of White's advantage(s)" and "The nature of Black's advantage(s)."
Shall we speak about players who have better statistics with black than with White (maybe Morozevich ?, although I have not checked his statistics) ?
Perhaps, if you know of such players. I've never heard of any GMs who consistently score better with Black than with White. I would think that there would probably have to be some significant number of such players, not just one, to make it worth writing about.
Krakatoa (
talk)
02:41, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
I happened upon a thread at chessgames.com talking about Morozevich's excellent results with Black. On
this page malthrope writes, "Just looking quickly over his stats here on CG.com we get... Database of 969 games with Moro winning 410 times... Wins with White 220 (53.66%) Wins with Black 190 (46.34%)" I haven't checked the math, but if malthrope is right even Morozevich does better with White than Black (I'm assuming that the 969 games are split roughly evenly between the two colors).
Krakatoa (
talk)
05:07, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
Shall we speak about those openings like the exchange variation of the French defence where it is sometimes felt that Black has a kind of advantage even if the position is symetric, precisely because White has to move first ? Done
I've added sections on "Reversed openings" and "Symmetrical openings" and the problems those pose for White, and specifically discuss the Exchange French.
Krakatoa (
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02:41, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
There is no section "See also". It is not compulsory to have some, but I find they add some value. Done
All in all I am really impressed by this article. It is factual, precise and well-referenced on a subject that is really not easy. At the end of this review I would like to propose it to GA-class at least. For A-class, let's wait until the end of this review :)
SyG (
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20:01, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
(Moved from the articles talk page.): Don't think headings should be in quotes. "Drawn with best play", "White to play and win" and Statistics is a short ambiguous(on it's own) word for a title. Done
Done a
peer review and this is bits I think apply.
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article. The lead is to be as concise as possible while still covering the whole article. It seems to do that. Done
If there is not a
free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?] Done
This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.[?] Done
As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?] Done
Reflist 2 has come under
criticism as it doesn't show well on various browsers and for some it makes the wording so small it can't be read. Done
I've added links, and created a few articles and sub-articles to make links to, so I think that is pretty much done. Please link anything else that you think should be linked. I do intend to create a
chess theory article, and link to that when I talk about "theorists," but that will take some work. (I want to talk about opening theory, middlegame theory, and endgame theory.) As for the lead, the guideline says it can be "up to four paragraphs" and should summarize the article well. The current lead is one paragraph (while doesn't violate the guideline, since no minimum length is specified), and I think it summarizes the article well. So I think I've addressed all the items in your peer review.
Krakatoa (
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02:06, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
The thing you linked to is entitled "Multiple columns deemed bad." I don't see how that applies to this article -- its reference list only has one column. Note 1 is followed by note 2, then note 3, note 4, and so on until the last note, which is at the bottom. That's one column, right?
Krakatoa (
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23:43, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
I've made the change now. I would not apply this to other article but only here because I think the idea is to push this article to Featured article level.
SunCreator (
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00:07, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
Thanks. Neanderthal that I am, I use Internet Explorer, so I couldn't see the problem. I'm gratified to think that you think the article could be a Featured Article. As you know, we have precious few chess article (0.2%) above even B-class.
Krakatoa (
talk)
01:56, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
Statistics section
I think consideration should be given to splitting up this section and include in other parts of the article. It's sure it's fine in context but a section with statistics might not be to welcomed by some reviewers.
SunCreator (
talk)
19:21, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
To my mind, the statistics section is in a way the most significant part of the article. It's all well and good to debate, in a vacuum, propositions like, "does White win by force from the starting position"?, "does White have an advantage, and if so, how much?", "does Black have the advantage, because White has to commit himself first?", and so on. The statistics section provides data against which such questions must be considered -- i.e. it's hard to claim that White wins by force if Black scores around 45% (including in games by the strongest players). I also think it would be weird to split this information up, apportioning a sentence to this section, a sentence to that section, and so on. All of the information in the "First move statistics" section is closed related and belongs together.
