Kes (Star Trek)

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I've listed this article for peer review because I am debating on whether or not to bring it through the WP:FAC process. I completely rewrote the article, but I am frankly unsure of the prose. I have been looking at it for so long now that I would appreciate any feedback and advice on if it is even remotely ready for a FAC. I am primarily concerned with the prose for the "Analysis" section in particular.

I am pinging @ J Milburn: as they were a great help for the GAN review. I will leave this peer review open for a few months (ideally if there is enough commentary to support that amount of time) to avoid rushing anything and to make sure I give this the amount of time it needs.

Thank you in advance. I really do appreciate any help to better improve this article. To be clear, I would completely understand if it is determined that this would not be ready for a FAC. Aoba47 ( talk) 18:15, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Comments from PMC

Putting myself down here for comments. If I don't say anything within a week, please give me the gears :) ♠ PMC♠ (talk) 02:31, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Thank you! Aoba47 ( talk) 16:57, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply