I want this to become a good article in line with the rest of the main FF characters. Sir Crazyswordsman 15:22, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
I'm not much into these trivia sections for all the characters. Is there a way to include their birthdays in the In-Universe section of the character infobox, and simply integrate other facts into other sections? ~ Hibana 20:06, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
I'm concerned by the length of the biography section. At this point, it's not much more than a recap of the story of Final Fantasy VI from Terra's perspective. And, frankly, there are better places to detail that story, so it seems rather redundant. Trim it by a paragraph or two and tighten the prose, and it would flow a great deal better. More out-of-universe information would be greatly appreciated, sources permitting. As it currently stands, it's so unbalanced towards in-universe material, it reads more like an entry on a fansite than an encyclopedia article. On the other hand, referencing is generally very good, though there are a few things that should probably be cited, like the descriptive data (age, the first listed height, birthday, etc.) in the infobox and elsewhere. I echo Hibana's comments about not particularly liking the trivia section (if it's trivial, then surely it's not encyclopedic?). Most of the points there can probably be moved into the introduction without much effort. The only thing I'm not sure would fit there is the birthday, but I'm not really sure what that particular information adds to the article, anyway. – Sean Daugherty (talk) 21:45, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
I noticed that her hair was kept blonde in the Final Fantasy VI: The Interactive CG Game video. Unfortunately, there's very little information on the video except that Lostlevels.org article, much less why those three characters were chosen for it. ~ Hibana 16:26, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Er, why is this a separate article at all? There are two sentences of real-world information, followed by eight paragraphs describing the plot of Final Fantasy VI and three paragraphs covering a portion of the gameplay of FFVI. Why are we recapping FFVI's plot and gameplay in multiple articles, instead of covering that info in Final Fantasy VI? - A Man In Bl♟ck ( conspire | past ops) 18:43, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Other issues:
That's all I can spot for now. - A Man In Bl♟ck ( conspire | past ops) 19:18, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
I want this to become a good article in line with the rest of the main FF characters. Sir Crazyswordsman 15:22, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
I'm not much into these trivia sections for all the characters. Is there a way to include their birthdays in the In-Universe section of the character infobox, and simply integrate other facts into other sections? ~ Hibana 20:06, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
I'm concerned by the length of the biography section. At this point, it's not much more than a recap of the story of Final Fantasy VI from Terra's perspective. And, frankly, there are better places to detail that story, so it seems rather redundant. Trim it by a paragraph or two and tighten the prose, and it would flow a great deal better. More out-of-universe information would be greatly appreciated, sources permitting. As it currently stands, it's so unbalanced towards in-universe material, it reads more like an entry on a fansite than an encyclopedia article. On the other hand, referencing is generally very good, though there are a few things that should probably be cited, like the descriptive data (age, the first listed height, birthday, etc.) in the infobox and elsewhere. I echo Hibana's comments about not particularly liking the trivia section (if it's trivial, then surely it's not encyclopedic?). Most of the points there can probably be moved into the introduction without much effort. The only thing I'm not sure would fit there is the birthday, but I'm not really sure what that particular information adds to the article, anyway. – Sean Daugherty (talk) 21:45, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
I noticed that her hair was kept blonde in the Final Fantasy VI: The Interactive CG Game video. Unfortunately, there's very little information on the video except that Lostlevels.org article, much less why those three characters were chosen for it. ~ Hibana 16:26, 10 August 2006 (UTC)
Er, why is this a separate article at all? There are two sentences of real-world information, followed by eight paragraphs describing the plot of Final Fantasy VI and three paragraphs covering a portion of the gameplay of FFVI. Why are we recapping FFVI's plot and gameplay in multiple articles, instead of covering that info in Final Fantasy VI? - A Man In Bl♟ck ( conspire | past ops) 18:43, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
Other issues:
That's all I can spot for now. - A Man In Bl♟ck ( conspire | past ops) 19:18, 12 August 2006 (UTC)