Krakatoa (
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22:20, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
They are important. Two more suggestions, how about renaming the section so the word 'Statistics' is not included. how about moving the section down to the end of the articles order, so that it like a concluding section.
SunCreator (
talk)
23:03, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
What is one supposed to name it without using the word "statistics"? "Winning percentages"? How is that better? What's the bugaboo about statistics?
Krakatoa (
talk)
23:37, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
I'm not wild about moving the statistics section down to the end. It provides important information necessary to evaluate the relative plausibility of the "Drawn with best play" and "White to play and win" arguments. It's really hiding the ball to put it at the end ("hiding the lede," as some would put it). Does putting it at the beginning violate any Wikipedia principle?
Krakatoa (
talk)
23:49, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
Okay, is see you;ve renamed it, that seems good. I can't recall where I read about it. It wasn't a guideline, but rather some talk page but I'm unable to locate it to recheck it's context. The nearest I found is
Wikipedia:NOT#STATS but that doesn't apply because this article has the statistics nicely explained.
SunCreator (
talk)
00:12, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
How about caption below the image of Wilhelm Steinitz. At first glance the image looks unrelated to the topic. I don't want to add OR, but if there is something along the lines of "Wilhelm Steinitz considered chess a draw with best play", that would enhance the image. Done
Review
tool, still thinks lead is inadequate. Looking at a (good length) suggestion of
Wikipedia:Leadhere, it seems sensible to expand the lead to be two paragraphs. Reading the
FA criteria I get the idea that concise is better, if so then it's great as it is.
SunCreator (
talk)
08:58, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
Use of capitalisation "White" "white" "Black" "black", especially in winning percentages section is not consistent. Are we happy that it's correct? Done I think(!?).
+38% =31% −31% (total 53.5%) looks unattractive. How about some other way, perhaps "Win 38% Draw 31 % Lose 31%" or putting it in full "White wins 38% draws 31%, and loses 31% giving an overall result of 53.5%". Or even removing some of it given that it's now duplicated to the table. Done
"concluded that White scored 54.1767% plus 0.001164 times White's Elo rating advantage, treating White's rating advantage as +390 if it is better than +390, or -460 if it is worse than -460." ref 10. This doesn't make sense to me at all. It is very interesting that the external reference recommends 35-[elo]-point rating deficit for White to compensate for White's advantage(!). Would seem useful to this article.
Is "Hodgson-Arkell" self evident? Rather then say "Hodgson versus Arkell" and why not go to full names
Julian Hodgson-
Keith Arkell?
Why are some moves bold while others "1.Nf3 Nf6 2.g3 g6 3.Bg2 Bg7 4.0-0 0-0 5.d3 d6" are not?
Ref 70 (Reinhard-Fischer game) is not as you might at first expect(with Fischer's claim), perhaps the comma should go outside the reference, or the sentence reworded to be clear what reference refers to what?
Is sentence wording "defended tenaciously" with ref 79 (Portisch-Tal game)
OR? Done (changed wording)
Wikipedia linking doesn't seem to like ISBN-10 and ISBN-13, perhaps it should just be ISBN. Applies to some references as well as some future reading books. DoneSunCreator (
talk)
14:26, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
Something needs to be done about "+38% =31% −31%" there, and in hundreds of other articles.
Bubba73(talk),
15:38, 19 April 2008 (UTC) Done (as to this article, not the hundreds of others; now we use W38 D31 D31 format, which I (Krakatoa) think is clearer to non-chess players).
Support This article is very well written and nicely referenced. I therefore support upgrading this article to class A. Two minor comments.
I am not sure I like the statistics table, since it doesn't add very much. Instead perhaps a few other more interesting statistics can be added. I started a threat on the talk page of the article with suggestions. If the table stays, it would be nice to centre it on the page, or even better to have the text left and the table right in that section (like the chessdiagrams below, nicely embedded in the text).
Currently the article is in the
Category:Chess. As the category page says: "It should list very few, if any, article pages directly and should mainly contain subcategories". Perhaps it would be nice to create a master category chess theory, where this article would feel very much at home. Subcategories could include
Category:Chess tactics,
Category:Chess strategy,
Category:Chess traps and
Category:Chess openings. This would be very much in line with what we have done to all the chess bio categories, we grouped them in one master category
Category:Chess biographies.
