Caliphate
I believe this article is stable, undisputed, thoroughly gone through by many Muslim, and non-Muslim editors, and represents a good explanation of what the Caliphate is, the position it holds in Sunni Islam, it's history with diagrams, the basic structure of the system, with reference to classical Islamic lawyers, and the hope or threat of it's re-establishment. Aaliyah Stevens 23:05, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
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Caliphate
I believe this article is stable, undisputed, thoroughly gone through by many Muslim, and non-Muslim editors, and represents a good explanation of what the Caliphate is, the position it holds in Sunni Islam, it's history with diagrams, the basic structure of the system, with reference to classical Islamic lawyers, and the hope or threat of it's re-establishment. Aaliyah Stevens 23:05, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
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- Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==. [?]
- Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==. [?]
- Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Wikipedia:Summary style. [?]
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- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.”
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2] [?]
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- i intend to make some specific recommendations on this article in a moment. ITAQALLAH 20:45, 13 February 2007 (UTC)