After some significant editing today, I would like to request a review of the current state of this article, as well as suggestions on how to improve it. I believe that most of the concerns expressed in its unsuccesful FAC bid from about a year ago have been addressed. My major concern is with the "Rules" section, particularly how to appropriately reference something of this nature.
Thanks! — ptk✰ fgs 21:24, 5 August 2006 (UTC)
In the paragraph beginning A checker borne off from a lower point than indicated on the die still counts as the full die, I like that sentence, but I don't like the rest of the paragraph. Aside from the fact that I don't think the rest of the paragraph necessarily illustrates the point made in that sentence, I think that the sentence would make sense to the reader if the rest of the paragraph was removed and the first sentence alone was attached to the previous paragraph.
I'll take a look at some more of it later. -- DanielNuyu 06:39, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
After some significant editing today, I would like to request a review of the current state of this article, as well as suggestions on how to improve it. I believe that most of the concerns expressed in its unsuccesful FAC bid from about a year ago have been addressed. My major concern is with the "Rules" section, particularly how to appropriately reference something of this nature.
Thanks! — ptk✰ fgs 21:24, 5 August 2006 (UTC)
In the paragraph beginning A checker borne off from a lower point than indicated on the die still counts as the full die, I like that sentence, but I don't like the rest of the paragraph. Aside from the fact that I don't think the rest of the paragraph necessarily illustrates the point made in that sentence, I think that the sentence would make sense to the reader if the rest of the paragraph was removed and the first sentence alone was attached to the previous paragraph.
I'll take a look at some more of it later. -- DanielNuyu 06:39, 9 August 2006 (UTC)