For FA, the web links in the reference should be changed, that is, they should mention when the webpage was retrieved (or accessed), for the format see
Wikipedia:Embedded_citations Done
As best I can tell, all the concerns expressed about the article (by Bubba73, SyG, and SunCreator) have now been addressed, and I think to the satisfaction of the proponents of those concerns?
A couple of other random things: (1) I like SunCreator's table (under "Winning Percentages"), but it looks a little funky to me. Is there a way to make the horizontal line for database 1475-2008 go all the way across, and to make all the vertical lines go all the way down? (2) I think the first two words in the article title should be hyphenated: First-move advantage in chess. Anyone else have an opinion on that?
I am not sure I understand your comment on the statistics table, as in my browser there is a horizontal line all the way across, but I am using Firefox. Is it because you may be using Internet Explorer ?
I agree the current title may be slightly confusing, as someone may think it is about the first "move advantage" that a player gets in chess. I would like to have the opinion of other editors before we change it, though.
As you can see above I have changed my assessment from Comment to Approve for A-class. As Bubba73's comments seemed to imply he agreed as well, we just need the following steps:
get the approval of a third reviewer. Both
SunCreator (on this page) and
Voorlandt (on the Talk page of the article) have done a review and provided some comments, but none has clearly stated they approved the A-class.
wait until 3rd May 2008, as the article has been nominated on 12th April and the review needs to last at least three weeks. (frustrating, clearly, but gives enough time to everyone to join in).
wait one week after the last comment has been made, in order to ensure noone has a last-minute objection to be made.
Above, I also said I support the A class. However they are plenty of comments here that can improve the article (see for instance Bubba's comments, and my comment on the refs). A lot of them minor, so they should be easy to fix. Can something be done about the layout of this review? It is very hard to follow as comments are scattered all over the place in no hierarchical structure. Perhaps all comments that are no longer relevant can be removed, and all other comments grouped?
Voorlandt (
talk)
16:27, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
To me this article seems GA class right now, should it be proposed as GA or should it continue to be improved and go for FA class?
SunCreator (
talk)
20:08, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
As far as I understand it is a bit different, as A-class is defined by each WikiProject, while both FA-class and GA-class have "transversal" processes about reviews (meaning any subject can be proposed). In some WikiProjects the A-class is considered just a corridor before FA-class, in others it can be a definite state. For example
Bughouse Chess will have a very hard time to become FA-class because some of the remaining issues (e.g. history) just need sources that do not appear to exist!
SyG (
talk)
15:04, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
Close out the nomination?
I count four Supports (
Bubba73,
SyG,
SunCreator, and
Voorlandt), one more than necessary, and no opposition. It's officially May 3 Wikipedia time, and I believe more than one week since the last comment. Does someone want to close out the nomination?
Krakatoa (
talk)
02:42, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
Yes, I see noone opposing to this article being uprated, so I shall close the review and declare this article has successfully passed the A-class review. Well done, and thanks to all for your work!
SyG (
talk)
07:26, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
Problem with the chess portal?
There seems to be a problem with the chess portal, specifically the recently added article
First-move advantage in chess. Now that it's an A-class article, it's been added four places on the
Selected article list. If one looks at, say, space 10,
First-move advantage in chess appears to be the article assigned to that space. But if one clicks on the space 10 link on the left, it shows the article for
Emanuel Lasker. The same thing happens, with a different article instead of the Lasker one, if one clicks on any of the other three places to which the article is assigned. Can someone fix this, please? Thanks!
