I would adore some feedback on this article. THANK YOU
Melodieofmovement ( talk) 00:20, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Hi,
I've created a page about Tourism in Yorkshire. Yorkshire is the largest English county but there's no dedicated page about tourism in the region.
Can you please have a look to see if meets Wikipedia criteria?
Many thanks
TaleTreader ( talk) 12:36, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
The Yorkshire Moors is an area of outstanding natural beauty according to whom? designated as a National Park in 1952 citation needed and situated in the county of North Yorkshire. It contains one of the largest expanses of heater moorland in the UK. citation needed
The Yorkshire Dales National Park was established in 1954 citation needed and offers visitors outstanding scenery, a variety of wildlife and recreation options. neutrality is disputed
How can I achieve sufficient neutrality? I tried to be very careful in just stating facts that can be verified by the third-party sources I cited.
Karl Richter ( talk) 15:41, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Golfsmith is one of the largest golf and tennis specialty retailers in the United States. citation needed
Golfsmith offers a broad selection of major-brand golf and tennis equipment, according to whom?
Founded by Carl and Barbara Paul in 1967, citation needed
Golfsmith began as a custom golf club components supplier. citation needed
As of August 2010, the company had expanded to comprise over 75 retail stores in 21 states, citation needed
...and so on.
Stick to facts from independent reliable sources.
Also, please read WP:BFAQ. Chzz ► 02:37, 7 October 2010 (UTC)
I posted this article and it was deleted as adding nothing new to Foreign purchases of real estate in Turkey.
However, this article is focussed on post crunch Turkey, and also on explaining the buying process. Since deletion I have added additional information on how the constitutional reforms recently voted on could change the buying process.
Can you give any advice on getting this article published...
I mean, I could add a section after the intro on why Turkish property is more popular after the financial downturn than before, with a lot of current details and sources to verify, but I wanted to focus on the buying process.
Hoping to receive feedback that article was done correctly. I followed guidelines and read related sections so believe I am off to a good start. Hyperlinks and footnotes/sources provided. I work for the organization this woman founded, so this is done with permission.
Catalystorg (
talk) 16:45, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Any pointers will be helpful. Thanks in advance.
Lwsellersjr (
talk) 16:46, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Constructive criticism, suggestions and feedback will be much appreciated.
Thank you!
JessGra ( talk) 18:40, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
(these are examples only; it all needs verification) Chzz ► 03:01, 7 October 2010 (UTC)
I just published my first article. This article was created with the idea that Carrie Underwood has had so many appearances that they are cluttering her main article, and a separate page would be more organized. Any feedback is appreciated!
MusicAgain (
talk) 19:13, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Need help posting this page.
Athunt (
talk) 22:10, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Please assist me clearing the "new unreviewed article" tag. Thanks!
Grambles12 ( talk) 23:10, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Please review this and if all is in good order, upload it to this site. You may contact me at we1087@yahoo.com (Wendy Jones) with any questions or concerns, Thanks!!
Wee1087 ( talk) 23:53, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Lived in Portsmouth, Virginia, citation needed and received an A.A. degree from St. Bernard College, citation needed a B.A. from the University of Virginia in philosophy, citation needed a Master of Arts in International and Comparative Education, citation needed and an Ed.D. in philosophy of education from Teachers College, Columbia University. citation needed He taught in the public schools of New York and New Jersey, citation needed and at several colleges and universities, including the University of Virginia and Virginia Commonwealth University. citation needed He was also professor and chairman of the Department of Education at Chicago State University. citation needed
...and so on. Chzz ► 03:17, 7 October 2010 (UTC)
Please review this article. I've added reliable sources for the content in the article. There were many more sources available, e.g. CNET has 20 articles and eWeek has 60 articles about Somasegar, but I've tried to be selective about the ones I added.
Navmehta (
talk) 23:56, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
I would adore some feedback on this article. THANK YOU
Melodieofmovement ( talk) 00:20, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Hi,
I've created a page about Tourism in Yorkshire. Yorkshire is the largest English county but there's no dedicated page about tourism in the region.
Can you please have a look to see if meets Wikipedia criteria?
Many thanks
TaleTreader ( talk) 12:36, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
The Yorkshire Moors is an area of outstanding natural beauty according to whom? designated as a National Park in 1952 citation needed and situated in the county of North Yorkshire. It contains one of the largest expanses of heater moorland in the UK. citation needed
The Yorkshire Dales National Park was established in 1954 citation needed and offers visitors outstanding scenery, a variety of wildlife and recreation options. neutrality is disputed
How can I achieve sufficient neutrality? I tried to be very careful in just stating facts that can be verified by the third-party sources I cited.
Karl Richter ( talk) 15:41, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Golfsmith is one of the largest golf and tennis specialty retailers in the United States. citation needed
Golfsmith offers a broad selection of major-brand golf and tennis equipment, according to whom?
Founded by Carl and Barbara Paul in 1967, citation needed
Golfsmith began as a custom golf club components supplier. citation needed
As of August 2010, the company had expanded to comprise over 75 retail stores in 21 states, citation needed
...and so on.
Stick to facts from independent reliable sources.
Also, please read WP:BFAQ. Chzz ► 02:37, 7 October 2010 (UTC)
I posted this article and it was deleted as adding nothing new to Foreign purchases of real estate in Turkey.
However, this article is focussed on post crunch Turkey, and also on explaining the buying process. Since deletion I have added additional information on how the constitutional reforms recently voted on could change the buying process.
Can you give any advice on getting this article published...
I mean, I could add a section after the intro on why Turkish property is more popular after the financial downturn than before, with a lot of current details and sources to verify, but I wanted to focus on the buying process.
Hoping to receive feedback that article was done correctly. I followed guidelines and read related sections so believe I am off to a good start. Hyperlinks and footnotes/sources provided. I work for the organization this woman founded, so this is done with permission.
Catalystorg (
talk) 16:45, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Any pointers will be helpful. Thanks in advance.
Lwsellersjr (
talk) 16:46, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Constructive criticism, suggestions and feedback will be much appreciated.
Thank you!
JessGra ( talk) 18:40, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
(these are examples only; it all needs verification) Chzz ► 03:01, 7 October 2010 (UTC)
I just published my first article. This article was created with the idea that Carrie Underwood has had so many appearances that they are cluttering her main article, and a separate page would be more organized. Any feedback is appreciated!
MusicAgain (
talk) 19:13, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Need help posting this page.
Athunt (
talk) 22:10, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Please assist me clearing the "new unreviewed article" tag. Thanks!
Grambles12 ( talk) 23:10, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Please review this and if all is in good order, upload it to this site. You may contact me at we1087@yahoo.com (Wendy Jones) with any questions or concerns, Thanks!!
Wee1087 ( talk) 23:53, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
Lived in Portsmouth, Virginia, citation needed and received an A.A. degree from St. Bernard College, citation needed a B.A. from the University of Virginia in philosophy, citation needed a Master of Arts in International and Comparative Education, citation needed and an Ed.D. in philosophy of education from Teachers College, Columbia University. citation needed He taught in the public schools of New York and New Jersey, citation needed and at several colleges and universities, including the University of Virginia and Virginia Commonwealth University. citation needed He was also professor and chairman of the Department of Education at Chicago State University. citation needed
...and so on. Chzz ► 03:17, 7 October 2010 (UTC)
Please review this article. I've added reliable sources for the content in the article. There were many more sources available, e.g. CNET has 20 articles and eWeek has 60 articles about Somasegar, but I've tried to be selective about the ones I added.
Navmehta (
talk) 23:56, 6 October 2010 (UTC)