The article was promoted by User:SandyGeorgia 02:49, 24 June 2008 [1].
Self-nominator: I'm nominating this article for featured article because it has recently been expanded with new sources, new information, and more comprehensively. -- VegitaU ( talk) 20:58, 17 June 2008 (UTC) reply
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— Bellhalla ( talk) 13:49, 19 June 2008 (UTC) reply
This is my first look at the article after the recent changes, and this is just a brief look. Here are some points to address:
That's all I see after a brief skim through the page. It's late for me, so I can't do more detailed review or editing now. I should have more time tomorrow to review and edit. -- Aude ( talk) 22:37, 19 June 2008 (UTC) reply
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That's all for now. I will be back for more review and try to make time to help address points myself. -- Aude ( talk) 16:08, 21 June 2008 (UTC) reply
The article was promoted by User:SandyGeorgia 02:49, 24 June 2008 [1].
Self-nominator: I'm nominating this article for featured article because it has recently been expanded with new sources, new information, and more comprehensively. -- VegitaU ( talk) 20:58, 17 June 2008 (UTC) reply
Comments
— Bellhalla ( talk) 13:49, 19 June 2008 (UTC) reply
This is my first look at the article after the recent changes, and this is just a brief look. Here are some points to address:
That's all I see after a brief skim through the page. It's late for me, so I can't do more detailed review or editing now. I should have more time tomorrow to review and edit. -- Aude ( talk) 22:37, 19 June 2008 (UTC) reply
More comments
That's all for now. I will be back for more review and try to make time to help address points myself. -- Aude ( talk) 16:08, 21 June 2008 (UTC) reply