Krakatoa (
talk)
15:50, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
The recent article the
American Chess Congress has complete crosstables for all nine editions except the 1921 eight American Chess Congress in Atlantic City. I added a few results from what I could find online, but it would be nice if we could complete it. It is probably covered in either of:
Gaige, Jeremy (1974), Chess Tournament Crosstables: Vol IV: 1921-1930, Philadelphia
Di Felice, Gino (2006), Chess Results, 1921-1930: A Comprehensive Record with 940 Tournament Crosstables and 210 Match Scores, McFarland,
ISBN978-0786426423
Queen sacrifice is listed on the main page as needing work, and it does. Or do we really need an article on queen sacs seperate from
sacrifice (chess)? None of the three chess encyclopedias that I have have an article "queen sacrifice".
Bubba73(talk),
15:05, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
For the time being I do not see why "queen sacrifice" could not be merged into "sacrifice". I prefer to have one consistent article that several stubs.
SyG (
talk)
15:38, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
It could also be merged into
Queen (chess). Longer term I'm thinking that the piece articles, would be including material about piece use.
For example in the Queen topic you would cover
Opening: Development of Queen into enemy position early (eg
Scholars mate,
Center Game) and development not into enemy position (eg Nimzo-Indian with Qc2).
Middlegame: Queen attack against enemy king with other pieces eg. pawn(with fixed pawn wedge), Knight(Knight on 5th/6th rank attacking 7th rank pawns), with Bishop=(on weak squares in front of king) also
Greek gift sacrifice, with rooks(back rank and 7th rank attacks),
Queen Sacrifice
And I don't think "how to" is a problem if you approach it correctly. Don't say what to do - tell how it is done. Don't say "move your queen here", tell what masters have done and have written about.
Bubba73(talk),
04:34, 7 May 2008 (UTC)
I think
queen sacrifice has more to do with sacrifices than it has to do with queens, so if it is to be merged, the sacrifice article is the proper target. However, I don't know if this is really necessary, The Art of Sacrifice in Chess has a whole chapter devoted to the queen sacrifice so in terms of notability, I think it is reasonable to call it notable enough for a separate article. Combine this with the certain romanticism there is around sacrificing the queen, and I can understand a certain interest from the reader in having a separate article on queen sacrifices. Also, any merging will need a patient editor who is good at tailoring. The present
sacrifice (chess) article looks like a patchwork. It is not a bad or useless article, but I feel the information is a bit all over the place (I'll admit as a contributor to that article that I may have contributed to the problem there), and merging
queen sacrifice in with that via the "copy and paste text dump" method will make the problem worse.
Sjakkalle(Check!)11:48, 7 May 2008 (UTC)
I agree that queen sacrifice is sufficiently notable. I can think of some games to illustrate "real" queen sacs. If anyone wants to follow this up, post a mesage on my Talk page.
Real vs pseudo-sacs. Not a rigid distinction, it's bounded by calculation range.
Positional vs tactical sacs.
Big sacs (e.g. Q) vs small ones (P, exchange).
Common sacs, e.g.: of B on h7 or f7 (by White) and on h2 or f2 (by Black); exchange sacs, especially on c6 / c3; various sacs by White on e6 in Sicilian.
Gambit openings, including "gambits" played later, e.g. Chatard-Alekhine in orthodox French, some variations of (semi-)Slav.
How to deal with sacs: take and try to defend; partial or total return of sac'd material at an opportune moment; ignore; counter-attack.
Would probably take at least 2 passes to get it right, as details will have to be spawned into daughter articles.
Philcha (
talk)
10:24, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
Could someone please search for references for
Antonio Fistonić so that the article can be kept? If the person never existed, then the article should be tagged for deletion. --
Eastmain (
talk)
21:39, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
Looks like a good candidate for deletion, could even be a hoax, as 'Fist' appears in both the subject and author's names. He's certainly obscure if Mibelz hasn't heard of him.
Brittle heaven (
talk)
22:44, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
Sources I've found while researching edits to
Wilhelm Steinitz and
Adolf Anderssen indicate that the idea of a recognised world champion goes back to the mid-1840s and only gradually became clearer. Among other things that pulls the rung from under the distinction between official and unofficial world champions. I therefore think
World Chess Championship needs a rewrite.
Talk:World Chess Championship summarises the main points. Please comment there.
Philcha (
talk)
10:04, 9 May 2008 (UTC)